View Full Version : LW- Kronologik vs Twizted Stylez (5-4)


Vokals
11-29-2005, 08:39 PM
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Kronologik
11-30-2005, 07:23 AM
Check...

TwiZted StyleZ
11-30-2005, 06:08 PM
Check................

Kronologik
12-02-2005, 09:09 AM
This dude Twizted? More crooked, pussy! like he jerked-a-tight-whore
'N like a bankrupt G-Unit, he's -50 (per)Cent on his merk-the-site-tour!*

Twizted & Style? The two don't match, like Don-Juans-n-limp-wrists
So 'set it up' and 'battle Johnny' (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=668467#post668467), like you got condoms-in-a-twist!**

'TS' got it locked? Bout as likely as 'The Source' erasing-ad-pages
Your battle record'll never read 1-2, like Artemis (http://www.goddessgift.com/goddess-myths/greek_goddess_artemis.htm)facing-dark-ages***


Explanations

* Check his sig
** A johnny is a slang term for a condom (check link for reference to previous post)
*** Check the link for the Artemis ref, and TS = Twizted Stylez & The Source hip hop magazine

TwiZted StyleZ
12-02-2005, 11:47 AM
Ight.....
ither you must be overrated, or writer's block posed an interference
'Cuz your skill's so Lost, FOX offered you a cameo appearance
And stop your shitty linguistics, even when you're in the zone,man
Your Eng. Lands so weak, you disgrace your entire homeland
If this hacksaw me in the street, I'd lumberjack him with no waitin'
And hit him with enough axis to change the globe's rotation


No Explan.....needed

Kapten Roy
12-02-2005, 07:52 PM
Multis: Kronological
Personals: Kronological
Punches: Kronological
Creativity: Kronological
Flow: Tie
My vote: Tie

I felt kronological won this becuz he had more real punches. twisted's punshes were a little bit about himself and what he would do and the one's that were not did not make sense. he did have a little wordplya but kronological did too and his were better. also kronological had better multies to me.

CITH
12-02-2005, 10:20 PM
Multis: Twisted styles
Personals: Kronological
Punches: Twisted styles
Creativity: Kronological
Metas: Kronological
Flow: T.S.
vote: Kronolgical

In this one it was kind of hard to vote on, it was pretty good... But i think overall kronologic's creativity overrulled in this battled and actually attacked at his opponents, and twisted most of his lines you can use on anybody cuz he didn't diss him about his name so my vote is on kronological

ZuLou
12-03-2005, 01:59 AM
Kron's Rhymes

This dude Twizted? More crooked, pussy! like he jerked-a-tight-whore
'N like a bankrupt G-Unit, he's -50 (per)Cent on his merk-the-site-tour!*

This is okay. Good play on name.

Twizted & Style? The two don't match, like Don-Juans-n-limp-wrists
So 'set it up' and 'battle Johnny', like you got condoms-in-a-twist!**

Funny, but not until after I read the **. I didn't get it at first.

'TS' got it locked? Bout as likely as 'The Source' erasing-ad-pages
Your battle record'll never read 1-2, like Artemis facing-dark-ages***

This is okay, but like the other rhyme, the reference was kind of stretched.

Overall: I liked yo rhymes, but it seemed to me you tried too hard to make your words to connect. I mean, good wordplay, but it works better when people understand it readily.

Twizted's Rhymes

ither you must be overrated, or writer's block posed an interference
'Cuz your skill's so Lost, FOX offered you a cameo appearance

Lol. I liked that.

And stop your shitty linguistics, even when you're in the zone,man
Your Eng. Lands so weak, you disgrace your entire homeland

this is okay. kind of wack actually.

If this hacksaw me in the street, I'd lumberjack him with no waitin'
And hit him with enough axis to change the globe's rotation

This shit was cold. "hack saw=hacksaw", "lumberjack", "axis=axes", "rotation", . . . wordplay was on point. The punch hit hard. I think this line did it for me.

Overall: No doubt you have skill, you tripped on the second bar, but besides that you had good punches that flow on point and are easy to catch.

Verdict
This battle was good. U only spit three bars each, but they were good. I liked Kron's rhymes, but didn't catch them as easily as Twizted's. He just had better pop culture references, while Kron going into Greek mythology. So my vote goes to Twizted. No hate on Kron though, I respect your skill.

Aero
12-03-2005, 02:26 PM
Kron:

This dude Twizted? More crooked, pussy! like he jerked-a-tight-whore
'N like a bankrupt G-Unit, he's -50 (per)Cent on his merk-the-site-tour!*
^ can't just add the (per) part.. lol.. didn't like it

Twizted & Style? The two don't match, like Don-Juans-n-limp-wrists
So 'set it up' and 'battle Johnny', like you got condoms-in-a-twist!**
^punch is not really a diss..

'TS' got it locked? Bout as likely as 'The Source' erasing-ad-pages
Your battle record'll never read 1-2, like Artemis facing-dark-ages***
^ nah man...

