15 lines or less....first to 4 votes wins 3 in a row tko... due bywednesday morning

i uhh guess he aint showin up...surprise..surprise

fucking dumb ass, stick to your due date

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=638187#post638187

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=640579#post640579

check

This front'n motherfucker, dog, take off that mask/
There's no way you can hide that you're "Hip Hop's trash"/
cause every battle you get RAPED cause you're "HIP HOP's Ass",
i'm not done putting little rap groupie on blast/

c'mon duke, yousa born loser,how i abuse ya/
must be illegal like under-age sex with 2 juniors /
man you shoulda called your crew sooner/
cause you chances of death, just doubled like 2 tumors/

now you can't turn to your homey's cause the love gone/
think niggas feel your pain? you should stick to making fake LOVE SONGS (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=51143&highlight=cartel) /

if you think you a rap heavy weight than 'bench this'/
Dog you ain't, 'reckless' cause you reppin TEX-as/
swear you top ten but don't make the check list/
you and Lou-Ram 'senseless', cause you 'frenchkiss' and do 'frenchtwists'/

Todos Migentes, look now he's dead, shoulda murked with 5 lines in the challengers thread

haha....how many words you gotta rhyme the same kid hip hop.. to hip hop...french to french...but shit..ill go ahead and murk you

Hey, u wanna talk shit, Crim, talk shit. but don't ever put me in your rhymes unless you wanna get murked TWICE. This aint no fuckin' PiC-NIC, BITCH.

look kid...you look like a fucking cunt with teeth
claimin you bad..while the only thing you punch is keys
fucking faggot...trying to act like he's an actual king
hip hops ass?..then your the pussy..and im the vaginal cream
dog whats on your mind..constantly rappin bout ass sex
lets be real.. your a faggot who loves dick in-de-end like aztecs
why even fuck with hoes..kid your just yearning to fail
cuz the only pussy that you get equipped with fur and a tail
Claimed I stole your lines..like I was reading your raps
I can sum your whole verse by .. garbage.. without a beat in the back
thinks he's black...he looks like a mexican who lost his tan
and added to that he stole my handle like jacking pots and pans
damn kid...your trash so i guess its clear you gotta- hate
but honestly...i havnt seen a "dick" this ashamed since water-gate (whoa)

yup....come on now kid...you on my level??? shiiiit

uppin for votes...no freeposting til the votes are in ...cool?

explanations

...line four "hip hops ass?..then your the pussy..and im the vaginal cream" - he called me hip hops ass in his verse...so i twisted it on him
line 6 - in-de-end like aztecs...in-de-end (indian) aztecs are indians
line 12 - stole my handle...his name is same as mine..but im registered b4..check it out..and pots and pans have handles
line 14 - havnt seen a "dick" this ashamed since water gate..richard nixons nickname was dick..got caught at watergate..

and homeboy...if you read that shit...you would see it aint a love song...lol..u fucking suck

uppin

uppin for votes...no freeposting til the votes are in ...cool? you don't even follow your own rules......clown

and homeboy...if you read that shit...you would see it aint a love song...lol..u fucking suck
I called it a fake love song

explanations

...line four "hip hops ass?..then your the pussy..and im the vaginal cream" - he called me hip hops ass in his verse...so i twisted it on him
line 6 - in-de-end like aztecs...in-de-end (indian) aztecs are indians
line 12 - stole my handle...his name is same as mine..but im registered b4..check it out..and pots and pans have handles
line 14 - havnt seen a "dick" this ashamed since water gate..richard nixons nickname was dick..got caught at watergate..
you gonna explain your whole verse? the fuck. let that shit speak for itself. dog i'm just a beginner with this, and i got you all in a frenzy. calling your boy to come talk shit. I thought you would have been a better rapper than that, cause you're a "vet". you're too cocky

This is how it broke down:
Structure: Cartel, not crim but cartel
Style: cartel
Flow: Crim
Punches: cartel
Similies: cartel
Vote goes to: Cartel
Yup, I think cartel is on another level comparied to crim. But cool lil battle.
Props to both.

1-0 cartel

1-0 cartel
thanx for the input

uppin

somebody plz fucking vote

can we move this to pending votes

uppin

ok this is starting to piss me off

my last two battles i havnt got enough votes...

to even finish the battle.....

Wack both fuckin wack... kill your self u fuckin faggot

do you not have something better to do than join a rap site?? get a hobby man..seriously...you need to get a life kid...people are on here actually trying to get better....you have no real posts...its all bullshit...do you hate your life?...really...think about it...i feel sorry for kids like you

do you not have something better to do than join a rap site?? get a hobby man..seriously...you need to get a life kid...people are on here actually trying to get better....you have no real posts...its all bullshit...do you hate your life?...really...think about it...i feel sorry for kids like you
Tryin get better with what??!! None of you mutha fuckas gonna take a step further... there r million like your sorry asses doin it on the streets!!! Not on the internet, u lame ass faggot. You tellin me to get a life!!! If u understand what I just said. You'd really get your fatass off that computer.. FOR GOOD!!!

Tryin get better with what??!! None of you mutha fuckas gonna take a step further... there r million like your sorry asses doin it on the streets!!! Not on the internet, u lame ass faggot. You tellin me to get a life!!! If u understand what I just said. You'd really get your fatass off that computer.. FOR GOOD!!!
why you tryna tear people down? if you don't got a vote or constructive critism then just K.I.M.

why you tryna tear people down? if you don't got a vote or constructive critism then just K.I.M.
I just voted and I'll vote again u fuckin monkey ass nigger
Both sucks
Close this lame thread!!!

haha..in the streets??? and what the fuck are they doing??? i got studio time at luminous sounds in dallas texas bitch...i gotta homeboy graduated from full sail recording school who's recorded for wayne, twista, common, etc...ive met the motherfuckers...dont talk to me about doing something...u holla at me when you spit a freestyle with twista in the building...your pathetic...acting so tough on the internet....in real life your a little bitch...scared of confrontation and would never dream of calling a black kid a nigger....cuz thats how pussies get killed..are you really this much of a loser that you have to post in threads on the internet to get attention..lol...time to rethink your life plan man...i heard mcdonalds is hiring..lol

I just voted and I'll vote again u fuckin monkey ass nigger
Both sucks
Close this lame thread!!!
wannabe kkk

wannabe kkk
better than being a fuckin monkey

Punches: Cartel
Personals: Cartel
Wordplay: Cartel
Mets/Similes: Cartel
Flow: Crim
Multi's: Cartel
Consistency: Cartel
Complexity: Cartel
Structure: Tie

Vote: Cartel

Basically a one-sided battle..but good verses from both nonetheless

Punches: cartel
Wordplay: cartel
Metaphors: tie
Flow:tie
Multi's:n/a
Consistency: cartel
Complexity: n/a
Vote:Cartel

it wasn't as bad as it looked... cartel came harder but crim had better set ups just didn't finish at all... both could've elevated a bit but decent battle...

3-0 cartel

^^^^good battle, you got skills. i'm learning more every time battle

yeah u came hard on that one... i had to work...thought i was finna lose it..ha

^^ you better stay in the studio and keep getting better. texas is already making noise these days

return the favor vote on my shit v. LOURAM

Cartel wins 3-0 KO, Good battle guys