View Full Version : LW- Ide-Ill vs D-Illar 1 (3-4)


Vokals
11-08-2005, 03:10 AM
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D-Illar-1
11-08-2005, 08:46 AM
I'm cool with your crew..I guess they can vote on this...Good luck..

Go the full 5..

IdE-iLL™
11-09-2005, 04:59 PM
Oh shit, check.....

D-Illar-1
11-13-2005, 06:39 AM
It's been a minute since I dropped some text shit, but let's do this...

Once I kill him, he'll vanquish; D's always spitting the greatness, and I could join AP, where the other cats shit on his rankings...His crew position's simple and basic, Pissed made Ide the ho/Idaho like words in the Indian language...

Can he drop this hot? I believe prolly not, he'll have to brew some serious shit like a sewage plant coffee shop...I'm at my bottom notch, and to beat me, you'll need a lot on your side as if you were a stadium parking spot...

He's wack, outdated; my style's embraced, sick, that's why I'm taking this win without invasions...Your drops? I'll clown them gay shits, so this is an EZ win(d) like UL members flagellating..

...Bada Bing! From D-Illar-1...

IdE-iLL™
11-13-2005, 10:46 AM
I'll go 3..

IdE-iLL™
11-13-2005, 02:35 PM
. D-Illar-1 .. Jay Redd .
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..After I'm Done, It'll Take Some Time To Fix Him, Personals? Pfft, Your Lines Are Fiction, And You Dull, Cos 'If I Were U', Quite Frankly.. 'My Name Would Be A Fine Description'..
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(UdE-uLL = You Dull)

..About To Smash Him In, Cos I'm Out To Hassle Him, And His Rhymes Dry, Cos Only People Saying "It's D, Sent To Reign" Is Tourists Glorifying Wet Weather To Doubtful Africans..
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(It's Decent To Rain)

You Just Can't Escape The Fires, D-Illar Rusty? Pfft, This Fake's Expired, Cos These Days, Only Time You Hear: "Hey Illar, Mental Adverb!" Is When Listing Blake's Alias'..
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(iLLa MenTaL = XxAdverbxX = Blake)

You A Bitch? Yep, Figures, Watch Me Click Tech Triggers, Jay Red Is Fake, Cos Only Time JR Write A Verse Hell Real, Is Battles Between Dipset Niggas..
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(JR Writer vs Hell Rell)

I'll Send Him To Hell - Travel Down Emission Free! Gather Round And Listen, See.. It's Like You A Bad Fisher D, Cos You Looking For Clam In The Tidal, Without A Fish In Sea..
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(Looking For Claiming The Title, Without Efficiency)

IdE-iLL™
11-13-2005, 02:50 PM
Yeah, I know, I did 5, but it's w/e... G'luck D..

.Inphinite.
11-13-2005, 04:05 PM
Can both of you post names/links of battles you've voted on, please.


Anyway, Illar:

Once I kill him, he'll vanquish; D's always spitting the greatness, and I could join AP, where the other cats shit on his rankings...His crew position's simple and basic, Pissed made Ide the ho/Idaho like words in the Indian language..
^ Nice start... multi is a little off but its still worded nicely, imo.

Can he drop this hot? I believe prolly not, he'll have to brew some serious shit like a sewage plant coffee shop...I'm at my bottom notch, and to beat me, you'll need a lot on your side as if you were a stadium parking spot..
^ The "a lot" flip is similar to Aero's so meh... its still a decent punch, tho..

He's wack, outdated; my style's embraced, sick, that's why I'm taking this win without invasions...Your drops? I'll clown them gay shits, so this is an EZ win(d) like UL members flagellating..
^ Yea, Aussies have a habit of farting... *looks at Pissed*.. smh.. but its a cool bar..


Ide-Ill:

..After I'm Done, It'll Take Some Time To Fix Him, Personals? Pfft, Your Lines Are Fiction, And You Dull, Cos 'If I Were U', Quite Frankly.. 'My Name Would Be A Fine Description'..
^ Its a bit forced but its aight still... multi is nice

..About To Smash Him In, Cos I'm Out To Hassle Him, And His Rhymes Dry, Cos Only People Saying "It's D, Sent To Reign" Is Tourists Glorifying Wet Weather To Doubtful Africans..
^ Nice line... multi a lil off but nice punch

You Just Can't Escape The Fires, D-Illar Rusty? Pfft, This Fake's Expired, Cos These Days, Only Time You Hear: "Hey Illar, Mental Adverb!" Is When Listing Blake's Alias'..
^I thought it was a bit forced but, coulda been worded better. Nice attempt at creativity, tho.

