hey

here are the rules:
~5 bars/10 lines
~you can feed if you want
~I'll go first...
~Your verse is due within 48 hours of when I post my verse.
~Anyone can vote but don't give pity/pussy votes...

I'll post in a few hours :D

STFU bitch

INZANE vs. Micsachek (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=642208#post642208)

Black Devil vs. Piff (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=642215#post642215)

I'm straight with the set-up, NOUR..whenever you place your verse,
I'll hit mines off..good luck on the battle...

links...

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...3809#post613809
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...3805#post613805

verse...

hey yo krushal, i heard you were a cocky asshole/
not the irritable type, just the flaming homo//
so beatin you is gon be like reciting the alphabet/
easy as A-B-C, you'll be wishin we never met//
and after i finish wit you you'll have some major cognitive deficits*/
if you ain't know what that means talk to your psychologist//
you know...the one that diagnosed you wit schizo* son/
she said somethin about you thinkin you were hot shit but it was just a hallucination//
you got many of those hunni but this ain't one of 'em/
you couldn't come hard in a post if you had a permanent erection//


*cognitive deficits- brain/psychological damage
*schizo- schizophrenia... hallucinations are symptoms of schizo

good luck homie :D

Gay!!!

Gay!!!

thanx buddy...who are you by the way? I don't think we met yet.... :D

thanx buddy...who are you by the way? I don't think we met yet.... :D
Theres no need to meet... just STFU and suck on a banana

ok...man get the fuck outta hurr.. dis is a battle thread...so YOU shut the fuck up and leave...please :)

ok...man get the fuck outta hurr.. dis is a battle thread...so YOU shut the fuck up and leave...please :)
Ok bitch Im leaving just because you said please you fuckin retarded cock suckin bitch... suck my cock the next time I see u. Take care

Ok bitch Im leaving just because you said please you fuckin retarded cock suckin bitch... suck my cock the next time I see u. Take care

ok what's with your obsession wit me suckin on somethin such as a banana and now your cock???

Couldn't possess marshal-arts...with jet li's as sheriff..she needs-one
Everyone knows-this..at ya most focused..your intelligence be-dumb
You cook up coward-states..guns leave ya temple blown-in-kitchens
Render ya rep-power-ate..before ya senseless flows-are-written
Plus you contradictin yourself before this..so, Don't push-ya-hopes..
Anyone choosin you..if explained or not..still floats pussy-votes.
Didn't consider hygiene in life?..I let the douche-burn-ya-throat
Your body'll take it slower..than sticks-of-khush-turn-to-smoke
No one cares you're so-poor...for the sickest niggas..you'll blow sores
1st slut to miss 1st question..is why we ask..who wants to know NOUR?

hey nice verse Krushal.... everyone can start voting please...

Both sucks!!!

^ well let me start by saying this guy obviously got raped when he was a child....
Ok now lets get down to the votes, this is how it broke down.
Flow: N.O.U.R
Structure: Krushal
Style: N.O.U.R
Punches: Krushal
Similies:N.O.U.R
My vote goes to: N.O.U.R
It was a real close battle, went down to the wire.
Props to both of you.

^ thanx... 1-0 for me

dont worry about that bitch hes said something rasicst in almost every thread he just bashes on black people online because he knows he probably a 70 pound 9 year old who knows he will get his ass whooped if he says that somewhere else

dont worry about that bitch hes said something rasicst in almost every thread he just bashes on black people online because he knows he probably a 70 pound 9 year old who knows he will get his ass whooped if he says that somewhere else
u fuckin stupid cock suckin smelly nigger... man why tha fuck do I have to see ur face whenever I go... just kill ur self nobody cares... I'll say you were in Katrina and Bush will send money to your monkey family!!!

My freepostin should be the last in this thread..if you ain't voting on the battle..no need to waste time typin other bullshit

u fuckin stupid cock suckin smelly nigger... man why tha fuck do I have to see ur face whenever I go... just kill ur self nobody cares... I'll say you were in Katrina and Bush will send money to your monkey family!!!

get the fuck outta hurr BIATCH... oh and please :D

get the fuck outta hurr BIATCH... oh and please :D
I already made a thread of leaving... U SON OF BITCH

then do it...you worthless ass crack :D

then do it...you worthless ass crack :D
Hey u fuckin monkey I gotta one fuckin question for ur banana shapped face
R u muslim?

Hey u fuckin monkey I gotta one fuckin question for ur banana shapped face
R u muslim?

yeah homo i am... why you wanna know?

yeah homo i am... why you wanna know?
bitch cuz Im a muslim too :D Ramadn Mubarak u fuckin monkey

awww lol yea thanx hunni...Ramadan Mubarak to you too... seriously change yo attitude buddy...it ain't nice at all.... :(

uppin for votes...1-0

can someone vote please??? :kiss:

PLEASE!!!

