View Full Version : Syn-drum vs Tyke
syn-drum 03-11-2003, 05:23 PM 5 bars
1 bar = 2 lines
no gay shady ass votes
u spit first kus u wanted it
no biting recycling that crap
thatss it cmon cmon now......~pieces~
I'll get this shit done by tonite and posted within 24 hours, just chekin in..
I ain't got shit to do so.
You can bet ya wetted neck, ya weak punches won’t connect
like using a dead cell phone, in an attempt to call collect
Ya won’t die from blood loss, cause you’ll spill so much you’ll drown
by the way you misspelled your last name, and forgot your first one, Down
Ya too busy feelin suspect, that you didn’t see me,, Wahts next?
I’m gonna eat all your fucking organs, head first, because I love necks
when I’m done you’ve become a blood mess, no luck could get you success
your lines are fucking fowl, my punches ain’t so try and duck this
I’m like ya momma’s snatch, somthing no man should try to fuck wit
your rhyme completly blow’s me away.... But only cause you suck dick!
syn-drum 03-12-2003, 05:38 PM .................................................. .................................................. .....
The pictures i drew in the 3rd-grade explain more than ya word-play //
When im done witchu itll look like i spilt juice on the street kus ima leave the curb-stained //
Tyke cant handle-me-please..U blowin my style kus Tyke a Fan-of-my-steez //
Brang EXTACSY in a bag with me...kus im takin this Battle-with-E's //
Ur gonna get FUCKED this kids-a-homo...Syn's a fatal attraction like horror flick-promo's //
Syn get u expelled like principles....dont u get it kid-go-home //
Faggot sittin on cocks-all-day..this battles a ROLL OVER like dogs-that-obey //
Ur wack a flop-so-lame..got dropped-thrown-away gonna get shot-prone-to-strays //
This case-is-biast once i state-my-alliance n apply it to tyke n u site em shakin-n-cryin //
Ur as fake-as-signs...tyke made me put my watch on my hip kus this is a waste-of-time //
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~pieces~
You got a lil skill, thanks for not wasten my time.
VOTES PEEPS!!!
Vote=TYKE.......
tyke had better flow....nice lines.....his rhymes made sense.....unlike that other kid.....i especially liked tyke's endin lines....hot.....syn-drum....alot of your shit was cool but there was lines that wasnt makin sense.....your flow was off a bit......therefore my vote goes to
TYKE..
Gangsta fo life 03-13-2003, 08:02 AM Flow=Tyke
Vocabulary=Syn
Rhymes=Syn
Play=Syn
Therefore my vote goes to Syn
EvydencE 03-13-2003, 08:42 AM tyke?????????
jizm a DR .. ahha .. he mad cuz he lost to me and iM in civillians too ...
vote = syn easily ..
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syn-drum 03-13-2003, 04:24 PM "your rhyme completly blow’s me away.... But only cause you suck dick!"
wow jizz is right......that is a wicked last line........
n if u dont get my lines.....u either dont know wordplay or ur looking for it when its not there........
~pieces~
evydence you aint beat me kid...the votes u got for u dont count idiot....yall niggas got shit to prove not me so i understand why yall actin like this....youll ALWAYS be below me...hahaa....trash crew.
syn-drum 03-13-2003, 10:54 PM 2-1 more voting less talking
how the fuck does Evydence's vote count? thats a crew vote if ever i saw one. - No shady votes
Originally posted by syn-drum
"your rhyme completly blow’s me away.... But only cause you suck dick!"
wow jizz is right......that is a wicked last line........
n if u dont get my lines.....u either dont know wordplay or ur looking for it when its not there........
~pieces~
Yeah, it was way better than "Ur as fake-as-signs...tyke made me put my watch on my hip kus this is a waste-of-time //"
I hate people who use other peeps battles as a platform for head talking. If your reall with th spirit of this shit, then you give two good looks at each verse, rate each verse, and compare. I don't cry if a bunch of kids don't vote for my shit, but if they don't like my material, then a couple of sentances explaining why(in their eyes) it wasn't good would be great. None of us are rap stars, so you can either be like, "fuck yall, I'm the greatest, nothing I wrote is remotly wack, and I don't care what yall think", or you can retain an open mind about other peoples opinions regarding your shit, and use their feedback to try and elevate. Peeps like EvydencE have no buisness participating in this if they have to act like fucking children, almost all your post was directed at shit talkin JIZM. "syn wins easily", Why???? Becuase of a real reason, or just cause you don't like JIZM, and therefore my assosiation with him makes me wack. Props to gangsta fo life for at least attempting to give a breakdown.
sTreet kIng 03-17-2003, 11:54 PM Syn-Drum
Bars were lomg amd drawn out and tha flow was a lil off. Not many good punches but sum pretty good wordplay. Ive seen u come harder...
Tyke cant handle-me-please..U blowin my style kus Tyke a Fan-of-my-steez //
Brang EXTACSY in a bag with me...kus im takin this Battle-with-E's //
^^Best part of your verse...
Ur gonna get FUCKED this kids-a-homo...Syn's a fatal attraction like horror flick-promo's //
Syn get u expelled like principles....dont u get it kid-go-home //
^^Not bad but flow is off a bit
Tyke
Good flow and a couple good punches. Decent wordplay. Pretty solid verse...
You can bet ya wetted neck, ya weak punches won’t connect
like using a dead cell phone, in an attempt to call collect
^^Good opener
I’m like ya momma’s snatch, somthing no man should try to fuck wit
your rhyme completly blow’s me away.... But only cause you suck dick!
^^Good punch and flow
Vote: Tyke
Mad nice Whispers, I just critiqued your battle, peace
aight it's 2-1 in Tyke's favor cuz Evydence's vote doesn't count - thats my decision and i don't think you can argue cuz there was No analysis or anything whatsoever - uppin for more votes.
yeah, if he comes back with a break down of both ehymes it can count.. I 'm not too worried about winning or losing
DA_PRISTINE_1 03-23-2003, 06:36 PM simply put....i was expecting more from Tyke......
Prestige...
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