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3-5 Bars

G'luck

Chickity checkin

Gotta go to basketball practice so i'ma be back on later

Checkin in .............

Key for you

My presence will leave this pussy tongue "twisted" more than Whoopie Goldbergs "dreadlocks",
Your verses are disapointing like a 16 year old "christian" daughter having a baby out of wedlock,
Reach in your stomach, rip out your lungs, and steal your breath,
I feel like "Jermaine Dupri" the way that im sentencing ".F.R.E.S.H. to DeF"(death)
Teflon vest wont help you in this situation, my shots are aimed at your head,
Ill make your existance here on rapworlds shorter than an oompa loompas legs,
Beat you until your face swell up like your allergic to bee stings,
"Sacramento" should be ashamed that they got a queen representin for the "kings"


4 bars

nice job Young, verses lookin good i'm going to drop tonight and if not that i'll drop tomorow afternoon

Alright i'ma go now

I was laughin when i saw my opponent, an unspoken legend i suppose
dunno why he's even in it, it's not like his rhymes flow, the recruiter musta read his rhymes with his eyes closed

This guys talking like he's a gangsta, but where his guns at? yo young stacks a fool
He put the $ to make it seem like he's rich but shit he thinks being a bitch is cool

You dont have any right callin me a queen, when the only pussy you seen
is either in your reflection or in a fucking porn magazine

My lyrical genius when you read this will make me your role model
Talkin about whoopie goldburg, when you a dyke like rosie O'donald

See I can spit one line on you, then you are retired
More like in your sig, there's NO WORDS REQUIRED
*his sig is no words necessary, required is the same thing*

5 bars

OK no hate but FRESH ya lines are played work on taking harder shots on your opponent personal-wize

The line i think took it for YoungStacks....

I feel like "Jermaine Dupri" the way that im sentencing ".F.R.E.S.H. to DeF"(death)


Vote=YS

^^ vote not gonna cut it, need more of a breakdown, or a catagory breakdown w/ a explination

Punches-YS
Flow-YS
Wordplay-YS
Personals-didn't spot none
Vote=YS

FRESH ya lines are played work on taking harder shots on your opponent personal-wize
YS took shots at his opponent FRESH tried but they were weak

Young Stacks

I feel like "Jermaine Dupri" the way that im sentencing ".F.R.E.S.H. to DeF"

^ lmao, nice creativity and a really effective punch. Good work

Ill make your existance here on rapworlds shorter than an oompa loompas legs

^ funny as fuck, although not the greatest punch.

"Sacramento" should be ashamed that they got a queen representin for the "kings"

^ Superb finisher, killer ending, case closed, coffin lid shut, buried 10 feet deep

F.R.E.S.H

Talkin about whoopie goldburg, when you a dyke like rosie O'donald
You dont have any right callin me a queen, when the only pussy you seen

^ You fed off his verse, which was stated in the rules as not being allowed.

See I can spit one line on you, then you are retired
More like in your sig, there's NO WORDS REQUIRED

^ Nice finisher, got a good personal in there, although the ending of the first line could have been worded better than "then you are retired".

Overall:

Multis - F.R.E.S.H
Punches - Young Stacks
Creativity - Young Stacks
Flow/Structure - Young Stacks
Sims/Metas - Young Stacks
Personals - Young Stacks
Wordplay - Young Stacks

Vote = Young Stacks

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One more thing:

Personals-didn't spot none

^ Flawless, try actually reading the whole battle before voting. Look at the closing lines of each competitor and tell me there is no personal there.

punches-stacks
flow-fresh
multies-tie(none really)
personals- tie
metas-stacks
wordplay- stacks

overall:stacks

^^ just give a reasoning of why u voted that way for it to count... thanks

Multies: Lee.J
Punches: Lee
Personals: Fresh
Creativity:Lee
Flow: Lee
My vote: Lee.J

My vote is a result of Fresh's punches being elementary to Lee's punches. Besides that, Lees verse was funnier with lines refering to "oompa loompas" and "queens, not kings" (although there is nothing wrong with being a queen). Also as someone else mentioned, fressh feeded so he is dq'd anyway.

YS's Rhymes:

My presence will leave this pussy tongue "twisted" more than Whoopie Goldbergs "dreadlocks",
Your verses are disapointing like a 16 year old "christian" daughter having a baby out of wedlock,

The twisted tongue part is alright. I didnt like the "christian daughter" thing though, seemed like you was just trying to get a rhyme in there. (Just my opinion)

Reach in your stomach, rip out your lungs, and steal your breath,
I feel like "Jermaine Dupri" the way that im sentencing ".F.R.E.S.H. to DeF"(death)

That was cold! Good punch.Just like to point out, though, that if you reach in his stomach, u won't find his lungs.

Teflon vest wont help you in this situation, my shots are aimed at your head,
Ill make your existance here on rapworlds shorter than an oompa loompas legs,

oompa loompa's legs? Nah . . . .

Beat you until your face swell up like your allergic to bee stings,
"Sacramento" should be ashamed that they got a queen representin for the "kings"

this was okay.


FRESH

I was laughin when i saw my opponent, an unspoken legend i suppose
dunno why he's even in it, it's not like his rhymes flow, the recruiter musta read his rhymes with his eyes closed

okay

This guys talking like he's a gangsta, but where his guns at? yo young stacks a fool
He put the $ to make it seem like he's rich but shit he thinks being a bitch is cool

wack

You dont have any right callin me a queen, when the only pussy you seen
is either in your reflection or in a fucking porn magazine

played

My lyrical genius when you read this will make me your role model
Talkin about whoopie goldburg, when you a dyke like rosie O'donald

okay

See I can spit one line on you, then you are retired
More like in your sig, there's NO WORDS REQUIRED

okay

Verdict:
This battle was okay. YS was pretty good. FRESH wasn't. He kind of gave me the impression that he was trying to sound intelligent, but ended up looking stupid with weak and played punchlines. Vote is for Lee J.