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G'luck

I'm spinnin in

Checkin' in;)

Crash spin-spin n Spinna (spin her) because im a winner, eating her for my dinner //
I gobble emcees like I gobble ice-cream flavoured vanilla, your fat im finner //
Im the prettiest of us two because im skinnier, you say your spinning in //
This is the beginning thing, you’re a missing link while im burning the ink //
Go figure, smashing Spinna, entering the game is mutharfucking danger //
You’re my age but you act 1, sometimes I wonder who the fuck is this stranger //
Im a deadly arranger, fighting ranger, kun fu expert, don’t fuck with me im a ninja //
Im a contender, it don’t really matter what gender I am, like I said im a winning offender //

*touch keyboards*
good luck

Here I go

You say you’re venomous, but you poisoned me and I didn’t die
See you a lie, that venom you spit couldn’t kill a fly
You make dudes’ heads burn like they got a feva (fever)*
But you don’t kill dudes either, you just give em gonorrhea
We 18, so let 1 and 8 demonstrate our weight
Don’t hate cuz you shaped like the 1 when I’m like the 8**
You live with the queen but the queen don’t know yo name
I asked her “Can Acid flow?” she thought I meant drugs thru veins***
If you want a vote, Acid, let me tell you what you have to do
Suck Genesis’ dick and he might un-ban Babalu****



Explanations

- 1st bar - self explanatory
* I’m comparing a man’s head on his neck to the head on his dick. When your head is burning hot, people say you have a fever. When your head on your dick burns when you pee people say you have gonorrhea.
**Comparing both of our shapes to the numbers in our age 18 which is 1 and 8. Her body is shaped like the 1, my body is shaped like the 8. I have a nice body; I have breasts and an ass and I am proportional. She has neither breasts nor ass and is shaped like a stick.
***Her location says she lives where the queen lives. Also acid is a type of drug which flows through your system like all drugs.
****Acid was accused of having another account as Babalu (who is banned) and voting for herself. Genesis is a mod who has the power to un-ban people. If she sucks his dick he might return her the favor by un banning Babalu so she can win by voting for herself.

Any questions, feel free to ask me personally
Thnx for checkin us out

Nice verse, good luck.

Uppin' for votes ;)

Acid:

[Crash spin-spin n Spinna (spin her) because im a winner, eating her for my dinner //
I gobble emcees like I gobble ice-cream flavoured vanilla, your fat im finner //]

Er... Rhymed I suppose.. Punch was very weak...

[Im the prettiest of us two because im skinnier, you say your spinning in //
This is the beginning thing, you’re a missing link while im burning the ink //]

Didn't really do much... Seems like you're speaking a lot of babble... The second line didn't make much sense either... Also, you fed...


[Go figure, smashing Spinna, entering the game is mutharfucking danger //
You’re my age but you act 1, sometimes I wonder who the fuck is this stranger //]

Hmm... I'd have to say this was a bit better.... Had sort an insult type of vibe going.. still, nothing strong..

[Im a deadly arranger, fighting ranger, kun fu expert, don’t fuck with me im a ninja //
Im a contender, it don’t really matter what gender I am, like I said im a winning offender //]

This had nothing to do with the battle what so ever...


I don't often have reason to say this but, this verse was really shitty... You need to focus more on punchlines directed toward your oponent... Not just talking about yourself or making yourself seem better... Punches, personals, wordplay... You have the rhyming down for the most part... However, the verse was not strong at all...

Spinna:


[You say you’re venomous, but you poisoned me and I didn’t die
See you a lie, that venom you spit couldn’t kill a fly]

First line was wack.... Second one was ok... Not strong, but the diss is visible at least...


[You make dudes’ heads burn like they got a feva (fever)*
But you don’t kill dudes either, you just give em gonorrhea]

Again... first line sucked... Second one was ok... Kind of played though, girls are always using the same type of disses...


[We 18, so let 1 and 8 demonstrate our weight
Don’t hate cuz you shaped like the 1 when I’m like the 8**]

Lmfao... You worded this very badly, but luckily I understood... Nice word play.. All right punch... Should've tried to word it a bit better..


[You live with the queen but the queen don’t know yo name
I asked her “Can Acid flow?” she thought I meant drugs thru veins***]

Now THIS... is what I'm talking about... Nice personal, nice punch... Wasn't GREAT... but it was good...


[If you want a vote, Acid, let me tell you what you have to do
Suck Genesis’ dick and he might un-ban Babalu****]

lmfao... Trying to say so she could vote for herself..? haha.. nice... Wording was garbage though, still a nice personal... not such a good punch...


Overall:

Acid, sweetheart, I don't think you have much grasp on battle tactics.... You definatley need to work on punchlines and personals... The word play can come later... Get out of the habbit of focusing on talking shit more than dissing your opponent...

Spinna, seems you have a better idea... The verse wasn't as good as it could have been, I think you just need to work on your wording... You have good potential to elevate a bit quicker if you concentrate on wording...

In my opinion, Spinna had the more effective verse without a doubt... Better punches (although not very strong), attempted wordplay, and personals...


Vote = Spinna

......

Punches: Spinna
Personals: Spinna
Wordplay: Niether.....
Flow: Tie
Creativity: Niether
Vote: Spinna.....



not a great battle....niether had outstanding verses.....Spinna juss got lucky with the punches and personals.....

Punches: Spinna
Personals: Spinna
Wordplay: Spinna: the acid through the veins line.....
Flow: Tie
Creativity: Neither

OVERALL: neither one really stood out at all..........but if there has ta be a winner it would be SPINNA who used less filler and more direct attempts at punchin............

Spinna wins by KO...



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