View Full Version : LouRam v. Vaughn (3-0)
vaughn187 10-10-2005, 12:46 PM 3-5 bars... short battle but w/e
i really don't care who vote as long as explained
first to 5 votes 3-0 k.o.
verse due whenever you decide
checkin first and then i'll spit first if need be...
vaughn187 10-10-2005, 05:22 PM alright LOURAM whenever you ready for to check in we could get it poppin...
ZuLou 10-10-2005, 06:11 PM check in, I'll drop later on today
ZuLou 10-11-2005, 05:28 PM my bad, i was gonna spit yesterday, but i went out wit my peeps. Here go my rhymes. Hey, brook, don't leave me hangin' u better answer this shit.
For newcomers, vaughn187 used to have the name Brooklynite, and I've battled him before beating him 3-0 KO. My verse might make more sense if u know this.
Brook is too-lame, embarassin' like dook-stains, After this battle, he'll have that heavy feeling: true-shame/
So I guess U'd say the Truth-reigns, but can you handle it? I'll have this same nigga beat under two-names!/
Them wack rhymes you posted, we peeped-those-lines, now your rhymes make us turn away like detour-signs!/
Trys to claim he "pops caps" while he reloads-nines, but he couldn't make a "shot" from the freethrow-line/
Fuck wit me, it's obvious you will get your shit-burned, stay on my balls so much you'd be my Presidential Intern/(Woddup, Lewinsky!)
How I whooped his ass last time, i thought this bitch-learned; try to keep his shit "together" like chicks who want they tits-"firm"/
Last time I had you mesmerized, so go ahead and hand me the KO again till u learn to come wit some better-rhymes/
Al least it wasn't televised, Look at this nigga beggin-twice, your time has gone, I'll have this "1" nigga "8" (ate) up "7" times/*
My rhymes so "hot", I'm "baking"-this-clown-I'm-murkin, cuz yo material's remedial, so I'm taking-this-bout-for-certain/
Just like some wet paper, I'll-break him-wit-all-my-verses, and yet his "comebacks" are wack, like Mase-without-the-cursin'/**
* Play on his name, Vaughn187
**Comeback, meaning like a response to an insult, but used in the same context as Mase's comeback, meaning the returning of someone. (When mase came back, he said he wouldn't curse in his lyrics no more).
ZuLou 10-11-2005, 06:45 PM http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=641585#post641585
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52768&page=4
vaughn187 10-12-2005, 12:27 PM iight by the end of the day i'll post...
vaughn187 10-14-2005, 03:14 AM you are sacrifice, kill you in ya afterlife,
clearly seeing battles slipping through ya hands in BLACK N WHITE....
ya tactful mic, skills bring my tracks to light,
rams only nibble herbs so for raw shit ya have to Bite....
NAH THAT AINT ME
My acid writes, come plastard dikes other words i rip through ya crew...
break full circles ankles like hot by first assassination i skip to my lou...
ya lyrics is threw, and i'm starting to feel like my ligaments torn...
and showing that RAMS are nothing how i could grip a bull by the horns...
soon to get scorned, cuz everything but ya book cutting starting to get worse....
now when ginsu bibles will be the only time "YOUR RIPPING A VERSE"...
my lyrics been schooled now its get its license to kill and will merk you....
bars like duck, duck, goose how they touch craniums and peel out Full Circle....
shit i really didn't see this shit no bull shit holla at me thought with some votes likes coming....
vaughn187 10-14-2005, 03:30 AM http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=644167&posted=1#post644167
too sleepy to do another one do it tomorrow until then we can comense the votes...
vaughn187 10-14-2005, 12:44 PM http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=644408#post644408
Cartel 10-14-2005, 04:05 PM nice battle..id vote but im wit lou so i cant be biased..but nice nice battle..
ZuLou 10-15-2005, 01:13 AM uppin
ZuLou 10-15-2005, 01:01 PM uppin
SiNiS 10-15-2005, 07:00 PM FLow: Tie
Multies: L
Wordplay: L
Punches: L
personals: Tie
VOte: LouRaM
Good battle!
ONE
ZuLou 10-15-2005, 10:00 PM thats 1-0
Micsachek 10-16-2005, 02:22 PM this was a good, battle, i can tell you two know each other, nice disses but i do feel louram did come a bit harder then vaughn, there was some nice punches from both sides but i think lou took it with the personals, vaughn could had a better chance if he would have came harder with those but here is the breakdown....
punches:tie
wordplay:tie
personals:louram
consistancy:tie
multis:louram
overall:louram
winner:louram
nice battle both of you, you both seem neck and neck but i think lou pulled out in the lead with the personals and that is what helps win battles and in this case, thats what won it, stay out ~1~
ZuLou 10-17-2005, 12:15 AM that's 2-0 to me. Man, I hope I dont KO u again, vaughn. That's bad for YOUR publicity.
flow - lou
punches - lou
personals - vaugn
metas - lou
multies - lou
vote - lou
nice battle yall
vaughn187 10-17-2005, 12:26 PM K.O. ed twice its all good though this battle was my first real battle in a while i don't mind getting KO'ed over the web, UNLESS....it was gonna get me a deal but you did your thing keep up and elevating...
ZuLou 10-17-2005, 05:40 PM u too, man. Keep elevating
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