View Full Version : LW- Young $tack$ vs .xcluusive. (3-0)


Vokals
11-22-2005, 07:24 AM
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Total Prophet
11-22-2005, 02:28 PM
Im ready

Esinem
11-22-2005, 06:19 PM
im about to get k.o'd again..

but fuck it

.. checkin in

Esinem
11-22-2005, 10:14 PM
i had an alright verse.. but i closed the window before i was done [closed wrong window].

so im comin MAJORLY WEAK..

so here it gos..

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..the concepts you use when you flow, are simple and weak
keep actin like you somethin, you gonna be left inna creek
..ill slit ya throat, reap you, and burn you in ya fuckin sleep
break in ya house and move about, the floors dont creek
..xcluusive killin Young $tack$, like its a Slaughter House
the knife cuts thru ya skin so easily, like its a water pouch
..your never gonan be on top, cuz ill pull out the shotgun
makin you scream like a bitch, yellin "X I dont want none"

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simple.. so well see what Y$ has to spit..

~WuN~

Total Prophet
11-23-2005, 03:50 AM
key for you

My lyrically sawdoff will put holes in you big enough to shove a funnel through
Ill punish you, when I see your name the only thing I see is the Double U(W)
Im going easy on you how much leeway you want me to give,
Erase the other letters ot of your name just to let you live,(think about it)
I swing punches that follow you home like a homing device,
The whole battle league must be high because X has already been popped twice,
You say that your nice, but your verses prove that your barely musical,
Your future is looking dim and dark similar to Gothic funerals,

Total Prophet
11-23-2005, 02:16 PM
-One link

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=55780

Bladed Thesis
11-23-2005, 04:26 PM
xclusive...

..the concepts you use when you flow, are simple and weak
keep actin like you somethin, you gonna be left inna creek

Nope... Real Weak...


..ill slit ya throat, reap you, and burn you in ya fuckin sleep
break in ya house and move about, the floors dont creek

Weak... No Real Punch...


..xcluusive killin Young $tack$, like its a Slaughter House
the knife cuts thru ya skin so easily, like its a water pouch

Decent... Still No Punch...


..your never gonan be on top, cuz ill pull out the shotgun
makin you scream like a bitch, yellin "X I dont want none"

Nope...





Young Stacks...

My lyrically sawdoff will put holes in you big enough to shove a funnel through
Ill punish you, when I see your name the only thing I see is the Double U(W)

Aight... Heard The Double U Line Before...


Im going easy on you how much leeway you want me to give,
Erase the other letters ot of your name just to let you live,(think about it)

Aight...


I swing punches that follow you home like a homing device,
The whole battle league must be high because X has already been popped twice,

Nope... X/Ectasy Lines Are Played... Period...


You say that your nice, but your verses prove that your barely musical,
Your future is looking dim and dark similar to Gothic funerals,

Weak...



Punches - Stacks...
Personals - Tied/None...
Multies - Stacks...
Metas - Xclusive...
Flow - Xclusive...
Complexity - Stacks...
Creativity - Tied... Both Had Weak/Played Shit...


Overall - Young Stacks... One-Sided Weak Battle... Xclusive Came Without Punches, Weak Shit Where He Didn't Even Direct A Punch At Stacks, He Just Said His Name Once Or Something...

vaughn187
11-27-2005, 01:55 AM
punches- stacks
meta- stacks
flow- x
personals- stacks (x line although played)
complexity- stacks

vote- stacks
sum: this battle was very one sided... first off x don't down yourself before you even see a vote, that doesn't make the drive to get better any stronger, plus you talked basically a story nothing directed towards stacks at all.... stacks your battle verse wasn't anything extraordinary, but was more than enough to get you the win easily by having at least the basics of a battle verse punches and personals, this was easily decided x read up and you'll find something that might click with you...

.Inphinite.
11-27-2005, 12:24 PM
..xcluusive killin Young $tack$, like its a Slaughter House
the knife cuts thru ya skin so easily, like its a water pouch

My lyrically sawdoff will put holes in you big enough to shove a funnel through
Ill punish you, when I see your name the only thing I see is the Double U(W)

Im going easy on you how much leeway you want me to give,
Erase the other letters ot of your name just to let you live,

Vote - Stacks

Overall, it was a kinda weak battle. Both came quite played and weak. I think Young Stacks' verse was still better tho, but even his verse had played concepts and wordplay, like the ecstasy line and the double u line.