Flow : nore
Structure : krushal
Punches : nore
meta: wack
other cats : = wack

votes : nore.........both " keep elevating" potential may show soon enuf

good shit

ok thanx.... 2-0 me...

lol DJ gotem... can you tell me who you think won this?

i dont know either of you so but i wasnt feeling this battle at all, shit was really basic and hardly any punches at all, but here is my breakdown...

punches:eh tie (both were weak)
wordplay:krush
personals:none that i seen
consistancy:krush
structure:nore
overall:krush

winner:krush

i think the disses came at nore better then nore did at krush, like i said, both verses were weak but someone has to win and that someone is krushal in this battle

punches: krush
personals: both
creativity: krush
flow/structure: both
enjoyment: neither

vote- krush
krush's punches were alot harder!


**EDIT** Votes tied at 2-2, thanks for the votes so far, keep em coming

Punchez:Krushal
flow:Krushal
wordplay:Krushal
Consistency:NOR
Direct:NOUR
personals:Krushal
Structure:BOTH

VOTE:KRUSHAL

hey yo krushal, i heard you were a cocky asshole/
not the irritable type, just the flaming homo//
^....whatever.

so beatin you is gon be like reciting the alphabet/
easy as A-B-C, you'll be wishin we never met//
.....there's a lead, but no real punch.

and after i finish wit you you'll have some major cognitive deficits*/
if you ain't know what that means talk to your psychologist//
...acceptable.

you know...the one that diagnosed you wit schizo* son/
she said somethin about you thinkin you were hot shit but it was just a hallucination//
....acceptable.

you got many of those hunni but this ain't one of 'em/
you couldn't come hard in a post if you had a permanent erection//
..your best punch.


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Couldn't possess marshal-arts...with jet li's as sheriff..she needs-one
Everyone knows-this..at ya most focused..your intelligence be-dumb
^not a punch.

You cook up coward-states..guns leave ya temple blown-in-kitchens
Render ya rep-power-ate..before ya senseless flows-are-written
^uum, somethings just not sounding right here or too much going on.

Plus you contradictin yourself before this..so, Don't push-ya-hopes..
Anyone choosin you..if explained or not..still floats pussy-votes.
^first line sounds like a personal then you left it hangin, second line..no

Didn't consider hygiene in life?..I let the douche-burn-ya-throat
Your body'll take it slower..than sticks-of-khush-turn-to-smoke
^watch your train of thought, your not making sense.

No one cares you're so-poor...for the sickest niggas..you'll blow sores
1st slut to miss 1st question..is why we ask..who wants to know NOUR?
^only thing close to a punch that i saw.


VOTE=NOUR

Nour

hey yo krushal, i heard you were a cocky asshole/
not the irritable type, just the flaming homo//
^ clearly just a filler, opening line is one of the worst spots for a filler

so beatin you is gon be like reciting the alphabet/
easy as A-B-C, you'll be wishin we never met//
^ this line was okay...nothing major

and after i finish wit you you'll have some major cognitive deficits*/
if you ain't know what that means talk to your psychologist//
^ this line was decent but still nothing major

you know...the one that diagnosed you wit schizo* son/
she said somethin about you thinkin you were hot shit but it was just a hallucination//
^ this line was better than the first three but lacking in stucture

you got many of those hunni but this ain't one of 'em/
you couldn't come hard in a post if you had a permanent erection//
^ I definitely liked the last line even though this bar didn't seem to rhyme.

Krushal

Couldn't possess marshal-arts...with jet li's as sheriff..she needs-one
Everyone knows-this..at ya most focused..your intelligence be-dumb
^this line was pretty wack...not a good opener

You cook up coward-states..guns leave ya temple blown-in-kitchens
Render ya rep-power-ate..before ya senseless flows-are-written
^this line was decent, it rhymed nice and flowed well

Plus you contradictin yourself before this..so, Don't push-ya-hopes..
Anyone choosin you..if explained or not..still floats pussy-votes.
^this bar didn't really hit well...rhymed but no depth or personals to it

Didn't consider hygiene in life?..I let the douche-burn-ya-throat
Your body'll take it slower..than sticks-of-khush-turn-to-smoke
^again, rhymed well but didn't really hit well, you have to make your diss more apparent.

No one cares you're so-poor...for the sickest niggas..you'll blow sores
1st slut to miss 1st question..is why we ask..who wants to know NOUR?
^this bar was decent, the sickest niggas, blow sores punch was coo but not major damage.

Overall you guys made no real damage to each other but Nour's made more sense. Krushal rhymed well but not well enough to make up for the lack of personals and punches.

My vote: Nour