Rules:
Everyone should know the basic rules. No bitching or fighting in the threads. Or shit talking. 1st offense results in 1 docked vote, 2nd offense results in dq. Everyone must vote on atleast 1 other topical or you will be docked a vote.
How to win:
If your opponent no shows, (IF YOU NO SHOW YOU WILL BANNED FROM THE NEXT TOPICAL TOURNEY EVENT)
or 3-0 Ko or a 4-1 ko or a first to 5. If a vote is placed as a tie each will get 1 vote a piece. and if it goes to 5-5 i will be the deciding vote.

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On most cases extensions will be discussed between me and your opponent.
Length: Up to 60 lines

Have fun and enjoy.


Topic:
You have a dream that is a vision/prophecy of a Holy War that will occur. You see the signs of where it takes place and when it will happen. Describe what you see, where it's at and what happens.
**Note you can add a hook if you want and dialogue, this will not count against your line limit**

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Hey guys, this is Adam's sister. Adam told me to come on and tell you all that his verse might not be done in time for the due date, he is in the hospital due to lung failiure, he's due out of there on Friday, but if anything changes I'll come and keep you updated, sorry for the inconvienence, take care, byebye.

*noted... he will be replaced, he shouldnt get mad.. health is more important at this time than a topical tourney*

the person who is coming in for adam lilp who is it? will they post there verse in time? do they even know there in the tourny yet ? ill be dropping my verse later today

I'll replace Adam Lil P....

Hmmm, facing Devo-D again (this will be our 3rd battle), getting interesting.

This my check in!

THE DREAM

fuck dreams i thought dreams wasn't for -real-
but the one i had was strange very -surreal-
i saw very distinctive images playing on my -mind-
a threat to mankind they was there to make me -remind-
seeing angels falling from the heavens -above-
surrounded by black crows and only one -dove-
the dark lord gathering warriors with shamless -souls-
i should tell me foes the devil is on foot -patrol-
seeing different places of where this may take -place-
i replace my thoughts as i silently say -grace-
dark clouds moving rapidly in the heavinley -sky-
i sigh and ask my self whats the meaning -why-
clouds in my visions flames in there -too-
it was only me who -knew- a holy war was to -occur-
i couldnt understand where, as the visions were -blur-
demons angels and masses of blood -shed-
the lord and the evil which one wil be -dead-

AFTER I AWAKE
( Still In Dream, think i am awake but i am not! )

i awake still dreaming and strange things begin to take -place-
i stare into the night sky and look into -space-
this is were the battle was going to -be-
in the heavens above i could see i pray and i -plea-
i couldnt erase my thoughts but the stars never -lie-
consolations of angles and demons in the dark -sky-
i realised that this will be the end of -days-
as i gaze the only thing to do is be of -praise-
bright rays of light shining upon -me-
the war was happeing in the sky i could -see-
exactley like my dreams i see angels -falling-
and demons shredding tearing and -mauling-
angels and all good being left for -dead-
a wide spread of evil clouds a mouldy -red-
one bright beam enters the night -air-
filling it with hope like god had answered my -prayer-
aware of the danger and the trouble evil had -caused-
every thing paused and the fighting was -calmed-
people angles and demons all had been -harmed-
then a mighty figure face shaped out of white -cloud-
looked powerfull and proud so he shouted -aloud-
"all this fighting shall be stopped"
the demons whent back underground the angels back to the -top-

-Finally awoken-

i awake and i shake and think with great -care-
was this dream for real or just really a -nightmare-
i write down my dream and feel like -nostradamus-
i needed to see the vicar so i could secretly -discuss-


enjoy :)

i am sensing a no show here

k, me n killa are reswitching, so here's mine...
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*Adam listening to a speech by a Mr. Robert Jay Lifton*

"In my own case, it's been my fate to look at many of the horrors of the last half of the twentieth century and the beginning of the twenty-first. I confess to a commitment to confront these collective horrors, but i do so in a spirit of hope, seeking small currents of understanding that may help us to take a more humane direction. The principle's a very simple one. It's that of looking into the abyss in order to see beyond it. If you don't look into the abyss, you're not seeing where we are."

Walking, listening to speeches, stop to take just a piss and..
On the sight of pigeons I'm given an awakening vision
Fittin' the description, of a last days prophecy
Should I consider that it's possibly real? probably
The birds, they just fell, no chirps was a big tell
This daydream takes place when Earth's becoming hell
See myself running home, quik to get in
Just in time to see breaking news interupting a wedding...

