View Full Version : LW- Ide-Ill vs Twizted Stylez (2-0)


Vokals
11-16-2005, 07:45 AM
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TwiZted StyleZ
11-16-2005, 01:46 PM
Check................werd murda

IdE-iLL™
11-16-2005, 03:34 PM
Check, go 3. You any good?

Aura
11-16-2005, 05:56 PM
Stop Freeposting...

If your oponent underestimates your talent and doesn't match your line limit, that's their fault... How can you discuss battle tactics..? If you're confident enough to do 3, then do 3... It's each emcees decision to do the amount of lines THEY choose, within the limit....

TwiZted StyleZ
11-17-2005, 01:25 AM
Keyed it Right Quick....

ight check
My Passion is Killin Wacks...have there Blood on my shirt thats fashion
i dont Need gats to Be blastin...I Drop I.I's Like Sailors Leavin Captins
Wit my Gore I rec....leave you a Bloody neck...wit sick Text
Roc a vest....an Why ur Lines Stretched like Fat Bitchs in Spandex
u can Come wit yah Fuckin Name play God Testaments
But i Drop I.I's liek retards awknoledgin themsleves
.....................................wit Speech impendaments
I'm A vet i came to Wreck Lames,U dont kno this guy
I'll piss on yah contacts...to Show I'm always #1 to an I(Eye)
I aint Talkin high about myself but im on bigger measures
got the knife to yah leather,
...So I can Cave out ur Chest like i was Lookin for Treasures

*match me*

IdE-iLL™
11-19-2005, 09:04 PM
I need an extension till tomorrow. I'm on a laptop because my computer is down and I have my verse on it.

Vokals
11-19-2005, 10:34 PM
had all week to post it or it coulda been PM;d to a mod... why people wait to the last minute to post a verse is beyond me... rules stand as follows

IdE-iLL™
11-20-2005, 04:33 PM
The Problem....TwiZted StyleZ

This Kid Talks - I Prefer To Throw Lead, I See The Future, This Herb Is So Dead, Because As Far As Punches, T'll Never Land, Like Blue-Winged Birds With No Legs..
(Blue-Winged Teal) (http://www.qc.ec.gc.ca/faune/guide/html/sarcelle_ab_e.html)
.
His Verse Is Hopeless, He Must've Got A Jerk To Ghost His, Cos There's No Sign Of T Bein' The Illness, Like The All-Clear From Tuberculosis..
(TB In The Illness)
.
Leave Twisted Styles On The Floor Like A Ballroom Dancer, I'm Sick, More Than Cancer, Cos If He's The Problem, Call Me A Iverson Shoe Collector, Cos IdE Has All The Answers..

SomethingAwfl
11-20-2005, 08:55 PM
Twizted Stylez


My Passion is Killin Wacks...have there Blood on my shirt thats fashion
i dont Need gats to Be blastin...I Drop I.I's Like Sailors Leavin Captins

I,I wordplay is cool but you didn't form it into a good punch. 6.75/10

Wit my Gore I rec....leave you a Bloody neck...wit sick Text
Roc a vest....an Why ur Lines Stretched like Fat Bitchs in Spandex

Eh...Multi attempts ..... that's about it ... 6.5/10

u can Come wit yah Fuckin Name play God Testaments
But i Drop I.I's liek retards awknoledgin themsleves

It doesn't rhyme. I.I wordplay repeated. 5/10

.....................................wit Speech impendaments
I'm A vet i came to Wreck Lames,U dont kno this guy

At the first bar ... What the Flying Fuck?? ... 5/10

I'll piss on yah contacts...to Show I'm always #1 to an I(Eye)

.... I wordplay again, spare me, please. 6/10

I aint Talkin high about myself but im on bigger measures
got the knife to yah leather,
...So I can Cave out ur Chest like i was Lookin for Treasures

Cave/Chest wordplay is alrite, the rest is history... 6.25/10





IdE-iLL

This Kid Talks - I Prefer To Throw Lead, I See The Future, This Herb Is So Dead, Because As Far As Punches, T'll Never Land, Like Blue-Winged Birds With No Legs..
(Blue-Winged Teal)

Good multis, wordplay is alrite, punch is pretty good. 17/20

His Verse Is Hopeless, He Must've Got A Jerk To Ghost His, Cos There's No Sign Of T Bein' The Illness, Like The All-Clear From Tuberculosis..
(TB In The Illness)

I like the nameplay, nice punch and multis are up. 18/20

Leave Twisted Styles On The Floor Like A Ballroom Dancer, I'm Sick, More Than Cancer, Cos If He's The Problem, Call Me A Iverson Shoe Collector, Cos IdE Has All The Answers..

Wordplay is pretty good, multis are alrite, kinda fell of compared to your previous 2 bars... 17.5/20




Twizted Stylez's total ... 35.5 / 60

IdE-iLL's total ... 52.5 / 60



Vote = IdE-iLL

Vokals
11-20-2005, 09:00 PM
^^ vote counted, but still stands 0-0 due to 2 docked votes for going over 12 hours..

