rules:
10 bar limit.
no DR votes.
No crew votes.
first to 5 wins.....3/0 is a K.O.
Good luck nigga.

This is for the title right .. ??

here goes...



I told you id embarrass you-if we battled head to head-
burn you until your flesh is red-and watch death just spread/
lemme fetch my lead-and bust shots to create open wounds-
Let JIZM expose the truth about most of you flowless goons/
itll be over soon-theres no EVYDENCE that shows your skill-
i suppose your open, thrilled-but not for long as i dispose of filth/
my components built to withstand the toughest battles-
i should snuff and snap you-just for attempting to grapple/
Rock you like gravel-then stomp you to smithereens-
Im the KING-but since you so BITCH you could be my queen/
watch as pussies queef at the very site of me-wait..enlighten me-
i am what a titan be-is that jock itch-or are you just bitin me?/
aint too much sense in fightin me-i eat through flesh like ebola-
this lyrical ayotollah bolsters the might to openly roast ya/
drop you like a roller coaster-aint no comin back from that-
this nigga here more like kringer-acting like hes some battlecat/
go back to your habitat-a wack rhyme shack where the fags be at-
and be happy that you didnt end up in some hole-like gopher in caddyshack/
Bump you like acne attacks-in pre-puberty teens with no dickhair-
left you in despair-got people screamin WOOOOOOOO! like they was ric flair...


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my shit will be up lata tonight ..

my bad yo ... wouldnt been up earlier .. but i fell asleep ... so here it comes ...


ayo ..

Jizm isnt a Title Holder ... he a true John Ruiz , He couldnt kill a Lifeless soldier whos battlin Among-The-Dead //( 1 )
Ya skillz like demolition buildins..Stands than falls in seconds , you could be a whole army and couldnt Plan to win wit all your weapons // ( 2 )
Jizm Walks Around all stiff .. from gettin Sonned hard all night , Superman could Pound this bitch .. and ya still wouldnt have One bar with Might // ( 3 )
Jizm thought he had a Grasp-On-Greatness.. but he was Touchin-My-Leg , I can use his dome as my girl the way I got him Fucked-In-The-Head // ( 4 )
Ya couldnt "State" you were sick if Pennsylvania gave you a Doctor's-Note , Take a "w" in this battle ?? ya gon need Lots-of-Hope cuz im tellin you im "Kickin" your ass like aSoccer-Coach ,( 5 )
Only time Jizm busts .. Is If I Jerkoff too Hard , you be the first to crawl when I punch cuz Im Hurtin-this-Broad // ( 6 )
You couldnt Hold Heat and explode .. if you dropped a Grenade On Fire , this dude wouldnt Be on a Roll If he marched in Parades On Tires , ( 7 )
You mighta underestimated the kid .. cuz now Im Takin ya Belt , you like a crippled old lady the way you Achin for help // ( 8 )
Im like The Eagles staff .. the way Im Droppin all ya Talent , Like Klitshkov fightin Lewis .. you jus Not a fucken Challenge // ( 9 )


ahhh i dont feel like doin 1 more ...

Cmon dawg .. you winnin this ?? you Shouldnt Sin ... Serious , Cuz if this fag hit me wit tampons .. you Couldnt Win ... Period!! .....



there u go ... served ..

uppin for voters...

evydence won that

hell no jizm

pac...who u votin for?..peace

close but i say that evydence won cuz of his vocab and wordplay. JIZM had some humor, but evydence had better rhymes and shit. Tight ass battle though...

vote: EvydencE

this nigga got his boys votin..they all in here together right now...well guess what, u need 30 posts to vote.

matter of fact...nah ill count them votes......cause i know they bullshit....but anyway...where do you see better rhymes on his part?. VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED OR THEY WILL NOT COUNT.

y u gettin all butthurt... cuz i voted for EvydencE...?

nigga your vote dont count.....you aint explain it...those are the rules of this forum...."street king" lol.....youre fuckin garbage.

matter of fact, if u aint got more than 30 posts u cant vote...stop all these trash niggas right now.

