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Keystyle:

.....At one time you excelled to Fame now your image peeps Seldom Claim
Haven't come 'correct with words' since you changed & mispelled the name
I bring hell to lames, & to finish his hope all I need is a sentence or quote
I'll Send him afloat, like Fat peeps in tug-of-war, TR's at the "end of his Rope"
....Will I benefit? NO! My advice is to bite my rhymes but don't get caught
Or steal my car in a Dark area. Honestly, Just take it from me and get Lost!
DBO's damned, I'm the Repo man, here to take fans that Might support him
...............Because I'm known for staying above The Rim like Michael Jordan

* Remnat is supposed to be spelled remnaNt

Beating me?....You "stand no chants(chance) like paralyzed monks"
cause your demise was "plane(plain) to see like the twin towers" chump
Aero you suck bad like virgins giving head , so I'm "breaking you off like Jesus did bread"
You "blowing diss" like the Wolf did to the pigs' houses , or like the wind does to chicks blouses...Ko'ed wit "more counters than whats under Welfare vouchers"

...


Interesting....



Punches: Aero, DBO's were slightly played....
Personals: A, Misspelling of name line
Multis: A DBO didnt have many, if any...
Creativity: A
Wordplay: A Redundant category...
Delivery: niether...i didnt like A's non-chalant like keystyle...it wasnt a blatant thing like he usually gives...
Vote: A

^ Vote discounted - needs to be more thorough, please X. Even a final summary sentence will do.

Can both of you post links/names to battles you've voted on, please.

Before I start... I'd just like to say that I am well aware that there is no crew voting... However, I'm going to go ahead and place a vote, and if DBO would like to discount it, that's perfectly fine with me... I'll be as crisp as possible...

Aero's Verse:

[.....At one time you excelled to Fame now your image peeps Seldom Claim
Haven't come 'correct with words' since you changed & mispelled the name]

This is my opinion, was a very strong opener... For the reasons that it had a nice blend of multies and a hard hitting personal punch... This punchline alone was damaging, considering the name is spelled incorrectly...Nice open and punch..

[I bring hell to lames, & to finish his hope all I need is a sentence or quote
I'll Send him afloat, like Fat peeps in tug-of-war, TR's at the "end of his Rope"]

Again, nice multies... Punchline wasn't so hard hitting, however the similie in comparison was pretty good...

[....Will I benefit? NO! My advice is to bite my rhymes but don't get caught
Or steal my car in a Dark area. Honestly, Just take it from me and get Lost!]

Eh...Your chain of multies sort of went off in these lines... Also, the punchline wasn't as hard hitting either... The word play was decent... I understood.. But I don't think everyone would be able to understand your second line as easy... Maybe could've been worded a bit better..

[DBO's damned, I'm the Repo man, here to take fans that Might support him
...............Because I'm known for staying above The Rim like Michael Jordan]

All right close... The second line containing the punch, concept is kind of played... But considering it was used cleverly as a name flip, you pulled it off...


Not as good as I'm use to seeing my friend... I can tell you didn't put as much effort into this verse as you normally would...However, it still came out to be pretty decent... You lacked those "shockers" that you usually have... I'd rate it over-all an 8/10...


The Remnat's Verse:

[Beating me?....You "stand no chants(chance) like paralyzed monks"
cause your demise was "plane(plain) to see like the twin towers" chump]

All right open... First line was nice, pretty good word play... Slight touch of punch effect... The second line..? Definately played... The word play and the concept itself... Maybe you should've tried with something a bit different..?

[Aero you suck bad like virgins giving head , so I'm "breaking you off like Jesus did bread"
You "blowing diss" like the Wolf did to the pigs' houses , or like the wind does to chicks blouses...Ko'ed wit "more counters than whats under Welfare vouchers"]

Don't know what happened here exactly.... Seems as if you may have missed out a line... Either that, or the style change was horrible.. The Jesus line was all right... I've heard it a few times.. The 3 pigs line was cool, very original... However, nothing really stood out punchline wise... Your closing line was pretty good... Had to be the hardest hitting punch in the whole verse..


