Here i want yall to drop the title of your piece and a link to it...this goes for EVERY piece you drop from now on..even if its a battle verse against someone...that way we can basically archive our shit as a crew...

"Mind Journey Part II"

www.soundclick.com/bands/9/wakerecordsmusic.htm

Verse against AKA DAT NIGGA....................i know..its wack but i couldnt be assed and i made it quickly coz im really busy....


One bar used, already amazed and left you totally confused/
ok, everyone watch dat nigga get abused like kids in Catholic schools/
I got more “Pride” then “lions In Packs”...and no Mother fucker can change that/
Cuz I Rearrange-raps so bad... I will Leave your Brain zapped/
U just a hating bitch whos full of ignorance and jealousy/
You couldn’t hold onto my lyrics as if u infected leprosy/
Beat me? Better chance of hearin a moo from a whale/
don't play hard: you know that what I'm saying’s true and you frail/
Just leave you pissed on and proven to be levels behind me/
and all the back in the world won't help when I wrestle ya spine free/

^^that was nice doggety....

this should've ripped divinebloodomen.....

yo Divine-gettin-FERMENTED cuz his bars-FRUIT and I spit-ROTTEN - you aint dropped-nuttin' and you SUCK worse than BARNICLES-on-SHIP-BOTTOMS!
bitch spasticated-on-the-mic and in this battle only FOOLS-die - ya style's-loose-why? cuz with a CATTLE-PROD you couldn't HIT the 'BULLS'-EYE -
Divine - I drop the TIGHT-shit while you comin' at me with 'SLACK'-LINES and just cuz you 'PSYCHOTIC'-FRIENDLY-on-da-mic don't make you 'MAD-NICE!'
It's like 'craftsmanship'-of-SAUSAGES cuz i'm constantly MAKING-HOT-'BANGERS' but you like a CLUMSY astronaught on the moon cuz you only 'DROP-CLANGERS'!!
(whoah shit!!)
Divine couldn't come-SICK if he came at me wit BUBONIC-intentions and I'm sorry-to-mention you wouldn't have no TAILS(tales)-to-tell if you was SONIC-THE-HEDGEHOG!
shit - you couldn't FLIP or TWIST my verbals if you was a CONTORTIONIST - and we'll compare our PENIS-SIZES so you can see the LONG and SHORT-of-it!
But yo - I don't take pride in weak battles and rippin-a-vets-whackness - but DivineBloodOmen is one hell of an 'IN-TENZ'(intense)-FAG like 'CIGARETTE-PACKETS'

<*~switch it up~*>
I'll rock-ya-thesis with-drops-of-heat-that pop-CHEEKS- wit-hot-speech-therapy to knock-ya-teethless -
and-stop-ya-breathin' bitch-ya-teeth-need-cleanin cuz ya breath-rot-SHEATHS-worse-than-COCK-diseases!
Divine-gettin-wasted his-name seems tasteless and-outta-place-shit- like 2D-APEX'S-ya-style's-BASIC -
cuz-ya-faced-with a danger-face-it MCD-blazin-this-phazed-kid-and-like-CLEAN-veins i'll leave-you-WITHOUT-TRACES

Originally posted by MCD
this should've ripped divinebloodomen.....

unfortunately he refuses to post verses..pussy..

^^True...

that was tight d man.....

ouch....

Verse against Tupac in tourney.....


Curiosity kills, Buried this herb to find the root of his supposed skills/
Your history couldn’t rise to the occasion if you was addicted to Viagra Pills/

Weak bastard, I could pose as a Prostitute and Tupac still couldn’t Fuck-with-me/
Dumb bitch, I’m like a Dentist cause you come through appointment and I Professionally bust your teeth/

Pac be chasing victory but unfortunately for him, it’s playing hard to get/
You might as well just forfeit, i’ve dealt with more pussies on RapWorlds then vet’s/

Sorry Pac but I ain’t ya dick so theres no way fore seeing that I’m gunna get beat/
Causing friction between your hand and ya dick is the only u’ll ever bring heat/

The only way you’d win would be if I never existed and you were just dreaming/
your compared to a committed navy recruiter the way your always trying to get semen/

Sending toxins down your throat only option ya have of coughing up something that's raw enough to follow-this/
Shaking from fear, he can't "stand to spit" so he's "bendin-knees-and-swallowin"/

Pac, I'll leave you “hacked” to death when throwing "computer punches" the way they "mega-hurt”(megahurtz)/
Left you with a severed verse, stuck on "unemployment" coz I heard ya style "never-works"/

that last punch was ill.

Left you with a severed verse, stuck on "unemployment" coz I heard ya style "never-works"/

i like that, lol

yeah...too bad it got wasted on a biter.......obviously were not asking him to join anymore

Verse against Truth in tourney; some of it was from the verse against Pac and i were allowed to use it, so i thought y not....lol

When I rip dogs, people compare me to that bitch, Cruela Devil
Im a medicine companies best asset; coz im forever ill

I knew that you wanted to get beat by the illest, He wantd the battle on purpose
You were one of the best MC's....Until you started to write your own verses//

Yeah Truth made the Quarter finals.. but he’ll hardly ever win it
There's a huge “gap” between us and this bitch is too busy shopping in it

Sorry Truth but I ain’t ya dick so theres no way fore seeing that I’m gunna get beat/
Causing friction between your hand and ya dick is the only u’ll ever bring heat/

The only way you’d win would be if I never existed and you were just dreaming/
Your compared to a committed navy recruiter the way your always trying to get semen/