You A Bitch? Yep, Figures, Watch Me Click Tech Triggers, Jay Red Is Fake, Cos Only Time JR Write A Verse Hell Real, Is Battles Between Dipset Niggas..
^ LoL... Nice personal/punch

I'll Send Him To Hell - Travel Down Emission Free! Gather Round And Listen, See.. It's Like You A Bad Fisher D, Cos You Looking For Clam In The Tidal, Without A Fish In Sea
^ Very forced... "claimin the title without effeciency" is jus too much of a stretch... Its a semi-decent idea, tho.


Overall, I thought Illar came nice and so did Ide. I thought Ide had two filler bars and Illar had the one... but, Ide wrote more so was able to kinda redeem himself, so vote - Ide-Ill.

Xkwisite
11-13-2005, 08:27 PM
First off....SInce Ide said that he/she was going to do three....and then come back and do five is a bit shady......smh......(I only counted the first three bars).....

Punches: Illar....Ide's were either badly worded or stretched....
Personals: N/A...niether side had good personals....
Multis: Illar...barely....
Wordplay: Illar....the flagulating line and the Idaho line.....Ide tried to do a nameplay with the I were U....but the pronunciation doesnt work for the nameplay....
Creativity: Illar.....for the reasons i explained above....
Vote: Illar...


This battle wasnt that great.......both sides could've done better........illar edged it.....

Aero
11-14-2005, 01:08 PM
Illar:

Once I kill him, he'll vanquish; D's always spitting the greatness, and I could join AP, where the other cats shit on his rankings...His crew position's simple and basic, Pissed made Ide the ho/Idaho like words in the Indian language...
^ Nah... could've been worded Ide A Ho

Can he drop this hot? I believe prolly not, he'll have to brew some serious shit like a sewage plant coffee shop...I'm at my bottom notch, and to beat me, you'll need a lot on your side as if you were a stadium parking spot...
^ 1st line was coo... Lot/ Parking lines are played

He's wack, outdated; my style's embraced, sick, that's why I'm taking this win without invasions...Your drops? I'll clown them gay shits, so this is an EZ win(d) like UL members flagellating
^ simple... Kind of corny


Ide-Ill

..After I'm Done, It'll Take Some Time To Fix Him, Personals? Pfft, Your Lines Are Fiction, And You Dull, Cos 'If I Were U', Quite Frankly.. 'My Name Would Be A Fine Description'..
^ this was coo... but almost not a diss in a sense

..About To Smash Him In, Cos I'm Out To Hassle Him, And His Rhymes Dry, Cos Only People Saying "It's D, Sent To Reign" Is Tourists Glorifying Wet Weather To Doubtful Africans..
^ Could've used different wording... Nobody says "it's decent to rain" unless it's a foreign thing.

You Just Can't Escape The Fires, D-Illar Rusty? Pfft, This Fake's Expired, Cos These Days, Only Time You Hear: "Hey Illar, Mental Adverb!" Is When Listing Blake's Alias'.
^ Did this rhyme in your accent or something?

Rationale: Each of Illar's punches were basic I think Ide had more creativity. Ide's last bar was pretty bad but D's "lot" bar offset it. I'm voting tie..

IdE-iLL™
11-14-2005, 02:31 PM
Is that 2-2?

Aura
11-14-2005, 03:18 PM
Yes, that would make it 2-2 I believe... However, you guys are not exempt from the rules... At least post one link or the battle will be closed..

Jase
11-14-2005, 04:53 PM
D-Illar 1

Once I kill him, he'll vanquish; D's always spitting the greatness, and I could join AP, where the other cats shit on his rankings...His crew position's simple and basic, Pissed made Ide the ho/Idaho like words in the Indian language...

..Nice punch..some of the multiez was off but ok..

Can he drop this hot? I believe prolly not, he'll have to brew some serious shit like a sewage plant coffee shop...I'm at my bottom notch, and to beat me, you'll need a lot on your side as if you were a stadium parking spot...

..Nice..feelin the meta..flow was on point..

