Okay for those who don't know what's going on, the battle I had with Nocturne had to be reposted. New rules:

8 bars Minimum
Verse Due Tomorrow
No Hate/Crew Votes
Must have 75 Posts To Vote

...Damn you... Did you honestly have to just put my name on blast like that... :mad:








Well.. Check.. :D

LOL . . . my bad. anyway these are my links, same as the last thread, since I aint really use them.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52493
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...91&page=2&pp=10

...Here's my links as well..

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52764&page=2&pp=10
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52804

..A Promising End.. >:/


..Seems dude-has-a-habbit of battling-cats even though his wackness-lapses..
Lou's-"lack-of-tactics" proves-established-facts-that this fag's-just-AVERAGE!!
A-bag-or-Casket? Wessen-or-TeK? He'll get FUCKED...why dare-to-win-this..?
Shit, I never "questioned-my-sex" but it seems Lou and PUSSY bare-fair-resemblance!!
Ram, you're-senseless...Far from a gangsta, though it seems you like "talking-street"
Kid's talk-is-sweet...Cause like "meat-markets" Ram likes to SQUASH-THE-BEEF!! (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=50482)
Come-hard-with-heat..? Get serious.. Mediocre verses never get a fans-applause...
A damaged-cause.. Like Randy-Moss I won't be the first to hand-RAM-a-LOSS!
Look man-you're lost... Ram'll get lunged-at, punches leaving his gums-cracked..
You come-strapped? Cause I'll "Deliver Ram An L" like "Postmen for-blunt-wraps!!!"
I'll smack-this-clown-with... Punchlines that'll turn his wackness to inactive-balance..
How can you not PASS-A-ROUND-WITH (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=41487) other cat's that MATCH-YOUR-TALENT! :(
I laugh-at-clowns-when ones like Lou can't handle that you're less-than-hot-bro..
The best...?-It's-NOT-SO, Should know not to "try your luck" from your Tests-with-LOTTO'S! (Latto) (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=41173)

So who's-this-dude-LouRam...? ^Here's proof-this-goof's-a-true-scam...


..A Promised Fufilled..





*Personals should explain themselves... I'll admit, I had an all ready thought of punch in the verse.. Never used it though... Anyways, waiting on your verse...

sorry man, i'm actually at school tryin to get some HW done. It's due in a nhour, so i cant post rite now. GIve me bout 2 hours. (plus now I know who I am really battlin,. I might have bitten off more than I can handle)

..Heh, it's all right man.. I was just being sarcastic... Genesis was nice enough to clear the thread from freeposts, so just make sure your next post is your verse.. I don't like spammed threads... Well, I'll get up with this later..

aiight i aint even gonna lie, I was bullshitting today. Lots of shit I had to take care of. Anyway, here's my verse. It took a minute, but that's only cuz I haven't been able to type it up cuz of Homework, and runnin errands for people, even though most of its posted anyway.

This nigga tryin to "return" the "Dark" Ages? Outrageous, He couldn't bring Wesley "back"*
Have you sayin "Con's-verse-ate (conversate) this nigga" like we havin a friendly chat**
This "MC"'s wack, so I guess you could say (M)ariah (C)arey is havin a relapse
Rub you raw like kneecaps; this bitch keeps guns in his thong and dares call them "G-straps"
"Light" yo ass up "infinitely" like an electric current with a "permanent surge"
Tried to "Noc" you into the right path but you still managed to take a "Turne" for the worst***
Cursin-yo-verse, your rhymes deserved to be put to "rest" so you earned-them-a-Hearse (RIP)
A purposeless-nerd, Noc bites Mase style, hard on the streets but at home he's got sermons-to-learn
Your whole life's a tragic event like the Passion-of-Christ, aint got no rep so you can only battle-your-mic
But I'mma leave you standin'-in-spite, with your female manliness like Rodman; Hey, you'd probably pass-as-his-wife!!!
Noc’s only purpose in life is to write wack-punches; This is Rap gone "Wrong"; it’s the way Mal Functions (Malfunctions)
Still think your rhymes’ fire? well shit-that’s-something; last time you dropped a burner it was made-by-Bunsen!****
Call it a group effort, he had to summon some help; if he beats me, he literally couldn’t have done it himself (http://http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=53086)
And yet he still claims that he’s Tougher-than-nails; robbin gas stations is the only way u be Bustin-them-“Shells”*****
This nigga’s toast, what idiot said u was ever talented? you a repeat act, cats muttering, “there goes Mal-again (Malagen)”
Your rhymes atrocious, why you boastin? You never had-this-win; This nig’s my bitch He has no life, he’s just my Mannequin

* His name is Nocturne (like nocturnal), hence his connection to "dark". Wesley Snipes is the darkest brother to hit film
**Off the Net, my alias/rapname is Conniva AKA Conman AKA Con (as a matter of fact that was my old account name on this site, but I've forgotten the password)
***Double hidden meaning: First Noc=Knock and Turne=Turn, but if your put them together you get his name. At the same time, I was knockin him into a "straight" path but he took a "turn", therefore goin off the path.
****Bunsen burner. hopefully u know what that is
*****Shell = gas station

uppin

uppin

Flow: N
Punches: N
WOrdplay: N
Multies: N
Personals: N

Vote : Nocturne

Dam.. sick verses from BOth but Nocturne took this pretty ez.. all round his verse was better!

