View Full Version : LW Title Match- Die A BD'z vs Nocturne vs ..E.Z.. (3-0-0)


Vokals
11-22-2005, 07:32 AM
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6-8 Bars

G'luck

Ezekiel
11-22-2005, 07:50 AM
Check.....Dope line up once again and all 8 bars boys

D¡∑ Á ßd'z
11-22-2005, 09:33 AM
uggh @ 8 bars... alrighty then.

check, g'luck fellers.

Aura
11-22-2005, 01:42 PM
Heh...

Check..

D¡∑ Á ßd'z
11-24-2005, 05:26 PM
I'll Abort N' Bomb Cats Quick - Leave Ya Organs Gone, Abs Clipped..
So If We 'Stand Off', D'll 'Crack Ya Shin, Noc (http://mkw.mortalkombatonline.com/bios/mk4/shinnok.gif)' Like 'Destroying Mortal Kombat Discs'.. 1
Ya Fort'll Flop, Smashed Bricks Fall Heavily N' Collapse Around Dude..
..All Your Fans'll Shout "Boo", Cuz 'Beat Me'?
Only Time 'EZ Duz It In This Lifetime' Is 'Eric Wright Guest-Starring On 'Mad About You".. 2
F' Confidence, I'm Slammin' Proud Crews - Kids I Wallow In Power..
Y'all Just Moderate Cowards, So I'll Have You 'Hoes-In The Dirt' Like 'Waterin' Flowers'.. 3
The Semi Auto Clips Shower, Shells Go Off N' Mills Bust Ya Throat..
Cause We Know 'Noc A Clown', Since Anyone Who 'Doubles Him' Is 'Still Just A Joke'.. 4
Get Filled Up W. Smoke, Since This Bums Spits Are Dull, Past Slow..
Don't 'Get You Outta My Hair', And You'll Take A 'Permanent Nap-E' Like 'Unpickable Afros'.. 5

Ezekiel
11-25-2005, 09:09 PM
Well.....didn't have as much time as i liked for this shit with work n all...but g'luck to noc n bd'z...


Again....Nocturne aka malagen aka Jynxx aka Ancient


Now call me a Tarot card reader cuz this battle Jynx’ll learn-of-his-curse
It’s like…
A predictable movie (http://www.themovieblog.com/archives/2005/06/war_of_the_worlds_review.html)the way noc’s spits seem to take a turn-for-the-worst*
Yes!! His earning-his-hearse, my verse give a new meaning to boxing-him
Especially when this vet was promoting dogs (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=55760)…with more cock-then-him!!**
Shots rocking-him, mal misplaces his words n verbs like retards-in-scrabble
Something whack to vote on?
Shit…In that case I’ll just wait until you post Ur verse in next-weeks-battle!!
Regrets-are-rattled, how is he here? I’m just guessing noc must-be-slow
You’re The Contender (http://www.nbc.com/nbc/The_Contender/)?
Ha… Now we all know the reason why the voters never watched-the-show!!***


Wow...Die A Bdz aka L Neen, Yo!, Black Dee, Black Disciple, and Silluh Bull

Damm talk about the played shit, 5 bars so what you telling-me-spastic?
Becuz the only time we seen Dbz (http://www.dragonballz.com/) putting up a fight is in anime-classics****
Neck n neck? Nah I possess guillotine punches, weakness hamper’s-D
His dreams came true? Reality check…
Like computer nerds he lost hope when they stopped making final-fantasy (http://www.shadysoldiers.com/forum/showthread.php?t=36678)*****
In time he’ll trample-me? Ha I dismantle-D while his worst-concerns-me
“Bad news travels fast”…I guess that’s why d posted his verse-up-early!!
D’s hearse-is-turning but he wont catch the subtlety (http://www.shadysoldiers.com/forum/showthread.php?t=36348), chins-i-smash-em
Battle like him? Nah…
Wouldn’t walk in his shoes either cuz im here to actually win-my-matches

|Explanations|
* War of the worlds was a predictable movie
**Noc's promoting a chick he knows in modelling(link)
*** Contendor was a show on t.v, noc's a contendor for the belt
**** Dragon ballz was a fighting anime clasic...Die A Bdz
***** D lost to Fantasy on SS, final fantasy was a video game(link)
****** He also lost to Subtle T(Link)

Ezekiel
11-27-2005, 09:22 PM
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=675424#post675424
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=55783

Voted on those....Noc are u showing? If you dont make it the voting from best overall verse between me n die bdz....noc at least show u homo lol...

Xkwisite
11-27-2005, 10:54 PM
.....EZ.....smfh......its 5 bars total....lol.....not five bars per opponent...........i think you should edit ur verse......lol.........



tryin to be slick.....




smh.....

Vokals
11-28-2005, 02:04 AM
noc is DQ'd...

