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3-5 Bars

G'luck

check up. hey Influence this my first battle on here so make me work. don't embarrass me too bad though.

good luck man

Ok G/L...This My Second...Lets Get It...

Cripplin This Ho, I Go And [Lower-Yo-Esteem].. ..Spin A Newbie, So He Is [Always-Comin-Weak].. You Originally Speak??,.. ..Nah Boy You Just Bleek.. .And !n Spin, This Overaged Loser, Into The Next 3 Tourneys Of The RW [Battle-League!!!!]...(WORD!!!!!)

This Mans Hits Come Like Vegetarians, Cause He [Always-Spittin-Lighter].. ..[I Spark-This-Fool] Like Lil Wheezy, The Man With Fire.. ..And Blade Thesis Wanna Say [That-He-Tighter??].. ..And Only Way Spinna Could Get Votes.. ..Is If He Was A [HW-Division-DICK RIDER]...

I Spit, And Twist Him [In-A-Bind].. ..He Like Ray Charles [Not Seein-Or-Understanding Me], When Im Droppin Them Sick Rhymes.. ..He Like Caspar In The Text Forum, He A [Busta- Without-The-Rhymes]...

Rock-At-Ya-Grill With Murderouz, [Skills-To-Kill].. ..This Man Thinkin He Hot, But He The [Definition-Of-Not-Being-Ill].. ..He Comin With-Begginner-Training, So The End Of The End Of This Is !nfluence (3), And Spinna (Nill)(0)


Aight I Did 4 Bars...Spinna, Just Match The Bar Length...Or Do Five...Your Choice

I Voted On E.Z's Battle...Ill Vote On Another Once They Get Active

My Second One Is SoHomo Vs. Young-Legacy

Links

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=664321&posted=1#post664321

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=54909

Spinna's drop
5 bars

Congratulations!... You were honored to be my first
But you lost patience and too quickly your nut burst
Cause my flow excites like that, its deep like my sweet tight cat
It got you rising, now watch it make you fall flat
Like tipsy rhymes on they backs when they under the !nfluence
Yo rhymes’ inhibitions attacked so I rape to beat rhythm into em
Young !n, fucking with you would make me state property
Fuck fucking, you still learning how to beat your meat properly
Yo sig show “I think they like me” by JD’s crew
Well I got news: niggas here hate you and I do too

Any questions feel free to ask
--Spinna

by the way I'm *female* but I don't think Influence knew that

!nfluence

Cripplin This Ho, I Go And [Lower-Yo-Esteem].. ..Spin A Newbie, So He Is [Always-Comin-Weak].. You Originally Speak??,.. ..Nah Boy You Just Bleek.. .And !n Spin, This Overaged Loser, Into The Next 3 Tourneys Of The RW ...(WORD!!!!!)
Decent start... flowed quite well but the multies are forced.
This Mans Hits Come Like Vegetarians, Cause He [Always-Spittin-Lighter].. .. Like Lil Wheezy, The Man With Fire.. ..And Blade Thesis Wanna Say [That-He-Tighter??].. ..And Only Way Spinna Could Get Votes.. ..Is If He Was A [HW-Division-DICK RIDER]...
[I]Blade Thesis? Don't know why he's mentioned. Anyway, decent bar again. Nothing really great but nothing meh either.
I Spit, And Twist Him .. ..He Like Ray Charles [Not Seein-Or-Understanding Me], When Im Droppin Them Sick Rhymes.. ..He Like Caspar In The Text Forum, He A [Busta- Without-The-Rhymes]...
[I]Good punch... its meh tho because Caspar isn't a known member. I only understand it because I peepd one of his battles.
Rock-At-Ya-Grill With Murderouz, [Skills-To-Kill].. ..This Man Thinkin He Hot, But He The [Definition-Of-Not-Being-Ill].. ..He Comin With-Begginner-Training, So The End Of The End Of This Is !nfluence (3), And Spinna (Nill)(0)
Again, you seem to flow the bar well but the multies arent really multies... decent bar but you callin the score on the battle is played, and Ive seen bars like that worded better and have better wordplay.

Overall, your verse had potential but didn't deliver as much as I expected. Much of the wordplay was okay, nothing great and the punches were okay too, nothing outstanding.



[B]Spinna

Congratulations!... You were honored to be my first
But you lost patience and too quickly your nut burst
Not very hard-hitting. Could've started better...
Cause my flow excites like that, its deep like my sweet tight cat
It got you rising, now watch it make you fall flat
Filler...
Like tipsy rhymes on they backs when they under the !nfluence
Yo rhymes’ inhibitions attacked so I rape to beat rhythm into em
Didnt feel it much...
Young !n, fucking with you would make me state property
Fuck fucking, you still learning how to beat your meat properly
LoL... I guess it was okay, but nothing that good.
Yo sig show “I think they like me” by JD’s crew
Well I got news: niggas here hate you and I do too
Decent punch... meh... not very hard-hitting or effective tho.