"This just in, reports from all over the globe
Birds of all sorts.. are now falling in loads
Wild animals everywhere are changing theirs modes
Trillions of rats and insects are paving the roads"...

Then I hear His voice "This ain't the half of it
Men who who hate me, God, are multi-tasking it
It started because nobody knew how to trust me
Only few of them just, though they all knew that they must be"...

Saw how some were clear headed, til chips were embedded..
Into the skull of each leader, seeded to set it off
To get it off the ground, the war of the ages
If this was a book I might just have torn all the pages
My spirit is now taken from army bases to college's
Dark forces in the shadows preparing to slaughter us
All they hafta do, is wait for the right moment
When they've swollen the sight of the people who fight omens
Black magic unknowingly used to intrigue the masses
Multiple groups, troops put in different leagues & classes
All over the world, they've made God's true words illegal
Demons possesing people willing to work for evil
Peeps going crazy praying for God to back them mentally
Missiles supposedly set off accidentally
Aimed for the States, Babylon of the modern day
See millions upon millions of suicide bombers pray
The U.S. retaliates, countries setting off nukes
Many communications down, only getting a few
Jets headings are due north, flying over the arctic
Citizens now becoming either loners or harletts
China invading these guys, these guys invading those guys
Officials wrong to think that in their ranks were no spies
And it's finally dawned on some once economics are gone
That the time til the last steps to events won't be long...

"This is to happen soon, someday at a high-noon
But there are just a couple little parts I must fine tune"...

Thought the weather would get worse and take us out first
But it seems we were caught with our face in the dirt
Religion used for crusades though they say we are brothers
Every country in a war in one way or another
Theology used to bring Lucifier onto the scene
To play the role of anti-christ, set up fights like a fiend
Britain sittin' on a time bomb, the fall of London..
Will be next to the final stage, happen all of a sudden
Then I'm shown all armies heading for Israel
Religious or otherwise, they've fallen for fucking lies
Then I'm snapped out of it, to the sound of my friend calling
'Yo Adam, look, all them pigeons are falling!! ..Oh shit

Flow- Adam

Multis- Adam

Vocabulary- Adam

Originality- Adam

Imagery- Adam

Depth- Adam

Hook Originality - Neither

Wordplay/Metaphors- Metas's on Adam.


Really suprised me, both of you did...firstly i thought devo wasn't all that and even though it was a one sided battle he still gave a decent fight and went into a good amount of depth with some nice creativity.

Adam..shockin, thought u be a rook @ this but obviously your gunna be a major opponent in this tourny..i loved how u wrote it and took tha topic...imagery was mad nice and it felt like i was there when it was happnin..

Overall Adam...Nice Battle.

up... if u havent voted.. do u... if u have... do so again :)

Flow- Adam

Multis- Adam

Vocabulary- Adam

Originality- Adam

Imagery- Adam

Depth- Adam

Hook Originality -

Wordplay/Metaphors- Adam


Well first off let me say this to Devo. Just because I gave all the categories to Adam doesnt mean I thought yours was shit. IMO it was just a mismatch. Both drops were compelling. With Devo I thought that you coulda gotten a lil more 'in depth'. What you had was nice, but you just needed to be more descriptive. It woulda been nice to see some metas in there....As far as the ending I thought that was nice. Adam your shit kept me wantin to read it. I like the way you just ran with the topic. You gave off some very nice imagery as well as depth. The ending seemed a "lil" rushed but it was still a straight ending.

The ending seemed a "lil" rushed but it was still a straight ending.

ya, it was, was running out of lines tho, coulda went double the given line length...

ya, it was, was running out of lines tho, coulda went double the given line length...

lol your like me.....My ending was rushed too....

Flow- Adam

Multis- Adam

Vocabulary- Adam

Originality- Adam

Imagery- Adam

Depth- Adam

Hook Originality -

Metaphors- Metas's on Adam.


Vote: Adam_Lil P

Reason: came with better subject matter and lyricism...story was well written also..and right up your alley, judging from some of your religion posts in gd...good battle by both but adam took this ish...and devo i was suprised by your ish...lyrically nice, just keep at it man and u'll be mad nice...pz

I Love The Cock >:/

GET HIM OUT OF HERE..........SECURUITY!!!!!!!!!!!









*watches proff drag his ass out by the hair and beat the shit out of him in the carpark of rapworlds*