View Full Version : MW- Bladed Thesis vs Alcatraz (Bladed wins 4-1)
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SomethingAwfl 11-29-2005, 08:54 PM Alca's in like remotes with batteries.
~Good luck Ex
Bladed Thesis 11-30-2005, 11:22 AM goodluck Sayo... going 6...
Bladed Thesis 12-01-2005, 10:00 PM Blah... Keyed...
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Lets Get Serious, Fam...
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The Best-Ya-Got? Ha, Like Sleeping Mat Extermination: I'll Leave Ya Bed-Ridden, Ya Chest-In-Cots
"Polka-Round Ya" Til Ya "Pectus All Holes," No Coming Back Cuz Its Ain't Always So Simple To ""Connect-T (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=677302#post677302)he-Dots" (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=677651#post677651)*
Ya Senseless-Talk & Skills "Relative,-Lee Shaky" Like Bad Genes From Bruce Or "Frail-Antiques"
So I Ram My Fingers Up Ya Nostils & "Massacre Al-By-Nose" Like Rwanda Did To Its "Pale-Skinned-Peeps"*
Kid Nailed-Chin-Deep & Like US Presidential Elections Voters Won't Believe What They-Witness
Bads News: Got Ya Whole "World On A String" & By Ya Own Admission (http://shadysoldiers.com/forum/showthread.php?p=539764#post539764) Ya Ain't Got The "Talent To Play-With-It"
Change-Quick,-Bitch, My Text Brutality Compared To Vats Of Blackish Oil How These Skills-Be-Medieval
Beat Ya To The Brink Of Death & "Send Ya To Hell,-Boy, Too" Like Ya Won "A Trip To See Marvel Filming-The-Sequal"
Death's Real-When-Ya-Beat-Nill, Throwing Caution To The Wind, I Catch Ya Breath & Trounce-Ya-Hype
Sayo A Clear Contender? That Kinda Statement's More "Front n' Center" Than Bears Linemen "Lying About-The-Fight"
I Count-Ya-Light, RW Won't Forget Me Humbling A Vet With His Ranking Status & Bars-In-Noob-Phase
Any Voter Respecting Ya? Naw, Not When Ya "Talk About Ya Own Experience" (http://shadysoldiers.com/forum/showthread.php?p=543863#post543863) & The Shit Sounds "Harsh-&-Too-Staged"
Explanations:
*Its Two Hyperlinks...
*During The Genocide In Rwanda, Albinos Were Singled Out Early On For Their Skin Color...
Don't Get, Ask Or Don't Vote...
SomethingAwfl 12-02-2005, 08:44 PM Watch Ex fret, his feet in shackles, this so called "Text Vet" gets deeply rattled
The only time you see Blade in the IV League is the next set of weekly battles*
Even ya best rap is bleak and shallow, ya floppy texts'll get all raped and shut
Prolly fakes and fronts, Thesis make a point? Only in topic sentences and papercuts
I dropped ya precedents like JFK and son, I'll have em die in worse ways**
Get defied and burst sprayed, X All Checks and he's dead like death deciding surveys***
I'll have ExSol fried and burnt, played, this slut gets blown, Blade's a baffoon
Just a fucking ball-sack, so These-is-Nuts to show but he ain't a Racoon****
Blade's gonna lose, Thesis please, my raping words'll maim em and damage
So I'ma put a Loss between Blade, so BLT ain't referring to makin a sandwich
*Ivy League colleges are the top colleges. IV = Roman Numeral 4, next week is the 4th week of the League.
**JFK was assassinated and JFK Jr. died in a plane crash. Precedents / Presidents.
***Blade's other alias is ExSol. In a survey you X the check-boxes. X-All Checks / ExSol Checks as in checks in.
****Thesis nuts to show. (He's nuts to show up for the battle) / These(thesis) Is Nuts To Show. (He is a pair of nuts, you get it.)
By the way, the italics designate the multis, and black italics designate the long multis, they are longer than you might think, so read carefully.
