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sup checking in

let me get this over with take this key,

I aint gone play with you Dad, Imma cut you with punches until I split you in half,
finish you fast, im above you, and you getting with me is impossible like trying to fuck a girrafe,
When my lyrical baretta blast, the metaphors confuse you and leave ya head spinnin,
Ill dispose of this "Child", like desperate moms at planned parenthood clinics,
Your lyrics is dead and "dry", almost like you let your rhymebook sit in the "sun",
So answer this question "Dad", how the fuck does it feel to get Sonned by your "son",
The young one, $tack$ damn all I need is a key to defeat you,
You a "pussy" you prolly wear black pants so the "blood" stains dont seep through,
You deserve a Award though, because your good at trying to act hard,
But beating me in a battle is out of your reach like trying to get a black card,

ya style is wack its all over the place like chickens with they head "cut~off"
like retards it wont matter if you finish your work in the last minute your brains "still~off"

like bob dole your on your "fall~years"
plus you dont make sense like bethoven saying im "all~ears"

ill smack the shit outta ya head and it will be gone like a fat bitches knee~jerk~reaction"
have ya standing around like mexicans that "see~no work~action"

dickriding must have sprung~ya~back like when kids meet the "jacksons"
like the saying nothing is certain except young~stack's death and his funeral "taxes"

young stacks likes gay plumbers when the wrench~incudes and put it in all the way up to the knee"
you are what you eat so you must eat french~ foods cuse your nothing but a "pussy"

Punches :: Tie

Pretty matched up disses from both sides, nothing more to say on this.

Wordplay :: $tack$

You both had a bunch of pretty simple comparisons like the Jackson line (Dad) and the Rhyme book line (Stacks). But I think $tack$ had slightly more hard-hitting wordplay in places and more complex, although both verses could've used more complexity. Compare the simple, and not hard-hitting wordplay about the Mexicans to Stacks' wordplay about the Dispose of this Son.

Personals :: $tack$

ImYourDad you had like no personals at all. I don't think you even mentioned his name, let alone a real personal. Stacks all you had was nameplay which wins this category but in the future get more complex personals about actual shit the person has said/done. But yeah $tacks had the Son/Dad line which was alrite but kinda played/predictable.

Multis :: $tacks

ImYourDad if you're gonna have multi schemes that are only 2-3 syllables long, then you should make them exactly rhyming. Taxes/Jacksons is decent, KneeJerkReaction multi barely rhymes with the next line. Still Off and Cut off don't rhyme as multis. Stacks you didn't use too many multis but in the first bar you had Split You in Half/Finish You fast which is an exact multi, and Giraffe fits with In Half but not with the entire multi but pretty good.

Flow/Structure :: Tie

Both had ups and downs but overall decent flow from both.

Creativity :: Tie

$tacks had the more interesting verse, but IYD tried too. He put in some original lines, maybe they weren't nice as punches, but nevertheless they were creative. $tacks had some nice wordplay that was pretty creative but some played shit too.

Enjoyment :: $tack$

IYD your verse honestly bored me. It didn't rhyme all that well and none of the punches even brought a chuckle or smile to my face or anything of the sort. $tacks your verse had some alrite punches here and there. The Son/Dad punch I expected to see in your verse but it still is pretty funny. Fuck a Giraffe lol creative comparison.

Vote :: Stacks

thanks for the vote 1-0 young stacks

Punches: Tie
Personals: Stacks
Word Play: Stacks
Multies: Stacks
Originality: ImYourDad
Structure/Flow: Stacks
Enjoyment: Stacks


Seemed pretty one sided to me... Stacks came a bit harder, edged it with his punchlines... IYD, you had some nice lines and good creativity, but didn't come as strong...



The both of you need links also... I'll give you another day..

Punches - Tied... Close Cat... Neither Came Spectacular...
Personals - Stacks... IYD Didn't Have Any...
Multies - Stacks... Didn't Hinder His Flow Or Anything...
Metas - Stacks... Better And More Complex...
Flow - Tied... Both Had Good And Bad Flow In Places...
Creativity - Stacks...
Complexity - Stacks...



Overall - Stacks... Really One-Sided IMO... IYD Had A Few Good Lines But I Felt He Wasn't On Target The Whole Time... Seemed Like You Were More Focused On Nice Multies Than Nice Punches...

Young-Stacks wins by KO...



Stacks, all you need to do is post your links, and I'll close and move this...

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=54902

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=667691&posted=1#post667691

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