View Full Version : LW- Bladed Thesis vs 2Flawless (3-0)


Vokals
11-22-2005, 07:25 AM
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Check In By Friday Midnight EST
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3-5 Bars

G'luck

Bladed Thesis
11-22-2005, 06:11 PM
checkin... going 3...

2Flawless
11-22-2005, 11:39 PM
checkin in

2Flawless
11-23-2005, 02:46 PM
Voted on Tha 3way battle Saracen Nocturne and EZ

and Twisted Stylez vs Alcatrez

Bladed Thesis
11-23-2005, 04:23 PM
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=55780
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=55777

Bladed Thesis
11-23-2005, 04:36 PM
Blah... Keystyle...


Imma Slap This Whore,-See-&-Witness, Noob Flawless Ya Life's Boring-&-Finished
I'd "Use Ya Own Words," (http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=55530) But Waiting On Ya Skills Seriously Takes "More-Than-A-Minute"


My Score-Be-The-Limits, Like Polling The Pharisee's, Each Voter'll Comdemn-You
& Ya Quotables Be Like A "Game Of 20 Questions" How Peeps Mutter "Where? When?-Who?"


I Send-Through Fierce Claws, Penetrate Ya Skin & Organ Fabric, Bladed Fear-This-Fuck?
"2 Flaw,-Less Next Time" Kids Ain't Declaring Ya Reign, They Counting Ya Mistakes & Keeping Ya Spirits-Up





Don't Get, Ask Or Don't Vote...

2Flawless
11-27-2005, 04:56 AM
Shit just got in the crib.......


Quick ass key...

Bladed Thesis "It's seriously has been A Minute"
Dropped late so it wouldn't take 5 days 2 "get you finished"***

Bitch "Please"!!! This tournament 2 you is fucking 'tease"
Cuz
The only way you be on my level is when "I'm beginning tha league"***

Undefeated cuz your 1st 2 battles you "played with rooks"
Tempted 2 steal-my-flow even if you "strayed from crooks'

***Explanations
Had since tuesday for me 2 drop
When you begin the league your automatically LW

Vokals
11-27-2005, 07:46 AM
flawless is docked one vote for passing time limit.. 0-0 vote

Young-Legacy
11-27-2005, 08:51 PM
aight nice battle..... breakin it down
Bladed Thesis:
Imma Slap This Whore,-See-&-Witness, Noob Flawless Ya Life's Boring-&-Finished
I'd "Use Ya Own Words," But Waiting On Ya Skills Seriously Takes "More-Than-A-Minute"
lol nice personal, good punch... aight wordplay

My Score-Be-The-Limits, Like Polling The Pharisee's, Each Voter'll Comdemn-You
& Ya Quotables Be Like A "Game Of 20 Questions" How Peeps Mutter "Where? When?-Who?"
eh, decent line... nothin too hott on this one tho

I Send-Through Fierce Claws, Penetrate Ya Skin & Organ Fabric, Bladed Fear-This-Fuck?
"2 Flaw,-Less Next Time" Kids Ain't Declaring Ya Reign, They Counting Ya Mistakes & Keeping Ya Spirits-Up
not bad... nice wordplay... good punch. nice verse overall


2Flawless:
Bladed Thesis "It's seriously has been A Minute"
Dropped late so it wouldn't take 5 days 2 "get you finished"***
lol funny bar... nice personal

Bitch "Please"!!! This tournament 2 you is fucking 'tease"
Cuz
The only way you be on my level is when "I'm beginning tha league"***
eh, easy bar. not necessarily a weak punchline... but nothin hot

Undefeated cuz your 1st 2 battles you "played with rooks"
Tempted 2 steal-my-flow even if you "strayed from crooks'
hott closer... nice wordplay n punch

hard one to vote on... both yall had a hot openin n closin bar, but the middle bar was weak. my overall goes to 2Flawless cause his last bar was hotta... nice battle tho, props to both yall
~WuN~

Vokals
11-28-2005, 02:02 AM
stands 0-0 still

Total Prophet
11-28-2005, 05:35 PM
Bladed

Imma Slap This Whore,-See-&-Witness, Noob Flawless Ya Life's Boring-&-Finished
I'd "Use Ya Own Words," But Waiting On Ya Skills Seriously Takes "More-Than-A-Minute"

Nice punch and personal your best bar in the verse too me

My Score-Be-The-Limits, Like Polling The Pharisee's, Each Voter'll Comdemn-You
& Ya Quotables Be Like A "Game Of 20 Questions" How Peeps Mutter "Where? When?-Who?"