Good battle however the outcome, Thesis. Brought out more in me than the last 2 battles ...
BT:
The Best-Ya-Got? Ha, Like Sleeping Mat Extermination: I'll Leave Ya Bed-Ridden, Ya Chest-In-Cots
"Polka-Round Ya" Til Ya "Pectus All Holes," No Coming Back Cuz Its Ain't Always So Simple To ""Connect-The-Dots"*
^ not really hard hitting.. you get creativity pts though
Ya Senseless-Talk & Skills "Relative,-Lee Shaky" Like Bad Genes From Bruce Or "Frail-Antiques"
So I Ram My Fingers Up Ya Nostils & "Massacre Al-By-Nose" Like Rwanda Did To Its "Pale-Skinned-Peeps"*
^ 1st line was ok... 2nd nice wp
Kid Nailed-Chin-Deep & Like US Presidential Elections Voters Won't Believe What They-Witness
Bads News: Got Ya Whole "World On A String" & By Ya Own Admission Ya Ain't Got The "Talent To Play-With-It"
^ like the personal.. punch was sub par
Change-Quick,-Bitch, My Text Brutality Compared To Vats Of Blackish Oil How These Skills-Be-Medieval
Beat Ya To The Brink Of Death & "Send Ya To Hell,-Boy, Too" Like Ya Won "A Trip To See Marvel Filming-The-Sequal"
^lol.. this was cute..
Death's Real-When-Ya-Beat-Nill, Throwing Caution To The Wind, I Catch Ya Breath & Trounce-Ya-Hype
Sayo A Clear Contender? That Kinda Statement's More "Front n' Center" Than Bears Linemen "Lying About-The-Fight"
^decent wp
I Count-Ya-Light, RW Won't Forget Me Humbling A Vet With His Ranking Status & Bars-In-Noob-Phase
Any Voter Respecting Ya? Naw, Not When Ya "Talk About Ya Own Experience" & The Shit Sounds "Harsh-&-Too-Staged
^ wasn't able to view the thread.. but i guess 'tis a personal
Alc
Watch Ex fret, his feet in shackles, this so called "Text Vet" gets deeply rattled
The only time you see Blade in the IV League is the next set of weekly battles*
^ could've used a connection instead of sacraficing for inner n outers.. the punch was coo..
Even ya best rap is bleak and shallow, ya floppy texts'll get all raped and shut
Prolly fakes and fronts, Thesis make a point? Only in topic sentences and papercuts
^ lol... coo np
I dropped ya precedents like JFK and son, I'll have em die in worse ways**
Get defied and burst sprayed, X All Checks and he's dead like death deciding surveys***
^ decent..
I'll have ExSol fried and burnt, played, this slut gets blown, Blade's a baffoon
Just a fucking ball-sack, so These-is-Nuts to show but he ain't a Racoon****
^ coo np
Blade's gonna lose, Thesis please, my raping words'll maim em and damage
So I'ma put a Loss between Blade, so BLT ain't referring to makin a sandwich
^ some wp on a person u have to assume is played.. 'tis played
Delivery: BT (used creativity in set-ups.. Al sacraficed for extended multis)
Personals: BT (both had 'em... bt moreso)
+.5Punches: Al (edged it slightly)
Creativity: BT (yup)
Consistency: Tie (good on both)
Enjoy: BT
Vote: Bladed Thesis
Good battle
TwiZted StyleZ 12-03-2005, 04:54 PM The Best-Ya-Got? Ha, Like Sleeping Mat Extermination: I'll Leave Ya Bed-Ridden, Ya Chest-In-Cots
"Polka-Round Ya" Til Ya "Pectus All Holes," No Coming Back Cuz Its Ain't Always So Simple To ""Connect-The-Dots"*
^^^ ight opener....
