View Full Version : LW- Jase vs Vaughn187 (4-1)


Vokals
11-22-2005, 07:23 AM
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vaughn187
11-23-2005, 01:34 PM
check

Jase
11-23-2005, 05:53 PM
.....

Jase
11-26-2005, 06:34 PM
..i ain't got time so i'ma key up a bit..

..Step to me ya So Daring..Keep my Flow Tearing..For you it's Time To Flee so watch as there's 'No Sign Of V' like a 'House With No Swearing'..
..No Staring or I'll put 'Heat To Ya Face' like 'Hot Shaved Skin'..My Rhymin Iz The Best i'll leave this 'Minor/Miner In A Mess' like the 'Rocks Caved In'..
..You fuckin wit a Upstate Felon..Eat you up like Cupcakes, Melons..Just Wait, Fuck Sake your careers 'Goin Up Then Down' like '1-8-7'.!.

vaughn187
11-27-2005, 12:38 AM
Crushing his is skull was simple, kilt him in moderate tempo,
Consider him a porn rapper, lyrics stay fucked like nymphos,
Console ya mental, really jase kid you should stick to acting,
Cuz when it comes to rappin, every “nose” ya a “bit off” like Michael Jackson
Plus lack the passion, nothing more than a rookie looking for ways to rap,
Wordplay is crap, nothing good mention when I say J “fades to black”
Make tasteless tracks, I’m elder in this village boy respect what I say,
Or be left to decay……
…….Cuz you wouldn’t able to shut bars down if I switch ya s with a k (jake=police)

Han Solo
11-27-2005, 06:14 PM
..No Staring or I'll put 'Heat To Ya Face' like 'Hot Shaved Skin'..My Rhymin Iz The Best i'll leave this 'Minor/Miner In A Mess' like the 'Rocks Caved In'..
..You fuckin wit a Upstate Felon..Eat you up like Cupcakes, Melons..Just Wait, Fuck Sake your careers 'Goin Up Then Down' like '1-8-7'.!.
^first bar was dope, but the second line was complete fire as far as wordplay.


Console ya mental, really jase kid you should stick to acting,
Cuz when it comes to rappin, every “nose” ya a “bit off” like Michael Jackson
^i'm guessing vaughn meant 'everyone' but i get it. very nice wordplay, punch could be a little stronger if you re-worded it.

Make tasteless tracks, I’m elder in this village boy respect what I say,
Or be left to decay……
…….Cuz you wouldn’t able to shut bars down if I switch ya s with a k (jake=police)
^nice finish.

this battle was a little hard cuz both were about even in areas of wordplay and metaphors, and punches were pretty strong too. But i'd give it to vaughn only cuz his was a little more direct and personal with each line and slightly more creative.

vote=Vaughn

Bladed Thesis
11-28-2005, 05:35 PM
Jase

..Step to me ya So Daring..Keep my Flow Tearing..For you it's Time To Flee so watch as there's 'No Sign Of V' like a 'House With No Swearing'..

nice punch... good wordplay...

..No Staring or I'll put 'Heat To Ya Face' like 'Hot Shaved Skin'..My Rhymin Iz The Best i'll leave this 'Minor/Miner In A Mess' like the 'Rocks Caved In'..
.
its aight... minor/miner wordplay is played...

.You fuckin wit a Upstate Felon..Eat you up like Cupcakes, Melons..Just Wait, Fuck Sake your careers 'Goin Up Then Down' like '1-8-7'.!.

nice...





vaughn187

Crushing his is skull was simple, kilt him in moderate tempo,
Consider him a porn rapper, lyrics stay fucked like nymphos,

weak...


Console ya mental, really jase kid you should stick to acting,
Cuz when it comes to rappin, every “nose” ya a “bit off” like Michael Jackson

wack... michael jackson lines = played as fuck... nose/knows = played...


Plus lack the passion, nothing more than a rookie looking for ways to rap,
Wordplay is crap, nothing good mention when I say J “fades to black”

weak...


Make tasteless tracks, I’m elder in this village boy respect what I say,
Or be left to decay……
…….Cuz you wouldn’t able to shut bars down if I switch ya s with a k (jake=police)

aight...