Aura
11-28-2005, 02:20 AM
Blah... I procrastinated horribly.... Chances are I'll get DQ'ed but I didn't just want to just no show... It's late either way.... *shrugs...Sorry..:(





* Kids say they "boo boo"
** Armies for lines in combat and some Die/Die A Bd'z/Soldiers wear BDU's
**** EZ got KO by Xkwisite in a battle/X is also known as the Dark Knight

(Matched Die Bd'z Bar Limit)





A Promising End...>:/



..Man, watch Zeke-get-bruised, 'cause see-these-dudes really think that they'll see-me-lose
Hot lines..? They're Dreaming!! Ya sheets-get-BOO's like kids with shit streaks-in-school!*
Why beast-these-fools..? Please! 'Least-this-proves my speech-when-fueld spits heat-in-duels
His "LINES'll DIE like soldiers fallen in war", so in punches we know why BD's-USED**
It's ..E.Z..-too... Crushing these herbs with speechless-moves that'll breach-you-two's
Peeps-with-who!? BD'z ain't special being in AP , Regardless I still feast-on-crews!!
My Talk's-tight...Guess I'm "BUGGING E.Z" with hard-writes recited as coughed-lice
Think Shadow's are-all-nice...? Dawg, right!! Battles prove you can't handle the Dark-Nights!***


A Promise Fulfilled...

Aura
11-28-2005, 02:29 AM
Gen says I'm DQ until you guys confirm it in the thread about the PM's regarding the extention... Otherwise, good battle homies... :D

Ezekiel
11-28-2005, 06:50 AM
.....EZ.....smfh......its 5 bars total....lol.....not five bars per opponent...........i think you should edit ur verse......lol.........



tryin to be slick.....




smh.....




smh....we are able to post 6-8bars u dumb ass....i did 4 for each....read next time u dumb fuck

D¡∑ Á ßd'z
11-28-2005, 07:29 PM
just let noc be in it... at least he posted up.

VOTE.

Vokals
11-28-2005, 11:09 PM
if E.Z doesnt confirm it by the 1st vote, it stands as DQ

Ezekiel
11-29-2005, 12:01 AM
Let his verse count...he made the effort to at least put it in...plus i dont feel like bein a prick :)

BIGBENT73
11-29-2005, 10:47 AM
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST BATTLES IVE SEEN ON HERE, SO FAR!!!

AS FAR AS THE PUNCHES PERSONALS METAS STRUCTURE, ITS PRETTY DAM CLOSE, SO WITH THAT BEIN SAID....

IN MY OPINION E.Z. WENT WAY OVER THE LINE LIMIT FOR THE BATTLE, NO HATE YA CAME NICE BUT I GOTTA D.Q. YOU FROM MY VOTE.

NOW DIE n NOC(DAM THIS IS HARD) I THINK DIE, WAS A LIL TIGHTER WIT THE WORDPLAY N RHYME STRUCTURE..

AGAIN NICE BATTLE ALL 3 OF YA!!!

VOTE= DIE

Bladed Thesis
11-29-2005, 12:53 PM
Die A Bd'z


I'll Abort N' Bomb Cats Quick - Leave Ya Organs Gone, Abs Clipped..
So If We 'Stand Off', D'll 'Crack Ya Shin, Noc' Like 'Destroying Mortal Kombat Discs'.. 1

nice nameflip... nice bar...

Ya Fort'll Flop, Smashed Bricks Fall Heavily N' Collapse Around Dude..
..All Your Fans'll Shout "Boo", Cuz 'Beat Me'?
Only Time 'EZ Duz It In This Lifetime' Is 'Eric Wright Guest-Starring On 'Mad About You".. 2

nice... feeling this...

F' Confidence, I'm Slammin' Proud Crews - Kids I Wallow In Power..
Y'all Just Moderate Cowards, So I'll Have You 'Hoes-In The Dirt' Like 'Waterin' Flowers'.. 3

decent... kinda played...

The Semi Auto Clips Shower, Shells Go Off N' Mills Bust Ya Throat..
Cause We Know 'Noc A Clown', Since Anyone Who 'Doubles Him' Is 'Still Just A Joke'.. 4

decent...

Get Filled Up W. Smoke, Since This Bums Spits Are Dull, Past Slow..
Don't 'Get You Outta My Hair', And You'll Take A 'Permanent Nap-E' Like 'Unpickable Afros'.. 5

decent...



..E.Z..

Now call me a Tarot card reader cuz this battle Jynx’ll learn-of-his-curse
It’s like…
A predictable movie the way noc’s spits seem to take a turn-for-the-worst*

nice personal...

Yes!! His earning-his-hearse, my verse give a new meaning to boxing-him
Especially when this vet was promoting dogs…with more cock-then-him!!**

nice personal... punch kinda weak tho...

Shots rocking-him, mal misplaces his words n verbs like retards-in-scrabble
Something whack to vote on?
Shit…In that case I’ll just wait until you post Ur verse in next-weeks-battle!!

aight...