TwiZted StyleZ
11-20-2005, 09:22 PM
[QUOTE=Alcatraz]Twizted Stylez


My Passion is Killin Wacks...have there Blood on my shirt thats fashion
i dont Need gats to Be blastin...I Drop I.I's Like Sailors Leavin Captins

I,I wordplay is cool but you didn't form it into a good punch. 6.75/10

Wit my Gore I rec....leave you a Bloody neck...wit sick Text
Roc a vest....an Why ur Lines Stretched like Fat Bitchs in Spandex

Eh...Multi attempts ..... that's about it ... 6.5/10

u can Come wit yah Fuckin Name play God Testaments
But i Drop I.I's liek retards awknoledgin themsleves
.....................................wit Speech impendaments
^^^^^thats the punch learn to read

I'm A vet i came to Wreck Lames,U dont kno this guy
I'll piss on yah contacts...to Show I'm always #1 to an I(Eye)
^^^^^wow thats how its read dumb fuck i want this vote dqed
RU RETTTARRRDED>>>>kid broke down the verse all fucked up yah dont kno 3rd line punchs...wow learn better structure

Bladed Thesis
11-21-2005, 02:34 PM
Twizted Stylez

My Passion is Killin Wacks...have there Blood on my shirt thats fashion
i dont Need gats to Be blastin...I Drop I.I's Like Sailors Leavin Captins

Decent... Wordplay Is Aight, But Punch Is Worded Badly... Coulda Been Much Nicer...


Wit my Gore I rec....leave you a Bloody neck...wit sick Text
Roc a vest....an Why ur Lines Stretched like Fat Bitchs in Spandex

Weak... Bad Verse... Weak Punch, Flow Is Off...


u can Come wit yah Fuckin Name play God Testaments
But i Drop I.I's liek retards awknoledgin themsleves

Weak... Same Nameplay...


.....................................wit Speech impendaments
I'm A vet i came to Wreck Lames,U dont kno this guy

WACK... Using Periods To Make Your Bar Look Even Is Fucking Retarded...

I'll piss on yah contacts...to Show I'm always #1 to an I(Eye)

Weak... Same "I" Nameplay...


I aint Talkin high about myself but im on bigger measures
got the knife to yah leather,
...So I can Cave out ur Chest like i was Lookin for Treasures

Weak... Kinda Played "Treasure" Line...





IdE-iLL

This Kid Talks - I Prefer To Throw Lead, I See The Future, This Herb Is So Dead, Because As Far As Punches, T'll Never Land, Like Blue-Winged Birds With No Legs..
(Blue-Winged Teal)

Nice... Punch Is Good...

His Verse Is Hopeless, He Must've Got A Jerk To Ghost His, Cos There's No Sign Of T Bein' The Illness, Like The All-Clear From Tuberculosis..
(TB In The Illness)

Nice... Good Nameplay, Flow, Multies...

Leave Twisted Styles On The Floor Like A Ballroom Dancer, I'm Sick, More Than Cancer, Cos If He's The Problem, Call Me A Iverson Shoe Collector, Cos IdE Has All The Answers..

Aight... Wordplay Is Nice Here...



Punches - Ide... Better Overall Punches...
Personals - Tied/None...
Multies - Ide... Had More Complex Multies...
Metas - Ide... More Complex...
Flow - Ide... Longer Bars, But His Flowed Better...
Complexity - Ide... Nothing Big From Twisted
Creativity - Ide... Twisted Lost This With Repeating His Nameplay...

Overall - Ide-Ill... Just Had A Much Better Verse, Used Different Shit... Twisted Came With Weak Punches & Reused His Nameplay Which Made His Verse Sound Repetetive... Overall, A One-Sided Battle...

Ezekiel
11-21-2005, 04:40 PM
Punches - Ide
Multies - Ide
Metas - Ide
Flow - Ide
Complexity - Ide
Creativity - Ide
Enjoyment- Ide

Vote: Ide- Ill

Reason: Basically a landside victory, twisted came with no hard hitting punches..and was very repetitve...Ide came average by his standards but still took this with ease...pz

IdE-iLL™
11-21-2005, 05:11 PM
2-0 -oR- 1-0?

IdE-iLL™
11-21-2005, 05:17 PM
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=55419&page=2

Vokals
11-21-2005, 05:28 PM
1-0...

IdE-iLL™
11-21-2005, 05:43 PM
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=671378#post671378

TwiZted StyleZ
11-21-2005, 08:25 PM
Lol at this wow........yah cant read a verse for real....how long this site was up foreal...yah dont 3rd line structure??? an this kid has noob 03 structure woww
My Passion is Killin Wacks...have there Blood on my shirt thats fashion
i dont Need gats to Be blastin...I Drop I.I's Like Sailors Leavin Captins
^^^Thats the 1 bar
Wit my Gore I rec....leave you a Bloody neck...wit sick Text
Roc a vest....an Why ur Lines Stretched like Fat Bitchs in Spandex
^^^^second
u can Come wit yah Fuckin Name play God Testaments
But i Drop I.I's liek retards awknoledgin themsleves
.....................................wit Speech impendaments
^^^^3rd read the whole shit
I'm A vet i came to Wreck Lames,U dont kno this guy
I'll piss on yah contacts...to Show I'm always #1 to an I(Eye)
^^^4th
I aint Talkin high about myself but im on bigger measures
got the knife to yah leather,
...So I can Cave out ur Chest like i was Lookin for Treasures
^^^^Last

Vokals
11-22-2005, 07:08 AM
Personals tie... i liked the #1 line, and the sailor line from twizted, and i liked the 1st 2 bars from Ide's

Punches...ehh, Ide u lost points b.c of the a cancer line beyond played and and A.I line... heard both many many many times... Twizted ur spandex line and the speech impediment line werent good to me... so i say tie in this

Flow/multis... Ide, was easier to flow, and easier to go with, all the (...) from twizted made it seem like too many pauses..

WP/Metas.. goes to Ide, he had better concepts for name flips & twizted used an I'I line twice, and that treasure line i wasnt feeling


vote goes to ide... 2-0