Overall, I didn't really feel your verse... I thought it was quite simple and nothing that stood-out. Some decent attempts at punches/wordplay and personals, but they could've been better.

Vote - !nfluence

This is one vote for SoHOMO I can't put a link in my battle cuz its in archives.

Metas-Tie: I think both had some good metas
Personals-Spinna: This chick went for his age and his sig, In only went for age
Punch-Influence
Multi - Tie: I think In would have got this one but his were just a little forced and really didn't seem like multis to me
Creativity-Spinna: I've neva heard no shit like that before
Depth-Spinna: I thought the whole thing about his rhymes being under influence and her raping thim was deep
Most enjoyable-Tie
Flow-Spinna: I read through hers more easily
Vote-Spinna

I thought this was a good battle but I feel like Spinna won with creativity and a good punch near the end. That shit about him being young so he should still be learning how to beat his meat was too funny.

Delivery: tie
Personals: Spinna
Punches: n/a
Creativity: n/a
Consistency: none
Enjoy: none
Vote: Spinna
Rationale: He had a personal. Everything else between the two was either tied or not present. There was nothing I could quote.

btw spinna seems sohomo

!nfluence

Cripplin This Ho, I Go And [Lower-Yo-Esteem].. ..Spin A Newbie, So He Is [Always-Comin-Weak].. You Originally Speak??,.. ..Nah Boy You Just Bleek.. .And !n Spin, This Overaged Loser, Into The Next 3 Tourneys Of The RW [Battle-League!!!!]...(WORD!!!!!)

decent... flow is off... multies are forced...


This Mans Hits Come Like Vegetarians, Cause He [Always-Spittin-Lighter].. ..[I Spark-This-Fool] Like Lil Wheezy, The Man With Fire.. ..And Blade Thesis Wanna Say [That-He-Tighter??].. ..And Only Way Spinna Could Get Votes.. ..Is If He Was A [HW-Division-DICK RIDER]...

decent... lmao??? why mention me, boy...?


I Spit, And Twist Him [In-A-Bind].. ..He Like Ray Charles [Not Seein-Or-Understanding Me], When Im Droppin Them Sick Rhymes.. ..He Like Caspar In The Text Forum, He A [Busta- Without-The-Rhymes]...

aight punch...


Rock-At-Ya-Grill With Murderouz, [Skills-To-Kill].. ..This Man Thinkin He Hot, But He The [Definition-Of-Not-Being-Ill].. ..He Comin With-Begginner-Training, So The End Of The End Of This Is !nfluence (3), And Spinna (Nill)(0)
Again, you seem to flow the bar well but the multies arent really multies...

decent...




Spinna...

Congratulations!... You were honored to be my first
But you lost patience and too quickly your nut burst

aight... more like a diss bar than a battle bar...


Cause my flow excites like that, its deep like my sweet tight cat
It got you rising, now watch it make you fall flat

wack...


Like tipsy rhymes on they backs when they under the !nfluence
Yo rhymes’ inhibitions attacked so I rape to beat rhythm into em

wack...


Young !n, fucking with you would make me state property
Fuck fucking, you still learning how to beat your meat properly

lol, nope...


Yo sig show “I think they like me” by JD’s crew
Well I got news: niggas here hate you and I do too

weak...




punches - !nfluence... weak punches from Spinna...
personals - !nfluence...
multies - !nfluence... forced...
metas - !nfluence...
flow - Spinna... influence's flow was off alot...
complexity - !nfluence... both lacked complexity...
creativity - !nfluence... same as above...


overall - !nfluence


Thoughts - !nfluence, yes i say im tighter than you... you try to hard to push your multies which i've talked to you about, i think... decent punches and wordplay, but they were weak... you took this because of a noob opponent, not out of skill...

SWEET!!!, 3-1 or 3-2 Still Waitin Fo A Mod...Or Do I Win Now???

Edited...


Kinda Weak Battle....


Personals: Tie
Punches: In
Multis: Tie
Wordplay: Tie
Enjoyment: Tie
Complexity: In
Creativity: In
Flow: Spin
Vote: In


Both Were Weak...But I Felt Influence Was Just A Bit More Creative...His Punches Were A Little Better...But Need Elevation But In Took This...

Thanks for voting everyone

I didn't realize our battle was so weak. I thought we both did pretty good. Its probably cuz we both new to this. This wuz my first text battle ever. Anyway, keep the votes coming. I want to see who gets it in the end.

Okidoke 3-2 Needin 2 More Votes To Advance

Cheah...Come On Yall UPPIN!!!, Spinna We Didnt Really Drop Weak Just Not Good Enough..We Have Potential...Especially ME..LMAO UPPIN!!!!

we still need more votes people. u sleepin on us.

Yeah UPPIN!!!!

wuzzz up uppity up up. or is the battle over now. did he win or we still looking for votes.