4 bars no hate/no dickriden/

drop ya verse

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=51631
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52801

Rite all I gota do is bury dis bitch queen in da grave //
Im a make im behave,hes a lil kid so hes my slave //
He dnt even know how to shave, sendin out shockwaves //
He int got nothin 2 shave anyway, hes livin in blocked caves //
Dnt be naïve jus cuz u int got a mommy n daddy 2 look afta u //
I think livn in caves iz wrong, livn in a bin where u belong is safer, its true //
Ur shit iz fuckin wasted, it makes no sense, ur a lil 13 yr old with pocket money of 3 pence (for USA, 3 cents) //
Why u copy n pasted, that’s wat u did wit ur rhymes, feel my suspense cuz im teach-in u common sense //
I have da defences, ur getting tensed, dnt eva tell a gurl 2 suck her granddads cock, dnt u know that’s an offence? //
Im reppin UK and im reppin’ my block, tick tock, //
gna be waitin 4 ur verse from da time now (English time) 12 o’clock 2 da next day so lets rock //
Im hot ur not, im on top, ur shot, I glock my gun and pistol whip ya //
I lock 4 fun, cage u in, let u rot in ya spot, wiv a crystal stripper //
No it wont be a gurl, it wil be ur daddy, hahahah, fuck it //
Put u in a bucket (u’ll fit haha) and make u buck shit //


Theres ur 8 barz

He said in a thread 2 go suck my granddads dick

He says he king so I call im’ queen

Hes 13 (very young)

Rest is simple

Yea i must be young and still ova top of this HUN~
this bitch got attitude ill just fuck u for FUN~
verbs and metaz u got NONE~
u sound mo like a man to me ,hope u aint my SON~(a man who gots mouth that im ownin)
she lookin to nervous right now that she prolly holdin a GUN~
to late now u tryed me in a battle its not time for no HIT AND RUN~
im da king recognize me cuz u my BUN~(burger king buns)//

ill use u to WAX~u seem still little quit smokin is FACTS~u nuffin but leftover FATBACKS~that cant handle me and i make it hard for her to stay on TRACK~u like my good ol SNACKS~ dat i used to PACK~ya gran pas Balls is the only crusty stuff u can HACK~ya girly bars was totally WACK~//

ya ass need HELP~my verse is going to get mo REP~its bout time only 1 bitch can STEP~im on fire mo like when a sun come out and u da snow dat MELTS~ya verse i SLEPT (took a nap on her verse)//

i had happy DREAMS~u r not my QUEEN~dat must not be SEEN~ill scoop u ot this battle u nuffin but drippin ICE CREAM~i lay back on u while my Dick LEAN~//

ha a bitch that think she TOUGH~//
8 bars 5 should be ENOUGH//

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52768&page=3&pp=10
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52764&page=4&pp=10

OMFG... stop fighting over bananas u fuckin monkeys

uppin..

uppppppppppppppppppin

I don't understand...you went first win this battle so why are you gonna be scared of going first in mines?

anyway

Breakdown

flow- da king

personals- hiphopgurl

punches- da king

wordplay- da king

overall vote- da king

Explanations:

both had okay verses but da king was more consistant with his punches

aight...

to hiphopgirl... i think you needed to come a bit harder... you had some good lines in there though but you needed to be more aggressive. You showed good humour though lol...

Im hot ur not, im on top, ur shot, I glock my gun and pistol whip ya //
I lock 4 fun, cage u in, let u rot in ya spot, wiv a crystal stripper //

^^^that was an ok line but all the other ones were choppy and i couldn't make sense of some of em.... nice try though... it's nice to see a girl battling on here...

to da king... I give you my vote... you had harder and better punches. I liked like 3 of your lines but i don't wanna post them...You opened wit a good bar and kept flow throughout the verse but you were a little choppy in some areas but not as much as hiphopgirl...

Overall... I didn't really like this battle it was a little boring... vote goes to da king....

PS can you vote on my battle wit krushal please :kiss:

thanx for votin n.o.u.r.... appreciate it even tho u didnt vote for me lol...

remixchic, urs was a hate vote and hate votes r not allowed


uppin 0-1

This is how it broke down:
Flow: Da King
Style: hip hop gurl
punches: Da king
similies: Da king
structure: (neither of you)
Personals: Da King
My vote goes to: Da king
It was an alright battle, I've seen better.
Hiphop gurl, you need to use harder rhymes and use more personals. Also work on your structure. Go to the vet battles and see how there verse is set up.
Da king, your verse was not bad, but I've seen you drop better.
Also you need to work on your structure as well.
Props to both of you. Good luck in future battles.

0-3 for me i won holla bitch

Yup hes right, that will take the win.
Congrats, to you king. *Rep*

K.O..........

Thanx Man

no it int remixchic vote was hate... 0-2..... uppin

bitch

ok then 0-2 for me

umm i dont even know....hip hops verse made no sense...da.kings was about as simple as it can get...i guess ill go with da king cuz at least it made sense...pshmm

vote- even though hes a bitch...daking

I WON ha this cat on my dick now but hes on da bottom fuckin fag yo i won this bitch

my votes goes to King

he had better wordplay & his shit was overall better

Hip hop gurl: keep spitting girl. Btw you got a tight sig

lol...u beat fucking hip hop girl who couldnt make a complete sentence even if she didnt have to rhyme it

!da.k.i.n.g! wins by 3-0 KO, Nice battle