Aight punch nothing really that stand out ish

I Send-Through Fierce Claws, Penetrate Ya Skin & Organ Fabric, Bladed Fear-This-Fuck?
"2 Flaw,-Less Next Time" Kids Ain't Declaring Ya Reign, They Counting Ya Mistakes & Keeping Ya Spirits-Up

Decent closer could have been harder though Overall nice verse

2 Flawless

Bladed Thesis "It's seriously has been A Minute"
Dropped late so it wouldn't take 5 days 2 "get you finished"***

Nice opener pretty good punch

Bitch "Please"!!! This tournament 2 you is fucking 'tease"
Cuz
The only way you be on my level is when "I'm beginning tha league"***

Nice simple punch not too hard though

Undefeated cuz your 1st 2 battles you "played with rooks"
Tempted 2 steal-my-flow even if you "strayed from crooks'

Nice closer Imo your best bar. Overall your verse was consistent and decent but I think Bladeds punches were a little more creative and complex. Good Job though both of you.

Vote Bladed Thesis

.Inphinite.
11-28-2005, 07:07 PM
Imma Slap This Whore,-See-&-Witness, Noob Flawless Ya Life's Boring-&-Finished
I'd "Use Ya Own Words," But Waiting On Ya Skills Seriously Takes "More-Than-A-Minute"
^ LoL... Nice personal flip to start with... good multies

My Score-Be-The-Limits, Like Polling The Pharisee's, Each Voter'll Comdemn-You
& Ya Quotables Be Like A "Game Of 20 Questions" How Peeps Mutter "Where? When?-Who?"
LoL.. Good rhyme scheme... decent punch

I Send-Through Fierce Claws, Penetrate Ya Skin & Organ Fabric, Bladed Fear-This-Fuck?
"2 Flaw,-Less Next Time" Kids Ain't Declaring Ya Reign, They Counting Ya Mistakes & Keeping Ya Spirits-Up
^ Decent... should have had this as opener so your best bar would finish off the verse



Ugly aka Flawless


Bladed Thesis "It's seriously has been A Minute"
Dropped late so it wouldn't take 5 days 2 "get you finished"
^ Meh, okay... nothing great

Bitch "Please"!!! This tournament 2 you is fucking 'tease"
Cuz The only way you be on my level is when "I'm beginning tha league"
^This is iight, I get what you're trying to say but could have been worded much better and therefore have been a stronger punch

Undefeated cuz your 1st 2 battles you "played with rooks"
Tempted 2 steal-my-flow even if you "strayed from crooks
Meh, okay, again...



Overall, Bladed came quite nice in this battle with the wordplay, rhyme scheme and punches. Flawless' verse just didn't impress me enough, and I thought it would get better after the first bar but it didnt... so Vote - Bladed Thesis

Kapten Roy
11-28-2005, 07:26 PM
Personals: Nan
Punches: Tie
Wordplay: Tie
Flow: 2Flawful
Creativiity: BT
Overall enjoyment: 2Flawful

Both showed great potential and were not similar at all. They were similar in the main catagories in which we judge from however. I liked BT's vocab and imagery. There was something about his verse that made it seem a little awkward and un battle like. Maybe he isn't American and speaks differently but there was something a little off about it. Now it was dope, but just not battle material. I liked 2flawful's verse too and was more funny to me. It was more like a battle verse than BT's. Since this is a battle my vote is Flawful.

Bladed Thesis
11-28-2005, 07:37 PM
ummmm... how can nobody have personals...? i had one...? please explain...

Kapten Roy
11-28-2005, 07:42 PM
What personals do you have? I see some nameplay but no personals. Maybe there is something I don't know about him and didn't realize was a personal so please point that out for me.

Bladed Thesis
11-28-2005, 07:43 PM
ummmmm, where i say "I'd Use Your Own Words"... its a hyperlink... CLICK IT...

Kapten Roy
11-28-2005, 07:50 PM
Well i stand corrected. i guess i didn't realize that was a hyperlink. i still liked flawless' verse better though. i'll give you personals then but that makes it a tie. since i like flawless' verse more, i'll keep my vote the same. yours was good though so don't beat yourself up. keep up the good work.

Bladed Thesis
11-28-2005, 07:55 PM
another KO down the drain due to wack voters... peace kid...

Vokals
11-28-2005, 11:06 PM
2-0 after futher review of YL's vote it was discounted....

2Flawless
11-28-2005, 11:15 PM
May I ask why YL's vote was discontinued

Vokals
11-28-2005, 11:20 PM
it was brought to my attention that they had given you the vote on a really played bar and concept, so i mediated it.. if you feel my decision was un just you are more than welcome to ask for a 2nd opinion from saracen and or nocturne

2Flawless
11-28-2005, 11:23 PM
^^^naw fuck it this verse was trash neway keyed it in less than 10 min

Vokals
11-29-2005, 08:21 PM
dissappoint battle simple lines from both

Personals-- tie, both lacked in personals and nothing was stand out from either
Punches-- Bladed.. i saw 2flawless had a played concept in there
Flow-- 2Flaw.. bladed urs was stretched and hard to catch
Multis-- neither, nothing stood out to give either of u this cat
WP/Metas-- Bladed.. his attempt was better, not much better but took it

over all bladed won.. not by much in any cat poor battle...