Ya Senseless-Talk & Skills "Relative,-Lee Shaky" Like Bad Genes From Bruce Or "Frail-Antiques"
So I Ram My Fingers Up Ya Nostils & "Massacre Al-By-Nose" Like Rwanda Did To Its "Pale-Skinned-Peeps"*
^^^Good personal
Kid Nailed-Chin-Deep & Like US Presidential Elections Voters Won't Believe What They-Witness
Bads News: Got Ya Whole "World On A String" & By Ya Own Admission Ya Ain't Got The "Talent To Play-With-It"
^^^ weak...
Change-Quick,-Bitch, My Text Brutality Compared To Vats Of Blackish Oil How These Skills-Be-Medieval
Beat Ya To The Brink Of Death & "Send Ya To Hell,-Boy, Too" Like Ya Won "A Trip To See Marvel Filming-The-Sequal"
^^^^Nice puunch....
Death's Real-When-Ya-Beat-Nill, Throwing Caution To The Wind, I Catch Ya Breath & Trounce-Ya-Hype
Sayo A Clear Contender? That Kinda Statement's More "Front n' Center" Than Bears Linemen "Lying About-The-Fight"
^^^Good
I Count-Ya-Light, RW Won't Forget Me Humbling A Vet With His Ranking Status & Bars-In-Noob-Phase
Any Voter Respecting Ya? Naw, Not When Ya "Talk About Ya Own Experience" & The Shit Sounds "Harsh-&-Too-Staged"
^^^Strong closer
Watch Ex fret, his feet in shackles, this so called "Text Vet" gets deeply rattled
The only time you see Blade in the IV League is the next set of weekly battles*
^^^Ight opener
Even ya best rap is bleak and shallow, ya floppy texts'll get all raped and shut
Prolly fakes and fronts, Thesis make a point? Only in topic sentences and papercuts
^^^Nice
I dropped ya precedents like JFK and son, I'll have em die in worse ways**
Get defied and burst sprayed, X All Checks and he's dead like death deciding surveys***
^^^NIce.....punch
I'll have ExSol fried and burnt, played, this slut gets blown, Blade's a baffoon
Just a fucking ball-sack, so These-is-Nuts to show but he ain't a Racoon****
^^^Nice.....
Blade's gonna lose, Thesis please, my raping words'll maim em and damage
So I'ma put a Loss between Blade, so BLT ain't referring to makin a sandwich
^^^^Good closer
over all this was a close battle...both came wit strong verse's that were consistent.....but i think alcatraz came wit a stronger verse his punchs an personals were fresh an on point....V/ALCat
SomethingAwfl 12-03-2005, 05:25 PM ^^^^Thanks for the vote ... 1-1
.Inphinite. 12-03-2005, 08:52 PM The Best-Ya-Got? Ha, Like Sleeping Mat Extermination: I'll Leave Ya Bed-Ridden, Ya Chest-In-Cots
"Polka-Round Ya" Til Ya "Pectus All Holes," No Coming Back Cuz Its Ain't Always So Simple To ""Connect-The-Dots"*
Decent opener... Nothing amazing, but good start
Ya Senseless-Talk & Skills "Relative,-Lee Shaky" Like Bad Genes From Bruce Or "Frail-Antiques"
So I Ram My Fingers Up Ya Nostils & "Massacre Al-By-Nose" Like Rwanda Did To Its "Pale-Skinned-Peeps"*
Nice.... nice creativity and punch/personal... original.
Kid Nailed-Chin-Deep & Like US Presidential Elections Voters Won't Believe What They-Witness
Bads News: Got Ya Whole "World On A String" & By Ya Own Admission Ya Ain't Got The "Talent To Play-With-It"
iight, its a decent personal but could have been worded better.
Change-Quick,-Bitch, My Text Brutality Compared To Vats Of Blackish Oil How These Skills-Be-Medieval
Beat Ya To The Brink Of Death & "Send Ya To Hell,-Boy, Too" Like Ya Won "A Trip To See Marvel Filming-The-Sequal"
Ahah, nice punch
Death's Real-When-Ya-Beat-Nill, Throwing Caution To The Wind, I Catch Ya Breath & Trounce-Ya-Hype
Sayo A Clear Contender? That Kinda Statement's More "Front n' Center" Than Bears Linemen "Lying About-The-Fight"
Decent wordplay...