TS:

ither you must be overrated, or writer's block posed an interference
'Cuz your skill's so Lost, FOX offered you a cameo appearance
^ basic.. a bit humorous

And stop your shitty linguistics, even when you're in the zone,man
Your Eng. Lands so weak, you disgrace your entire homeland
^ at 1st glance is funny but when you break it down it doesn't make sense.

If this hacksaw me in the street, I'd lumberjack him with no waitin'
And hit him with enough axis to change the globe's rotation
^ i like the wp.. punch was meh

Delivery: Kron (more use of multis)
Personals: Kron
+.5Punches: TS (landed harder)
Creativity: tie (neither stood out)
Consistency: TS
Enjoy: TS
Vote: TS

-Pretty close.

Vokals
12-03-2005, 08:18 PM
2-2 up

TwiZted StyleZ
12-05-2005, 12:23 AM
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=678540#post678540

Bladed Thesis
12-05-2005, 01:25 PM
Kronologikal...

This dude Twizted? More crooked, pussy! like he jerked-a-tight-whore
'N like a bankrupt G-Unit, he's -50 (per)Cent on his merk-the-site-tour!*

lol... nice personal... punch is decent...


Twizted & Style? The two don't match, like Don-Juans-n-limp-wrists
So 'set it up' and 'battle Johnny', like you got condoms-in-a-twist!**

nice wordplay... decent punch....


'TS' got it locked? Bout as likely as 'The Source' erasing-ad-pages
Your battle record'll never read 1-2, like Artemis facing-dark-ages***

decent...




Twisted Scripts...

ither you must be overrated, or writer's block posed an interference
'Cuz your skill's so Lost, FOX offered you a cameo appearance

weak... heard the "Lost" punch before... coulda been worded better...


And stop your shitty linguistics, even when you're in the zone,man
Your Eng. Lands so weak, you disgrace your entire homeland

decent...


If this hacksaw me in the street, I'd lumberjack him with no waitin'
And hit him with enough axis to change the globe's rotation

pretty nice wordplay... aight punch...



punches - Krono... more complex and hit harder...
personals - Krono... Twisted had none...
multies - Krono...
metas - Twisted... close cat...
flow - Krono... Twisted's flow was too shaky...
complexity - Krono...
creativity - Krono... played "Lost" punch from Twisted...

overall - Krono... kinda one-sided... his better and more complex punches, along with good use of multies and personals, won this for him... didn't see anything particularly impressive from Twisted...

Spinna
12-05-2005, 02:11 PM
Kronologik

This dude Twizted? More crooked, pussy! like he jerked-a-tight-whore
'N like a bankrupt G-Unit, he's -50 (per)Cent on his merk-the-site-tour!*
ok personal

Twizted & Style? The two don't match, like Don-Juans-n-limp-wrists
So 'set it up' and 'battle Johnny', like you got condoms-in-a-twist!**
ok personal and wordplay

'TS' got it locked? Bout as likely as 'The Source' erasing-ad-pages
Your battle record'll never read 1-2, like Artemis facing-dark-ages
hmmm

Twisted Styles

Ight.....
ither you must be overrated, or writer's block posed an interference
'Cuz your skill's so Lost, FOX offered you a cameo appearance
good punch

And stop your shitty linguistics, even when you're in the zone,man
Your Eng. Lands so weak, you disgrace your entire homeland
ok wordplay for text, ok personal

If this hacksaw me in the street, I'd lumberjack him with no waitin'
And hit him with enough axis to change the globe's rotation
beautiful wordplay, ok punch

Vote: Twisted Styles

Kronologik had a couple of personals and multies which made it a close battle but Twisted Styles won this because of his punches and wordplay. I also thought that TS's verse had more humor.

Ezekiel
12-05-2005, 03:53 PM
Delivery: Kron
Personals: Kron
Punches: Twisted
Creativity: Even
Consistency: Twisted
Enjoy: Tie
Vote: Twisted

Reason: Ehh kinda weak battle...neither came really hard, seems is though kron should have taken this but came half assed....pz

Vokals
12-05-2005, 07:15 PM
up for last votes

Vokals
12-07-2005, 06:36 PM
this is from the rbl... apon krons request he wanted it transfered to see the outcome of this


its 3-4 Twizted up

explained votes only, no dumb noobish/rook shit

ZuLou
12-07-2005, 06:47 PM
Coming from me, u ahould probably set a post limit, like voters must have 75 posts. up to you tho.

Kronologik
12-07-2005, 06:50 PM
200+ posts to vote please, just wanna get a proper result with no bullshit voting.

Strat!
12-07-2005, 07:12 PM
Personals: Kron - Name flips/sig pick outs...TS dint even mention K's name 1ce.
Punches: Kron - Hit much harder than TS'
Creativity: Kron - Not many people compare punches to greek mythology lol
Consistency: Kron - Each line complimented the line
Enjoy: Kron
Vote: Kron

Good try TS but i think kron 1-sided this battle.

PAX DECEPTICVS
12-07-2005, 08:13 PM
Flow: Kron
Personals: Kron
Punches: Twisted
Creativity: Kron
Consistency: Twisted
Multi's: Kron
Enjoy: Twisted


My Vote: Kron.

I thought Twisted came harder with punches, but that was about it.