nigga plz... get your man's dick out your ass and stop bitchin hoe
fuckin computer nerd muthafucka "lol" wut a dorky little bitch get off my nutz

eat a dick you bitch nigga...."street king"...sesame street maybe, lil 13yo pussy...holla when u get some dick hair...until then dont fuck wit the old heads...peace beautiful....girl

im done talkin to you streetwalker.....if u reply u on my dick.

i dont need to explain my self u lost i aint his boy or urs so i decided which was better sometimes u just gotta face losing...

listen...the forum rule is: you MUST explain your votes, fully...or it does not count, ask a mod...if u dont know how this place works then get the fuck out...im sick of yall lil punk niggas doin stupid shit....yall all part of the same crew...but dont worry my squad comin soon...to do away wit bs niggas like yall.

whoaaa....

you need to chill .. i brought no beef ... jus a battle verse ..

legacy aint my boy .. neva heard of him .. street king aint my boy neva heard of him either .. i know about 3 dudes on this site ..

crom
benton quest
syn-drum

thats it ...


and dickridin ??? .. who the voted for you ? tell him to get of your dick ... tha fuck ..

battles need punches ... you aint bring none I did ... and you dont hold the title ?? .. yea you do .. you beat mc illest didnt you ?? .. well im battlin and thats for the title ..

I called you out cuz you had the title .. dont bitch out cuz you gon lose .. man this is serious bullshit .. i stated i wasnt no newbie but yall dont wanna lissen ... let the votes go .. stop bein pussy ..


its what 2-1 .. ( wit yo bitch DR vote )


uppin man

yo..i dont hold any title idiot....which your bitch ass civ ILLian crew.......fuckin pussy niggas votin for u...thats why u was so thristy to battle...cause you had it planned already for your niggas to vote for you....and dont sit here and talk like u nicer at punchlines than me kid...cause ill eat you alive wit punches...you better ask somebody...im tired of goin back and forth wit yall bitch ass niggas....i sit here for 30 mins waitin for yall to respond and nobody does until i leave...fuckin pussies....them votes dont count...they have to be explained fully...assholes...

oh by the way...you garbage son...you crazy wack...your rhyme was trash...i didnt even try against you and my lines and flow is on point...your bullshit dont even flow and your "punchlines" make no sense....fuckin jerk.

haha .. if my punches make no sense why you so mad ... you scared you gon lose ... I got 2 pms tellin me i ripped you from people i dont even know ..

beat me punches?? .. haha yea i could see that ... lmao

and none of civillians even voted idiot .... what you talkin bout man??? ... and why you gettin hype and tryin to bring beef ... ??

i wanted to battle you cuz i wanted the belt ... civillians prolly dont even know i posted yet idiot ... you garbage and i seen that when i came .. now i aint start shit but you did ... it aint my fault you garbage ... jus shutup and let the votes come in .. stop bitchin ... what r u 15 years old ?? .. damn man ..

they have to be explained fully ??? you gotta post that as a rule when you make the thread .. its not A "must do" .. if they dont what they gon get banned ?? .. lmao

2-1 uppin!!


Im Takin that Belt !!! .. you have it and im takin it !! .. and dont lie cuz you beat mc illest for it !!

Guys chill, you take it all too seriously, all this dickriding rubbish, i suppose that if i vote for jizm then i'll be acused of DR, since i voted for him before. Which i would do again if there wasn't the stupid no crew rule. God, jizm's rhymes are ill, everything about it- easy to rap to, lyrics are easy to understand. I wanna hear some audio jizm.

Why can't crew vote?

vote

Jizm
Good flow and rhymes - the humorous elements really make your verse alot more interesting to read - plus it's the best way to ridicule your opponents and make them look stupid as shit! you had some nice lines..

itll be over soon-theres no EVYDENCE that shows your skill-
i suppose your open, thrilled-but not for long as i dispose of filth

nice bit of wordplay - with nice disses...ill.

some of the multiples were off the hook!

this nigga here more like kringer-acting like hes some battlecat/
go back to your habitat-a wack rhyme shack where the fags be at-

dope.

A real nice verse Jizm - set the standard

Evydence
Lines were far too long - but you were very intelligent. Nice concepts within your disses.