Definately, you need to get back into your groove again... I've seen WAY better battle verses from you over time... Seems like you played around with this one as well... Nothing was to astonishing about it... Over all, it was ok... kind of lacked good content... I'd say 7.5/10... The original lines gave it a bit more appeal..
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Battle was kind of sleepy... But most of the first round battles it seems everyone is just joking around with... This wasn't one of the best when it comes to people who can come up with good punches such as yourselves...

Punches: Aero
Wordplay: The Remnant
Originality: The Remnant
Personals: Aero
Content: Aero
Flow: Aero
Multies: Aero
Complexity: Aero

I don't know if I added the right categories... I'll change it if I need to... But..

Vote: Aero



^ And that's all honesty....:(

Actually... You know what? Being as though you want to be a smart ass... Both of you get a link and PM it to one of the mods.. Until then, this battle is closed..

There's some politics for you...:(








UPDATED:

I'm re-opening this battle for the time being only because the voting is coming slow... You still need to post links though or it'll be closed eventually...

.....At one time you excelled to Fame now your image peeps Seldom Claim
Haven't come 'correct with words' since you changed & mispelled the name
^Pretty cool opener...

I bring hell to lames, & to finish his hope all I need is a sentence or quote
I'll Send him afloat, like Fat peeps in tug-of-war, TR's at the "end of his Rope"
^Decent....Kinda played...

....Will I benefit? NO! My advice is to bite my rhymes but don't get caught
Or steal my car in a Dark area. Honestly, Just take it from me and get Lost!
^LOL...Decent...

DBO's damned, I'm the Repo man, here to take fans that Might support him
...............Because I'm known for staying above The Rim like Michael Jordan
^OK nameflip

Beating me?....You "stand no chants(chance) like paralyzed monks"
cause your demise was "plane(plain) to see like the twin towers" chump
^Played...

Aero you suck bad like virgins giving head , so I'm "breaking you off like Jesus did bread"
^Played...

You "blowing diss" like the Wolf did to the pigs' houses , or like the wind does to chicks blouses...Ko'ed wit "more counters than whats under Welfare vouchers"
^Kinda played...

Basically, Aero's verse was weak and he didn't really try. The wordplay was so-so, but the multies and flow were good. Remnant's verse had solid flow and aight multies, but really played wordplay, which made for weak punches...

VOTE: Aero.

^^^yeah you right..........its totally my fault for not battling and reading anybodies verse for the last two years , you hit it on the nail

props to Aero's verse it was appauling~ly original and mythical - you gave me the chance to really come hard......but I......I failed

I was trapped in a time vessel , therefore my punches are years old like George Foremans

Thanks for the great breakdown of verses D...next time I'll vote for you on one of your battles , so you can vote for me...just don't tell know one ok

Lol....Thats what I miss about the old RW!

I 'll send you/or post the links Mr.Nocturnal Mod God Of Doom

Aero

.....At one time you excelled to Fame now your image peeps Seldom Claim
Haven't come 'correct with words' since you changed & mispelled the name

Nice punch here first line ok but made up for it with personal

I bring hell to lames, & to finish his hope all I need is a sentence or quote
I'll Send him afloat, like Fat peeps in tug-of-war, TR's at the "end of his Rope"

haha nice bar consistent

....Will I benefit? NO! My advice is to bite my rhymes but don't get caught
Or steal my car in a Dark area. Honestly, Just take it from me and get Lost!

first line again alright second line nice

DBO's damned, I'm the Repo man, here to take fans that Might support him
...............Because I'm known for staying above The Rim like Michael Jordan

Nice ass closer overall nice verse from you consistent with the punches

The Remnat

Beating me?....You "stand no chants(chance) like paralyzed monks"
cause your demise was "plane(plain) to see like the twin towers" chump

Iunno not feeling that one

Aero you suck bad like virgins giving head , so I'm "breaking you off like Jesus did bread"

still not too hard of a punch

You "blowing diss" like the Wolf did to the pigs' houses , or like the wind does to chicks blouses...Ko'ed wit "more counters than whats under Welfare vouchers"

Okay closer your verse lacked in harder punches you have the idea but it did not work out

Vote Aero

aiight Aero thats whats up.......congrats