View Full Version : LW- .xcluusive vs Otto MaDDex (0-3 KO)


Vokals
11-17-2005, 05:54 PM
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I forgot .xcluusive. never signed out and i knew otto wanted to fill in for a no show last week so i gave him the battle.
G'luck

big DADDY wAr™
11-17-2005, 05:58 PM
in..............................thanks homie

Esinem
11-17-2005, 07:23 PM
checkin in..

big DADDY wAr™
11-17-2005, 10:09 PM
fuck it quik key.............
.......funny dude wasn't known, left and came back w/ the same wack crap,
im the KING and you'll always be a HEIRLESS PUSSY like a SHAVED CAT,
otto's known ta DISS-N-EY like that FAMED RAT, and keep it easy,
i heard he's a faggot, who wanted ta ADD-MEN w/ BREEZY,
please bee, ya INTELLECT LYRICALLY makes me laugh hysterically,
illness you display rarely, wouldn't be FLY W/ BARS if you BUNKED W/ PARAKEETS,
after this you'll know the DRILL like i REPAIRED YA TEETH,& no charge for the services,
i don't need ta read your worthless writs, i'll still respect u bitch,
if you bowed out and blamed it on nervousness............
thank you and links comin soon...

big DADDY wAr™
11-18-2005, 04:52 PM
unodos

Esinem
11-20-2005, 01:34 PM
i knwow im late.. hopefully this gets thru.. just doin whatever..

--

.. your mouth and "Guns" are alike, they both "Auto-Matics" (oddo maddix)
ill make it so you "Breathless" like your a severe "Asthmatic"

.. and you couldnt run the "Game", even with help from "Sony"
your like "Pam Andersons tits" .. your 100% completely "Phony"

.. if you insist your the "KING", then ima have to rip the "Mag"
by the looks of it, your a "Bitch" .. always fuckin ready to "Nag"

.. and yo "Otto" (Oddo), you should quit rappin, you belong on a "Bus"
cuz your flows are in the "Minus" while my flows in the "Plus"

Expo's:..

Guns/ AutoMatics [should be simple]
Breathless/ Asthma [when you have asthma, its hard to breath]
Game/ Sony [sony makes games]
Pam Ands Tits/ Phony [there phony.. of course]
KING/ Mag [KING is a magazine]&[mag as in clip]
Bitch/ Nag [all 'bicthes' do is 'nag']
Otto/ Bus [from Simpsons.. Otto drives the school bus]
Minus/ Plus [ - / +] .. [you all should get it]

.Inphinite.
11-20-2005, 02:27 PM
....funny dude wasn't known, left and came back w/ the same wack crap,
im the KING and you'll always be a HEIRLESS PUSSY like a SHAVED CAT



.. your mouth and "Guns" are alike, they both "Auto-Matics" (oddo maddix)
ill make it so you "Breathless" like your a severe "Asthmatic


Kinda weak battle... Thurz didn't bring his A game and Xclusiv, your verse had some decent ideas but they worded properly and consequently had no effect. Overall - vote - Thurz/Otto.

I think you're under 24 hours late, so you'll have 2 votes knocked off.

Spinna
11-20-2005, 03:56 PM
otto maddex

funny dude wasn't known, left and came back w/ the same wack crap,
im the KING and you'll always be a HEIRLESS PUSSY like a SHAVED CAT,
nice wordplay

otto's known ta DISS-N-EY like that FAMED RAT, and keep it easy,
i heard he's a faggot, who wanted ta ADD-MEN w/ BREEZY,
ok personal, ok wordplay

please bee, ya INTELLECT LYRICALLY makes me laugh hysterically,
illness you display rarely, wouldn't be FLY W/ BARS if you BUNKED W/ PARAKEETS,
flow was off, ok punch

after this you'll know the DRILL like i REPAIRED YA TEETH,& no charge for the services,
i don't need ta read your worthless writs, i'll still respect u bitch,
if you bowed out and blamed it on nervousness............
ok punch


xcluusive

.. your mouth and "Guns" are alike, they both "Auto-Matics" (oddo maddix)
ill make it so you "Breathless" like your a severe "Asthmatic"
nice punch

.. and you couldnt run the "Game", even with help from "Sony"
your like "Pam Andersons tits" .. your 100% completely "Phony"
nice punch

.. if you insist your the "KING", then ima have to rip the "Mag"
by the looks of it, your a "Bitch" .. always fuckin ready to "Nag"
ok personal, ok punch

.. and yo "Otto" (Oddo), you should quit rappin, you belong on a "Bus"
cuz your flows are in the "Minus" while my flows in the "Plus"
ok punch

My vote: xcluusive
Otto had more wordplay but xcluusive had better punches to me.

Esinem
11-20-2005, 04:27 PM
so.. since i got 2 votes knocked off..

its 1 - 0 in Oddo's favor until Smod [or Mod] says so...

uppin on this ish

pZ

Aura
11-20-2005, 08:51 PM
Hmm...

X, your verse was kind of plain to me... Didn't seem like you played around with your ideas enough... A lot of your lines had good potential, but it looks like you just threw a few things together instead of giving it some though... Your flow was good... punches weren't hard at all though... that's the biggest problem...

Otto... I've seen way better, but I figured maybe you felt you had this one all ready...? You opening line was hilarious lol... Definatley had the better punches, better word play slightly... Some of your punchlines were a bit soft though, but not so soft that they'd cost you the battle...


Seems like you both could've did way better... but because of better punches, wordplay, effort, and more humerous lyrics...

Vote = Otto Maddex

TwiZted StyleZ
11-20-2005, 10:04 PM
.......funny dude wasn't known, left and came back w/ the same wack crap,
im the KING and you'll always be a HEIRLESS PUSSY like a SHAVED CAT,
^^^Ight opener punch was played tho
otto's known ta DISS-N-EY like that FAMED RAT, and keep it easy,
i heard he's a faggot, who wanted ta ADD-MEN w/ BREEZY,
^^^^ok personal
please bee, ya INTELLECT LYRICALLY makes me laugh hysterically,
illness you display rarely, wouldn't be FLY W/ BARS if you BUNKED W/ PARAKEETS,
^^^This was good
after this you'll know the DRILL like i REPAIRED YA TEETH,& no charge for the services,
i don't need ta read your worthless writs, i'll still respect u bitch,
if you bowed out and blamed it on nervousness............
^^^Good closer

your mouth and "Guns" are alike, they both "Auto-Matics" (oddo maddix)
ill make it so you "Breathless" like your a severe "Asthmatic"
^^^Worded wrong.....kinda weak
.. and you couldnt run the "Game", even with help from "Sony"
your like "Pam Andersons tits" .. your 100% completely "Phony"
^^^played
.. if you insist your the "KING", then ima have to rip the "Mag"
by the looks of it, your a "Bitch" .. always fuckin ready to "Nag"
^^^no......
.. and yo "Otto" (Oddo), you should quit rappin, you belong on a "Bus"
cuz your flows are in the "Minus" while my flows in the "Plus"
^^^Played closer
V.Otto maddex this was a weak battle.....X came wit some punchs that were played an personals needed to be better...work on that...otto came wit a solid verse nuthin special But still gets the victory....