A Dreadful Serenade / Wish You Was Me (http://www.soundclick.com/666tkbpnewbeats666)


Check em out, see whatcha feel. I'd be glad to know.


*I'll give reps for feedback. Jus wanna know what people think gotta get critisizm n comments to elevate feel me?

...and those 10 people who viewed this thread and didn't reply can suck my dick.


You know who you are...

A dreadful serenade:
I really like the drums, but the sample....sorry, but i can't hear that...normally i like strings, but i don't like this sample!

Wish you was me:
Sample is better, not my style, but its ok! Drums are also ok, but i think the base line could be better!

Thanks for checkin em out bro

like wat u done with the sample in the first one, just dont like how it sounds, drums cool.

2nd tune is nice, try layering ur drums, sound a bit empty but good pattern, i like the bell arrangement thats cool, bass is alrite, just wanna hear it a bit louder. personally i liked it when u dropped in the pianos, i was like uh!! but should have came in much earlier and been a main part of ur tune.

keep up the good work bruv.

thanks for checkin em out, yea the 2nd one, drums were throw together and piano was last minute shit I'ma do a remix or version 2 or w/e and incorporate the piano into the chorus or somethin.

(uses small speakers with an average soundcard)

Listening...

A Dreadful Serenade

Drums - Pretty decent and nicely balanced
Chords - Eh, they seem to change keys a few times.
Keyboarding/melodies - Nicely done. Pretty simple.
Effects - I can't remember what the name of the instrument is (epiano?), but I like how it has more of a bounce feel, making it stand out the most.

Wish You Was Me
Drums - Kick and snare sound alright, but imo the high-hat should deliver a crisp sound.
Keyboarding/Melodies - IMO, stick to one piano and put it at the beginning. But don't have more than 2 melodies going at once.
Bassline - uh...??? It sounds like it comes in whenever it wants to.
Effects - Err, the scratch, the deep trashcan hitting sound, and the wierd ass bass neeeeeeeeeed more attention to them, because right now they sound too "bored".

props for the comments...I'ma check your soundclick out. 1ne

i like the serande grande . that was a good. one. all i got to say is keep doing your thing man

i like the serande grande . that was a good. one. all i got to say is keep doing your thing man