I Count-Ya-Light, RW Won't Forget Me Humbling A Vet With His Ranking Status & Bars-In-Noob-Phase
Any Voter Respecting Ya? Naw, Not When Ya "Talk About Ya Own Experience" & The Shit Sounds "Harsh-&-Too-Staged"
Cant view the page... so meh. Multi seems iight, personal seems pretty cool too but I dunno
Overall, a solid verse.... Good display of wordplay throughout with good originality and creativity in the right places.. Personals and the Albino name flip was pretty nice, erm.. rhyme schemes and multies throughout were pretty cool.. punches were okay, just the one that was kinda lacking and could be classed as a filler because it wasn't hard-hitting as the others imo..
Watch Ex fret, his feet in shackles, this so called "Text Vet" gets deeply rattled
The only time you see Blade in the IV League is the next set of weekly battles
Nice start too... both came nice with the opening bars
Even ya best rap is bleak and shallow, ya floppy texts'll get all raped and shut
Prolly fakes and fronts, Thesis make a point? Only in topic sentences and papercuts
LoL, this was cool
I dropped ya precedents like JFK and son, I'll have em die in worse ways
Get defied and burst sprayed, X All Checks and he's dead like death deciding surveys
kinda liked this... okay... nothing amazingly hard-hitting or "wow" so far tho..
I'll have ExSol fried and burnt, played, this slut gets blown, Blade's a baffoon
Just a fucking ball-sack, so These-is-Nuts to show but he ain't a Racoon
Okay... Its kinda creative but its a little bit forced.. get credit for it tho
Blade's gonna lose, Thesis please, my raping words'll maim em and damage
So I'ma put a Loss between Blade, so BLT ain't referring to makin a sandwich
LoL.. Nice closer..
Overall, a nice solid verse too.. Good creativity in places and a steady flow and rhyme scheme throughout helped the verse.. erm... punches were okay, felt they may have been worded slightly better, dunno... erm.. personals were cool.. but they were mainly nameflips.. maybe should've had some more personal stuff..
Anyway... overall vote = Bladed Thesis
Good battle... :)
Kapten Roy 12-03-2005, 09:08 PM Multies: Ass
Punches: Blade
Personals: Blade
Creativity: Tie
Flow: Ass
Vote: Blade
This was a close battle for me to vote on. Ass you came harder than you do on your usual drops. I think if this battle was spoken then yours would have sounded better. You had the multis and the structure and yours just flowed better. But since this is not a spoken battle, I have to go with Blade. He lacked flow but he was pretty much neck and neck with Ass on most of the other areas. It came down to Ass's long ass multi's verses Blade's personals. I think the personals are more important in battles than multies so I have to give the victory to Blade. It was very close though. Ass you showed you could elevate so don't feel bad.
Frosty 12-03-2005, 09:14 PM I liked the way ya'll both came out syrong think that bladed thesis stayed strong longer though. I like way bot verses had consistency but i think alcatraz stayed more consistent. I also like the punch lines but I think that bladed thesis had the hardest ones.
So my overall vote goes to Bladed thesis.
Vokals 12-03-2005, 09:20 PM ^^ Read the RBL Rules & Guidelines... pay attention to the part on HOW TO VOTE
then vote again..
still stands 3-1
Punches:Blade
Multies: Al
Personals:Blade
Creativity: Blade
Flow: Al
Vote= Blade...
Very nice battle... Both of you came really nice, but Blade's verse seemed a bit more wittier to me with the punches... A lot of different thoughts in their to create humor.. Wording was off a bit, but the punches came nice... Al had decent punches as well, just not as impressive in my opinion... Multies were on point, nice wordplay, and flow... But it comes down to Blades punches compared... So Blade gets my vote..
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