He's wack, outdated; my style's embraced, sick, that's why I'm taking this win without invasions...Your drops? I'll clown them gay shits, so this is an EZ win(d) like UL members flagellating..

..Wind iz played..not feelin this bar as much as the others..

Ide-Ill

..After I'm Done, It'll Take Some Time To Fix Him, Personals? Pfft, Your Lines Are Fiction, And You Dull, Cos 'If I Were U', Quite Frankly.. 'My Name Would Be A Fine Description'..

..Nice multiez..flowz on point..wordplayz aite..

..About To Smash Him In, Cos I'm Out To Hassle Him, And His Rhymes Dry, Cos Only People Saying "It's D, Sent To Reign" Is Tourists Glorifying Wet Weather To Doubtful Africans..

..This iz aite..didn't really hit hard..multiez was kl again but reignz played..

You Just Can't Escape The Fires, D-Illar Rusty? Pfft, This Fake's Expired, Cos These Days, Only Time You Hear: "Hey Illar, Mental Adverb!" Is When Listing Blake's Alias'..

..Nah weren't feelin this very much..But multiez and flow was on point again..

You A Bitch? Yep, Figures, Watch Me Click Tech Triggers, Jay Red Is Fake, Cos Only Time JR Write A Verse Hell Real, Is Battles Between Dipset Niggas..

..Complikated but i was feelin this one..original and on point..

I'll Send Him To Hell - Travel Down Emission Free! Gather Round And Listen, See.. It's Like You A Bad Fisher D, Cos You Looking For Clam In The Tidal, Without A Fish In Sea..

..Nice..complikated again but it worked..

Flow - Ide..
Multiez - Ide..
Wordplay/Metaz - Ide..
Punchez - Illar..
Personalz - Both..there weren't really much..

Vote - Ide..Close battle but Ide edged it..probably cuz he was able to hit more cuz he wrote more..not quantity over quality or something like that but he had more chance to hit..

D-Illar-1
11-14-2005, 09:04 PM
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=667584&posted=1#post667584

Total Prophet
11-15-2005, 04:02 AM
D illar 1

Once I kill him, he'll vanquish; D's always spitting the greatness, and I could join AP, where the other cats shit on his rankings...His crew position's simple and basic, Pissed made Ide the ho/Idaho like words in the Indian language...

Nice wordplay and personal went straight at him out the gate

Can he drop this hot? I believe prolly not, he'll have to brew some serious shit like a sewage plant coffee shop...I'm at my bottom notch, and to beat me, you'll need a lot on your side as if you were a stadium parking spot...

Damn nice punche really like this one

He's wack, outdated; my style's embraced, sick, that's why I'm taking this win without invasions...Your drops? I'll clown them gay shits, so this is an EZ win(d) like UL members flagellating..


Nice way to close it up overall i thought this was a solid verse not much wrong with it

Ide-ill

After I'm Done, It'll Take Some Time To Fix Him, Personals? Pfft, Your Lines Are Fiction, And You Dull, Cos 'If I Were U', Quite Frankly.. 'My Name Would Be A Fine Description'..
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Nice opener i like this bar

..About To Smash Him In, Cos I'm Out To Hassle Him, And His Rhymes Dry, Cos Only People Saying "It's D, Sent To Reign" Is Tourists Glorifying Wet Weather To Doubtful Africans..
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Still pretty good consistent

You Just Can't Escape The Fires, D-Illar Rusty? Pfft, This Fake's Expired, Cos These Days, Only Time You Hear: "Hey Illar, Mental Adverb!" Is When Listing Blake's Alias'..
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Best bar from you imo

This was a pretty tough battle for me but in the end I think illar focus more on his opponent with the harder personals that just sealed the deal for me.

Vote Illar

IdE-iLL™
11-15-2005, 05:28 PM
I voted on your battle Noc.

Vokals
11-16-2005, 07:06 AM
Flow- easily illar, Ide's were stretched horribly and added too many words that didnt need to be said
Multis- illar... same as above... Ide's multis matched poorly too
Personals- tie, nothing was stand out by either one, wasnt really feelin the name flips either
Punches- illar, his made more sense and were direct, werent long and drawn out like ide's
W/P Metas- both had some, nothing that shined out over the other person.. so tie

Overall- Illar... verse was more solid for what he had, flowed solidly and multis were better, punches were a little more direct..

3-4 illar... voting over...