Ya skillz like demolition buildins..Stands than falls in seconds , you could be a whole army and couldnt Plan to win wit all your weapons //

^^nice.

Ya couldnt "State" you were sick if Pennsylvania gave you a Doctor's-Note , Take a "w" in this battle ?? ya gon need Lots-of-Hope cuz im tellin you im "Kickin" your ass like aSoccer-Coach

this was aight - it flowed well but the punches were weak.

you had a nice verse too - but the punches were kinda dissapointing and there were no real outstanding disses. But hell yeah you got potential. Elevate

it was a good battle but in the end there can only be one winner - Jizm ...~pz~

whoaaa punches were weak ??

and his were better right?? haha

oh god ya kiddin right ... hahahaha


oh man .... this site is lame .. lol.. his shit was no battle verse


they call it battle cuz of punches ... lol

Hmmmm...

IM NOT VOTING OR ANYTHING!! BUT....

...Show Me An Example Of Where Jizm Threw A Punch...

a standard rule across all even half decent boards is you gotta explain ya vote. It makes sense to - or i could just walk in here, see who voted for who so far and just copy it to up my post count.

I've seen peeps do that.

It just makes sense to, as well. People wanna know why and how they lost, and saying "its jizm" or "its evydence" is bullshit.

And its obvious why crew votes aren't allowed - 'cos they're crew. However much they try not to be, they will always be biased a bit.

But i'm not gonna vote - 'cos i'm down with JIZM and that would give another vote to contest.

I think explained votes should be counted, others shouldn't until they're explained 'cos its common sense. I mean - i haven't read whos voted for who - i have no idea of score.

I'm just saying how it should be. And you wouldn't find crew votes counting at Rapmusic or other bigger sites.

I think you should sort this out by yourself or get tha mods (D and Ms Mack i think) to do it.

PZ>

jizm face it u lost

an so im a little punk??? what r u 26 years old on the fuckin computer battle'n kids u fuckin loser then gets mad when some 1 beats u???...u fuckin suck thats y u gotta come on these fuckin sights like its ur fuckin religion an couldnt make it in tha real game

so holla at my dick

did i say Jizm used punches?....no i don't think i did. *ponders some of these cat's reading capabilities*
Evydence - your punches were weak - i'm not hating - i'm saying what i think.
Battles don't need punches - where is that written? That's just your bullshit opinion. - and even if they do - you didn't bring any worth mentioning.

Jizm isnt a Title Holder ... he a true John Ruiz , He couldnt kill a Lifeless soldier whos battlin Among-The-Dead //

that line is far too long - if you were planning to extend it over 2 lines worth of beat then it wouldn't have rhymed. flow = wank.

Jizm thought he had a Grasp-On-Greatness.. but he was Touchin-My-Leg

why is your leg 'great'? - wow! what an AMAZING PUNCHLINE!!:D

couldnt "State" you were sick if Pennsylvania gave you a Doctor's-Note

Now thats weak - people wouldn't pick up on the alternative use of 'state' if this was done in audio - i guess that aint a problem though cuz i bet you anything you couldn't spit this in audio. No flow.

"Kickin" your ass like aSoccer-Coach - and thats just so AMAZINGLY ORIGINALLY ILL.:rolleyes: since when do soccer coaches physically kick your asS? - shit, you better get onto childline for cruelty to kids on that one.

every line almost you try and use a punch - and they either didn't make sense or they were just mind-numbingly unoriginal.

and i think the term 'battle' comes from a 'heated confrontation between two or more opponents' - i don't think it means 'a battle is where two cats use punches against eachother'

anyway..not hating - you're just being stupid.

lmfao ..

nah not bein stupid ..

my 1st bar wasnt too long ...

your 2nd qoute wasa punch .. ill interpret for ya

"he thought he had a feelin of bein ill .. but he was tuchin my leg" << meanin (ME) I am great and he's only feelin ill cuz hes touchin me ..

