Okay ..

12 lines max.
no biting .. no feeding.
no dickriding, crew, hate votes.
5 votes win.
4 - 1 L.k.o (Lyrical Knockout).
3 - 0 K.o

ONLY EXPLAINED VOTES COUNT!

aiight ill go first, and links will come after lyrics

My first battle, let me *try* and make it a good one

ladies and gentlemen, boys and gurls/
its time to see the rhymin champ, of the world/
yea my rhymin is ol skool, but thats how I do it/
dont matter cause im so good, u get used to it/
and nigga u aint no xcluusive, cause i seen ur rhymin/
I see u talking about popin guns, nigga why u lyin/
u aint tough, u aint hard, and u sure aint gonna push me/
cause im tough, im hard, and u kno I aint pussy/
I keep it real, u kno dis is a good keystyle/
u kno da deal, my rhymes stay on top of urs by miles/
and yea i might have no punches, but thats cause I dont rap much/
ill finish you like i finish good lunches, and if not, ull get touch/

Upin for votes niggas, u kno im ill ............ :)

Links:

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52801
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=53260

spit already xclusive!!

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=645265&posted=1#post645265
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=645262&posted=1#post645262

you got em? then why dont ya ~got-me~
your fake, but you actin hard like ~Gotti~ (Gotti .. Mafia)
introducin ya raps?, aint no ~place-for-that~ (his intro .. he was introducin himself)
your comin weak, which'll ~raise-my-stats~ (ill win this (propbably) and get my stats raised)
ill slap ya so hard, your teeth'll be ~in-a-cup~
i aint comin hard, cuz i really dont ~give-a-fuck~

~spittin-fast~

you thought you were bringin the hood to a new level
but that changed once you encountered with the Devil
ill make you tuck a dick bewteen ya legs til it looks like a clit
or i can slap the taste out ya mouth .. make you cry like a bitch
you want what with who? nah, nigga, not with me ..
cuz ill make you get more cops, then muh'fuckin 50 .. (50 has cops instead of soldiers .. and can lock up ANYONE!)

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Well .. theres my verse .. so shut ya mouth :D
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Good luck with this shit ..

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EVERYONE BRING THE VOTES IN PLEASE AND THANK YOU!

oh shit, nice. Thx for luck i might need it

I NEED VOTES PPL

WE*

lol ..

come on niggas, i cant be THAT wack, vote already :)

uppin for votes, come on niggas

this was a very weak battle
the voting

punches- XCLUSIVE
personals- N/A
creativity- XCLUSIVE
flow/structure- N/A
enjoyment- N/A



overall a very weak battle
need to up your vocab
and in some parts it didnt even make sense....
props to both keep at it


Vote = Xclusive

thanks for the vote ..

1 - 0 in my favor ..

upping for more votes ..

I told u I sucked :(

lmao at dj, its one thing when someone make fun of you but when you do it to yourself lol nothing good could come out of something like that lmao

the verses were both weak, never had any punches or any personals and i dont understand how you expect to win battles with out that but this is how i see it, i feel X came a little bit harder but not by much, i just think he dissed dj a bit more then dj had on him and i do say that xclusive came with harder disses, i think he took it with the "cry like a bitch " line but this is the breakdown...

punches:niether, none from either emcee
wordplay:same as above
personals:same as above
consistancy:xclusive
overall:xclusive

winner:xclusive

i do feel he took it with harder disses and for talking more about his opponent is a harsh verbal manner lol

when it comes to freestylin, I always make fun of myself.

2-0 in favor of xclusive

Damn you lazy bums .. get voting .. yall complain about people not voting on your battles .. thats cuz you dont vote on other peopels battles .. GET VOTING!!

who cares, you won already

you never know .. lol .. its possible youll get a win and it wont be a K.o

lol .. we need some votes!!

Cmon people .. it aint that hard to vote .. just say who won .. and who took whatever categories ..

punches-X
consistancy-none
flow-none
wordsplay-X
personals-X
oversall-X