Punches - Jase...
Personals - Tied/Bone...
Multies - Jase...
Metas - Jase...
Flow - Jase... ill flow...
Wordplay - Jase...
Creativity - Jase...
Complexity - Jase...

Overall - Jase... nice punches, good wordplay... vaughn was weak/played... one sided...

Total Prophet
11-28-2005, 05:45 PM
Jase

..Step to me ya So Daring..Keep my Flow Tearing..For you it's Time To Flee so watch as there's 'No Sign Of V' like a 'House With No Swearing'..

Lol Nice punch and good wordplay nice way to open it up

..No Staring or I'll put 'Heat To Ya Face' like 'Hot Shaved Skin'..My Rhymin Iz The Best i'll leave this 'Minor/Miner In A Mess' like the 'Rocks Caved In'..

Pretty good punch nothing spectacular

..You fuckin wit a Upstate Felon..Eat you up like Cupcakes, Melons..Just Wait, Fuck Sake your careers 'Goin Up Then Down' like '1-8-7'.!.

Best bar IMo I really like the wordplay and punch in this bar. Overall pretty consistent verse

Vaughn 187

Crushing his is skull was simple, kilt him in moderate tempo,
Consider him a porn rapper, lyrics stay fucked like nymphos,

No. Too simple and not really that hard of a punch

Console ya mental, really jase kid you should stick to acting,
Cuz when it comes to rappin, every “nose” ya a “bit off” like Michael Jackson

Okay kinda played though

Plus lack the passion, nothing more than a rookie looking for ways to rap,
Wordplay is crap, nothing good mention when I say J “fades to black”

Good wordplay still punch could have been harder

Make tasteless tracks, I’m elder in this village boy respect what I say,
Or be left to decay……
…….Cuz you wouldn’t able to shut bars down if I switch ya s with a k (jake=police)

Nice your best bar IMo. Ive seen you come way harder it seemed that you were focusing too much or wordplay and multis that your punches lacked. Work on that

Vote Jase

big DADDY wAr™
11-28-2005, 05:58 PM
punches: Jase
originality:Jase
flow:tied
personals:Vaughn
multies: Jase
metas:Jase

OVERALL: i think that Jase took this easy...... specially for a quik key....
but he started for your head and ended at your head you were nice vaughn but nothin too hard hittin ta pull this on off

.Inphinite.
11-28-2005, 07:02 PM
Jase


..Step to me ya So Daring..Keep my Flow Tearing..For you it's Time To Flee so watch as there's 'No Sign Of V' like a 'House With No Swearing'..
^ LoL, nice opener

..No Staring or I'll put 'Heat To Ya Face' like 'Hot Shaved Skin'..My Rhymin Iz The Best i'll leave this 'Minor/Miner In A Mess' like the 'Rocks Caved In'..
^Its iight... decent wordplay

..You fuckin wit a Upstate Felon..Eat you up like Cupcakes, Melons..Just Wait, Fuck Sake your careers 'Goin Up Then Down' like '1-8-7'.
^ LoL, Nice...



Vaughn

Crushing his is skull was simple, kilt him in moderate tempo,
Consider him a porn rapper, lyrics stay fucked like nymphos,

Plus lack the passion, nothing more than a rookie looking for ways to rap,
Wordplay is crap, nothing good mention when I say J “fades to black”





Overall, Vaughn tried to up his game and included some attempts at wordplay and decent punches... You still had some played concepts and wordplay like the nympho line but everyone does when they're starting... But I think Jase just came better with more creativity and originality and he gets my vote.

2Flawless
11-28-2005, 11:41 PM
Punches that stood out to me

Jase...

Rhymin Iz The Best i'll leave this 'Minor/Miner In A Mess' like the 'Rocks Caved In'..

..You fuckin wit a Upstate Felon..Eat you up like Cupcakes, Melons..Just Wait, Fuck Sake your careers 'Goin Up Then Down' like '1-8-7'.!.

Vaughn187...

Wordplay is crap, nothing good mention when I say J “fades to black”

…….Cuz you wouldn’t able to shut bars down if I switch ya s with a k (jake=police)
^^^i had to take my time with this line lol i thought the line was saying
Jaake and i was like that fucked him up but i caught it

I vote Jase he had a stronger verse to me