3rd ... " Im tellin you Im kickin your ass like a socccer coach" ... read the whole damn br b4 criticizin ....


so i jus explained the shit you quoted .....


so how am i bein stupid ... and you may think they was weak .. but atlast i have them ... you need punches to win a fucken battle man .. i dont care how you slice the pie .....


and why you stickin up for him ??? .. you dont want him to lose either do ya? .. lmao ..

man yall DR's need to hop off jizm's dick ... forreal .. he had a nice verse yea.. but it wasnt a fucken battle verse .. when yall gon learn .... damnn ... a battle verse contains punches or disses .........


I win .. i know i did ... this site is corny .. yall dont even have an audio section .. lol


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legacy, skip the bullshit and lets get to the knuckle game, where in NY you at?...cause im from ny too....so lets get it on!...

evydence your straight wack, your "punchlines" made no sense......

im up 1-0........

your 2nd qoute wasa punch .. ill interpret for ya

"he thought he had a feelin of bein ill .. but he was tuchin my leg" << meanin (ME) I am great and he's only feelin ill cuz hes touchin me ..

3rd ... " Im tellin you Im kickin your ass like a socccer coach" ... read the whole damn br b4 criticizin ....

when did i say they weren't punches? - i just said they were whack - cuz they are.

haha sure mcd... keep ridin on ya boys in here ...

this site corny ... haha...

nah u the corny one....why you stayin in here if its so corny?.....your rhymes are corny....your crew is corny...yall all lie to make yourselves feel better.....THATS CORNY.....pussY

I thought crew votes meant MODS, so i'm not part jizm's crew so i vote for him. Is my previous reason why to vague?

ahhaha jizmm.... you jus maad cuz kids like me n syn is bustin our own jiz in ya face dogg...


this site has no clue how to do anything ... and if i cant put my shit into audio than see me in audio fag ... bunch of bitches ...


wow ..


~ghost~

i'll see you in audio too;)

I seriously am not hating - but i do think you're bein stupid - fair enough, civ-ILL-ians got potential, i don't think you're fully exploiting it though.

Thanks greg...UP 2-0......

1 more vote and this kid evydence can eat a dick...straight k.o...then him and his crew can go fuck themselves.pussies.

uppin for last vote!...cmon niggas

itll be over soon-theres no EVYDENCE that shows your skill-

Im the KING-but since you so BITCH you could be my queen/
watch as pussies queef at the very site of me-wait..enlighten me-
i am what a titan be-is that jock itch-or are you just bitin me?/

this lyrical ayotollah bolsters the might to openly roast ya/
drop you like a roller coaster-aint no comin back from that-
this nigga here more like kringer-acting like hes some battlecat/

and be happy that you didnt end up in some hole-like gopher in caddyshack/
Bump you like acne attacks-in pre-puberty teens with no dickhair-
left you in despair-got people screamin WOOOOOOOO! like they was ric flair...


this FAG spit some hot shit i coudn't find any bars that hit good from the other cat...good but didn't connect...

JIZM = 1

thanks divine.......yo EVYDENCE, u Lose Stupid.

vote: EvydencE i aint one of his boys neither which by the way was a sorry ass excuse.i mean his sh*t waz hot and urs waz ok its just EvydencE had better rhymes and the flow waz alot less choppy.


"YEAH THEY CALL ME RABBIT THIS IS A TURTLE RACE!"

JIZM got tht shit, close though

how the fuck did some 1 find this battle...this shits been done 4 like 3 months

this shit was rigged.....lol......Jizm got shitted on...but like most times that he has peeps to dickride for him...

yo this is how i begian; i group up my men; grab the ladies and den, grab some hin; it depend; how how good you look; for me to bite your hook; cause its me the king, aginst you the rook; your runing away from me on foot; but i hunt with a spear; so theres alot to fear; a punture womb near, your heart; your bout to spirturly depart; from your from your chest cavity; looking good with my graduate degree; i'll set you free; if i get something in return; maybe some green to burn; or bodys to ash in a earn; leave you concerned; that you will be locked up by the law ferm; so you get ur hair permed; so you will look good for court; you'll have to abort, the drug run; you'll have to leave the gun; you'll have to leave back ur native tounge;

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someone plz close this thread jzm won fair u lost take it thurr will b other battles shut da fuck up