View Full Version : LW- Saracen vs Young Legacy (3-1)


Vokals
11-22-2005, 07:27 AM
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.Inphinite.
11-23-2005, 10:30 AM
Check...

Young-Legacy
11-24-2005, 12:57 AM
chekkin... good luck homie
~WuN~

Young-Legacy
11-26-2005, 08:53 PM
you can tell niggas you had war with a soldier cause i'll leave the "marks-to-prove-it"/
flows so cold i spit icicle daggers through ya chest so you can say ya "hearts-in-the-music"///

i dont try to make you look bad- its obvious you suffer "defeat-for-the-fun"/
in simplest terms- ya flows fartha from bein fire than a "tree-from-the-sun"///

imma procrastinater- so i'll lyrically slaughter you now but leave the "mess-for-later"/
hit you with punches that'll knock you out- juss to wake up to a "resperator"///

i'll leave you a site ta see in the street- abstract art of red when the "paints white"/
homie ya style can be compared to a slut cause everyone knows you "aint tight"///

im like a mine on the battle field- niggas scared to come in my "proximity"/
i treat the stage like a morgue- you juss anotha dead cat in this "facinity"///
~WuN~

.Inphinite.
11-27-2005, 07:30 AM
Blah... Im late. I'm also busy so heres a quick verse


Ya verse is mundane n bland, read jus one of my bars and I'll bet you cower
Ya can't sustain your plan Coz your chances of winning is like your rep power*
You're a confirmed freak, bredren with no affirmed street cred. This geeks afraid
And I aint talking about a previous battle when you're known to beat a gay*
See me? thats a No No... I'm the dicatorship regime with horrifying violence
Because looking at your verse, son ...no wonder you seem to glorify silence


* His rep power is 0
* Beat SoHOMO

Vokals
11-27-2005, 07:44 AM
nuke is docked 1 vote from time limit... 0-0 vote

2Flawless
11-29-2005, 02:18 PM
IIght Explanations

YL if this was a drop it would b iight but it's a battle learn to take shots at your opponent No Hate!!!

Saracen.....

Ya can't sustain your plan Coz your chances of winning is like your rep power*

And I aint talking about a previous battle when you're known to beat a gay*


Vote=Saracen *nice personals* 1

.Inphinite.
11-29-2005, 02:45 PM
Vote still stands at 0-0, thanks for the bote Flawless

Spinna
11-29-2005, 02:59 PM
Young Legacy

you can tell niggas you had war with a soldier cause i'll leave the "marks-to-prove-it"/
flows so cold i spit icicle daggers through ya chest so you can say ya "hearts-in-the-music"///
ok meta

i dont try to make you look bad- its obvious you suffer "defeat-for-the-fun"/
in simplest terms- ya flows fartha from bein fire than a "tree-from-the-sun"///
ok punch

imma procrastinater- so i'll lyrically slaughter you now but leave the "mess-for-later"/
hit you with punches that'll knock you out- juss to wake up to a "resperator"///
kinda don't get this: i see what u might be saying but still doesn't hit hard when put all together

i'll leave you a site ta see in the street- abstract art of red when the "paints white"/
homie ya style can be compared to a slut cause everyone knows you "aint tight"///
ok punch, good wordplay

im like a mine on the battle field- niggas scared to come in my "proximity"/
i treat the stage like a morgue- you juss anotha dead cat in this "facinity"///
good vocab, nice meta; once again, i see what u might be trying to say with the last line but it seems off with the wording

Saracen

Ya verse is mundane n bland, read jus one of my bars and I'll bet you cower
Ya can't sustain your plan Coz your chances of winning is like your rep power*
good vocab, ok personal, ok punch

You're a confirmed freak, bredren with no affirmed street cred. This geeks afraid
And I aint talking about a previous battle when you're known to beat a gay*
flow off a little, ok personal

See me? thats a No No... I'm the dicatorship regime with horrifying violence
Because looking at your verse, son ...no wonder you seem to glorify silence
ok punch

Saracen had more personals than YL. YL had more punches but lacked consistency present in Saracen's verse. That being said, YL's verse brought me more overall enjoyment. It comes down to the cat whose punches stood out more: YL
My vote: Young Legacy

big DADDY wAr™
11-29-2005, 04:23 PM
YL: you had some nice word play and then there was some played lines also......
and yeah i agree if this was just a verse then i woulda been more than enough.............
...but Saracen....nice way ta get personals all over that shit........
thats what got you this battle plus the fact that you had some nice punches...........

punches:Saracen
flow:Saracen
multies:tied
personals:Saracen
enjoyment:Saracen..........

Saracen gets my vote

big DADDY wAr™
11-29-2005, 04:24 PM
too many clicks..........

TwiZted StyleZ
11-29-2005, 04:44 PM
This was an ight battle.......both came pretty solid but i cant stand that gay ass /// marks an stretched lines yah need some structure in your life...
but young u came wit some played lines that didnt hit Werk on ur punchs....saracen u had a consistent verse that had mostly fresh punchs.....
Punchs=Saracen
multi's=tie
personals=saracen
vocab=tie
structure=no-one
overall=Saracen

Vokals
11-29-2005, 08:01 PM
as i see it
Punches- sar...neither came with anything that great and creative.. but YL had some played concepts
Personals- sar, saw none from YL
Flow- neither, both had long lines and was difficult to flow with
Multis- same as above
WP/Metas- YL he had more through out, and sar kinda lacked there..

overall sar won this.. poor battle, would like to see personals from YL, and shorter bars by both