-1-

thats cool man, but u only have 12 posts. u need 75 posts to vote in this battle
it still 0-0

Punches:Both
metaz:nocturn
consistency:nc
wordplay:both
enjoyment:lou
Creative:nc
structure:both

very very very hard battle but my vote goes to Nocturn becuz is verse had mo potential and more flowable

man yo count doesnt vote either, u only have 30 posts. Man, I hope I dont have to cancel every vote that comes here.

=Noctumalargen=
-I don't know why, but your style reminds me of XK's...-

..Seems dude-has-a-habbit of battling-cats even though his wackness-lapses..
Lou's-"lack-of-tactics" proves-established-facts-that this fag's-just-AVERAGE!!
^nice multi + punch opener

A-bag-or-Casket? Wessen-or-TeK? He'll get FUCKED...why dare-to-win-this..?
Shit, I never "questioned-my-sex" but it seems Lou and PUSSY bare-fair-resemblance!!
^Eh, a little predictable with the quoted part

Ram, you're-senseless...Far from a gangsta, though it seems you like "talking-street"
Kid's talk-is-sweet...Cause like "meat-markets" Ram likes to SQUASH-THE-BEEF!!
^haha...nice

Come-hard-with-heat..? Get serious.. Mediocre verses never get a fans-applause...
A damaged-cause.. Like Randy-Moss I won't be the first to hand-RAM-a-LOSS!
^nice creativity

Look man-you're lost... Ram'll get lunged-at, punches leaving his gums-cracked..
You come-strapped? Cause I'll "Deliver Ram An L" like "Postmen for-blunt-wraps!!!"
^nice punch, but i don't think many people won't get it.

I'll smack-this-clown-with... Punchlines that'll turn his wackness to inactive-balance..
How can you not PASS-A-ROUND-WITH other cat's that MATCH-YOUR-TALENT!
^obvious filler, but the personal shot saved you.

I laugh-at-clowns-when ones like Lou can't handle that you're less-than-hot-bro..
The best...?-It's-NOT-SO, Should know not to "try your luck" from your Tests-with-LOTTO'S! (Latto)
^nice personal

So who's-this-dude-LouRam...? ^Here's proof-this-goof's-a-true-scam...
^where at? Mind me...i'm a bit tired right now.

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=LouRam=
-mad stretched lines-

This nigga tryin to "return" the "Dark" Ages? Outrageous, He couldn't bring Wesley "back"*
Have you sayin "Con's-verse-ate (conversate) this nigga" like we havin a friendly chat**
^not a good opener

This "MC"'s wack, so I guess you could say (M)ariah (C)arey is havin a relapse
Rub you raw like kneecaps; this bitch keeps guns in his thong and dares call them "G-straps"
^nice creativity/punch

"Light" yo ass up "infinitely" like an electric current with a "permanent surge"
Tried to "Noc" you into the right path but you still managed to take a "Turne" for the worst***
^Eh...alright.

Cursin-yo-verse, your rhymes deserved to be put to "rest" so you earned-them-a-Hearse (RIP)
A purposeless-nerd, Noc bites Mase style, hard on the streets but at home he's got sermons-to-learn
^not feeling it

Your whole life's a tragic event like the Passion-of-Christ, aint got no rep so you can only battle-your-mic
But I'mma leave you standin'-in-spite, with your female manliness like Rodman; Hey, you'd probably pass-as-his-wife!!!
^first line was bad, second line was alright

Noc’s only purpose in life is to write wack-punches; This is Rap gone "Wrong"; it’s the way Mal Functions (Malfunctions)
Still think your rhymes’ fire? well shit-that’s-something; last time you dropped a burner it was made-by-Bunsen!****
^nice punch

Call it a group effort, he had to summon some help; if he beats me, he literally couldn’t have done it himself
And yet he still claims that he’s Tougher-than-nails; robbin gas stations is the only way u be Bustin-them-“Shells”*****
^ok...

This nigga’s toast, what idiot said u was ever talented? you a repeat act, cats muttering, “there goes Mal-again (Malagen)”
Your rhymes atrocious, why you boastin? You never had-this-win; This nig’s my bitch He has no life, he’s just my Mannequin
^ok closer
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LouRam has elevated, but not enough.

Vote = Malagen

aiight that's 0-1 to Malagen

..Well, I can assure you that I'm not Xkwisite... I pretty much learned a lot from him and many of the people on this site actually.. I appreciate the votes... But we definately need to get more going... Thanks for the votes though..

this was straight, nice battle, at least we have something to vote on, nice verse and here is my breakdown....

punches:noc
personals:noc
wordplay:lou
consistancy:tie
overall:noc

winner:noc

he edged it out with his personals i think, he had more then lou and i feel they were hitting harder also, this was a dope battle, 1

that was 2-0 to Nocturne

still uppin

Uppin

i feel like an ass now... Lou ya spit hard as shit... you could've easily merked me.. (not to say that you didn't)
Punches- noc (barely)
Wordplay- noc
Multies- tie (none really took away from piece)
Flow- noc
Structure- noc (easier reading format)

Vote= Noc

SUM: it was really closer than what it seems here... i had to read and reread like 3 times before it came down to the end... overall noc came harder, but i was definately impressed with the bars LOU came up with... good battle one to remember...

Thanks for voting man. Aiight, Nocturne, good battling you. At least I know it wasn't a newbie (which you were trying to play yourself off as) that beat me. Well, I'll catch up wit u man, might rematch in Weekly Wars.

3-0 KO to Nocturne

Nocturne wins by 3-0 KO. Really nice battle guys, props to both for two tight verses.

*CLOSED & MOVED TO ARCHIVE*