Regrets-are-rattled, how is he here? I’m just guessing noc must-be-slow
You’re The Contender?
Ha… Now we all know the reason why the voters never watched-the-show!!***

aight... kinda played...

Damm talk about the played shit, 5 bars so what you telling-me-spastic?
Becuz the only time we seen Dbz putting up a fight is in anime-classics****

decent... played...

Neck n neck? Nah I possess guillotine punches, weakness hamper’s-D
His dreams came true? Reality check…
Like computer nerds he lost hope when they stopped making final-fantasy*****

aight personal... decent bar...

In time he’ll trample-me? Ha I dismantle-D while his worst-concerns-me
“Bad news travels fast”…I guess that’s why d posted his verse-up-early!!

nice... decent punch...

D’s hearse-is-turning but he wont catch the subtlety, chins-i-smash-em
Battle like him? Nah…
Wouldn’t walk in his shoes either cuz im here to actually win-my-matches

weak... not feeling the punch...





Nocturne

..Man, watch Zeke-get-bruised, 'cause see-these-dudes really think that they'll see-me-lose
Hot lines..? They're Dreaming!! Ya sheets-get-BOO's like kids with shit streaks-in-school!*

aight... weak punch...

Why beast-these-fools..? Please! 'Least-this-proves my speech-when-fueld spits heat-in-duels
His "LINES'll DIE like soldiers fallen in war", so in punches we know why BD's-USED**

decent nameflip... cool concept... coulda been worded better...

It's ..E.Z..-too... Crushing these herbs with speechless-moves that'll breach-you-two's
Peeps-with-who!? BD'z ain't special being in AP , Regardless I still feast-on-crews!!

weak... not a hard hitting punch...

My Talk's-tight...Guess I'm "BUGGING E.Z" with hard-writes recited as coughed-lice
Think Shadow's are-all-nice...? Dawg, right!! Battles prove you can't handle the Dark-Nights!***

aight personal... coulda been worded better...



Punches - Die A Bd'z... of the three, his punches hit harder and were more effective...
Personals - EZ... good personals, veres Noc especially...
Multies - Die Z Bd's/EZ... didn't hinder their flow...
Metas - Die A Bd'z... more complex and effective... EZ had some nice ones tho...
Flow - EZ...
Complexity - Die A Bd'z... his punches won this cat for him...
Creativity - EZ...
Wordplay - Die A Bd'z/EZ...
Nameplay - Die A Bd'z... Mortal Kombat line won this for him... not much nameflips from Noc or EZ...


Overall - Die A Bd'z... 2nd: EZ... 3rd: Nocturne...


Die and EZ both started off great, with their best bars in the beginning... when they both cooled off, Die remained consistent with decent bars while EZ started slowing with weaker punches... Die A Bd'z brought more complex punches, sound wordplay and nameplay, and good metas won this for him... EZ brought some really nice personals and his flow was good throughout, but punches are more important than personals and if he'd been able to work some harder punches in with his personals, he woulda won this... basically, he needs to bring harder punches while continuing to use the personals... Nocturne didn't come that hard and his chaotic multi use kinda threw off his flow and made his multies less effective... with weak punches, few personals, and a bad flow, he lost it...

2Flawless
11-29-2005, 02:39 PM
Die A BD'z....

Y'all Just Moderate Cowards, So I'll Have You 'Hoes-In The Dirt' Like 'Waterin' Flowers'..

..E.Z..

Now call me a Tarot card reader cuz this battle Jynx’ll learn-of-his-curse

Becuz the only time we seen Dbz putting up a fight is in anime-classics****

Nocturne...

His "LINES'll DIE like soldiers fallen in war", so in punches we know why BD's-USED**
^^^Nice

Think Shadow's are-all-nice...? Dawg, right!! Battles prove you can't handle the Dark-Nights!***
^^^Nice ass personal


Vote=Nocturne It was a hard vote I liked that one line by A BD'z but it wasn't enough ..E.Z.. verse was nice good nameplay it got stronger when you took shots at A BD'z Nocturne punches hit a bit harder 2 me good drop by all three jus thought Noc took it

Black™
11-29-2005, 02:45 PM
2-1-0..

upppppppz....

SomethingAwfl
11-29-2005, 03:55 PM
Punches :: Tie 3-Way

Personals :: EZ (stacked it with the Nameplay and tons of dirt on Noc)

Wordplay :: Tie between BD'z and Noc (MK wordplay was cool if not a little random in the sense no one knew what you were talking about until you linked us. But creative ... Noc the BDU wordplay was nice but the Army/Lines made it too complex)

Multis :: Die A BD'z (Simply the most complex multis)

Creativity :: Tie

Enjoyment :: Die A BD'z (I like the way you flow, multis are nice and the whole feel is very cool to your verses)

Flow :: Nocturne (A little stretched, but the tons of multis linked it up)




VOTE = Die A BD'z

Vokals
11-29-2005, 05:32 PM
DIE won by ko.. noc was deducted 2 votes for being late.. DIE is LW Champ