Your Gateway to victory is stayin on strike, you cant comp-ete/
Tryin to bend truth, when reality is in any lifetime you'll still get fucking beat/

Sending toxins down your throat only option ya have of coughing up something that's raw enough to follow-this/
Shaking from fear, he can't "stand to spit" so he's "bendin-knees-and-swallowin"/

Truth, I'll leave you “hacked” to death when throwing "computer punches" the way they "mega-hurt”(megahurtz)/
Left you with a severed verse, stuck on "unemployment" coz I heard ya style "never-works"/


^^feedback plz....:D

The Way It Is (Dont Deny) (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=5903)

Apocalyptic Countdown (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=6014)

Heres 2 of my latest text drops. Got some good feedback on em, so I'm using it to keep on elevating. Check em out if you already havent done so.

here's the verse I dropped against Blood Hound in my latest battle, waiting on him to drop, give feedback where I need to improve cuz I'm still trying to elevate


I'll grasp-your-chin, while rippin ur eyes out from the-socket-within now let's watch u try and 'see'-a-win//
ILL spits-sins to smash body-limbs the only way you could ever match me is if we were conjoined-twins//
Keep-your-stance by playing the lottery hoping to win cuz that's the only way you stood-a-chance//
Hypnotic flows even from-a-glance, ur in my control because lyrically onslaughts leave you in-a-trance//
At Chuckie Cheese Birthday party-lunches will be the only time your ever serving-punches//(punch drink)
'Nestle' like cuz all your bars-crunch, I'll eat the crumbs cuz on weak emcee's I only-munch//
Verbally-disperse ONE line to send you into a death-hearse because I'm the master of the UNI-verse//
What's worst? Your-purse or the fact that I give out more prescribed shots than a registered-nurse//
Blood-Covered-Hound with a white outline mark is where-your-bound so that your death-is-found//
All-punches-crown your face knock-you-down like a circle all I needed was 1 line to complete-a-ROUND//

your flows improved a LOT in a short space of time...good stuff man, you elevate quickly.

ILL spits-sins to smash body-limbs the only way you could ever match me is if we were conjoined-twins//

that was a good punch^^

i like your bar structure too.

the multis just need a little work, like in that bar^

spits-sins
body-limbs
conjoined-twins

the last words all rhyme (sins, limbs, twins) but spits, body, conjoined - dont rhyme with each other, so leave out the hyphens, cuz thats what they indicate... if they all were multis with each other that bar would have sounded incredibly good.

but big props for the improvement

TOR diss in drop rhymes....just felt like doing it


I'm just moving-with-the-crowd-here to diss some loser-kids-who-sound-queer
Acting like they Ill...time to abuse-these-kids-and-mount-fear//
What crew-is-shit? no-doubt-here, TOR's as whack-as-they-get
The fact-is-your-best shit's about as tight...as a crack-whore-in-bed//
I'll snap-all-your-necks backwards, when im finished youll need clinic-help
"Thugged Out Ryders?" Pssssht, the name's an insult in-itself//
But don't even start me on that, i could spit something ominous
but it's obvious if I flipped the name ---> it'd turn into a compliment//
I rock-this-shit exempt-from-flaws, most people here are blessed-with-cause
but you talentless kids just post here, cuz you only have friends on message-boards//


__________________

^^funny shit..........


ill-lyrix hasnt been on for a while.....hm......

i'm here been real busy with work past week

yo this is my verse for a collab i did

I have a desire to lie and it’s too hard to realize//
Watch the fire in your eyes as it slowly subsides//
Every time I need something yo, it’s already broken//
People hate the words I speak, before they spoken//
I can’t believe the wave of destruction left in my path//
Just heed what I say cuz not often I’m discussion my past//
I walk home to see my environment failing around me//
As I hear the cops sirens wailing as they surround me//
I fear no man or woman or cruel fate to be dealt//
Put a gun to my head go ahead I’ll pull the trigger myself//
Universally I spread my ideas of conspiring controversy//
Cursing at the sky at the heavenly father who wishes to verse me//
I’m on my knees pleading for my only father to hear my calls//
These things I’ve seen are repeated every time a tear falls/
I’m sorry to my mother for all the nights she cried for help//
And to all others my bad your right, I hate to lie, so I hate myself//

can i have some feedback please? im trying to elevate...

Ha Ha,
Witness vision "ripallthat" rookie~cats~insanity,Inflicting~mental~calamity,Im the textcee Vet here to put~pussy~cats~too~sleep/
rest~in~"piece's" cos~i~unleash verbals that slice your ligaments~wit~ease, compared~to~me im an astronaught your sub~marine~underseas/
Im a Royal British Marine laying~siege to washington~dc,you aint an mc your pv(pvc)~stuck to "fallacys"~butt~cheek, main~event~this~week~please.../pfft
im the most most "skillful assassin" your ever likely~to~meet,"rip's" sensing~defeat so's trying to get ill from salmonela~infected~meat/
I remove "Lyrical's" tongue from "r.i.p's" penis, placin "impakts" hand~back cos "TSA" nicknamed~official~torpedo~cleaners/
i saw the "karnage" coming~from~this,no one will eva be feelin~your~"hits",like elton tryin ta~spit~tight~shit~wit~thick~glasses at a live~gig while~slittin~his~wrists/
you can only be called tight if (w)rapped~in~elastic,cos your flows sticky and extatic~like~orgasmic~spastics/
your battle records decieving it says~wins~14. check the names you pistol~wippin wanksta theres only 12/
"rips" all ready dead~skinned~and~served,TSA wanta bring some then hell be sprinkled~wit~herbs/