View Full Version : LW- BigBent73 vs 2Flawless (3-0)


Vokals
11-29-2005, 08:44 PM
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3-5 Bars

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BIGBENT73
11-29-2005, 10:13 PM
Checkin In!!!!!

2Flawless
11-30-2005, 01:29 AM
Checkin in shun

2Flawless
11-30-2005, 02:26 AM
going three

I voted on most of the BL battles don't think you need links if so tell me

Vokals
11-30-2005, 04:03 PM
last week doesnt count for this week

BIGBENT73
12-01-2005, 10:53 PM
SRY DOGG, THIS MAY BE A LIL EARLY BUT I AINT THE TYPE TO SIT N THINK OF SHIT FOR A COUPLE DAYS, WHEN I FEEL LIKE KEYIN I DROP, SO HERE I GO...>:/
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Yall ready for this? BigBent VS ~2 Flawless~ ima drop a key thats gonna be ~Ruthless wit Rawness~/ I doubt youll be able to spit when im done, cause the lyrical punches gonna leave you ~Toothless n Jawless~//

To beat Bent you gonna have to ~Enhance ya Spits Kid~ in this lyrical game im ~Advanced your Timid~/ Cause when im done ill leave you wit more lumps than fuckin ~Cancer Clinics~//

Yea im new here, so i guess this battle is for ma ~Braggin Rights~ any key i drop will rip any of this ~Faggots Writes~/ Dayum, look at his pic!!! Mawfuccah so dark , i bet you dont get caught when u out playin ~Tag at Night~//

pic.....http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=36051


I know ya hurtin from the punches n the ~Spits that Hit Ya~ cause yall seein Bent is the one thats ~Quick to Diss Ya~/ Im winnin this battle!!! When its ova take a *Snap Shot* & i bet you still wouldnt ~Get the Picture~//

No need to congradulate Bent on this cause Flaw ~Knows he Sick~ yea i dropped early on this battle cause ma ~Flows be Quick~/ Fuck a Rap Career!!! You should join the Navy, cause i heard this fag swallowed more seaman(semen) than ~Moby Dick~//



no explanation needed!!!
yall should get it!!!

2Flawless
12-01-2005, 11:45 PM
^^^You good it ain't early

Verse...

Judging by his name his flow structure already lost~shape***
Fishing Out Weak Emcee's
Shun Realize my first battle back wasn't rust I just tossed~bait

Neva crossed~greats from the outcome of your past~battles
Pffft....This kid's a joke
Ya Ending wouldn't be right 4 Tha Holidays even if ya closer had~carols

On this board your like bad~cattles ya-beef is not~needed
Shun Ya bars
Wouldn't have no type of value even if cops-treated

DEMOLISHED!!!

CITH
12-02-2005, 12:32 AM
multis = big bent

punches = big bent

creative = big bent

metas= tie

personals = big bent

wordplay= flawless

vote = big bent

Big bent just had more flow, and there was one part where he said too many words before he said the rhyme but the rest of it was perfectly rhymed and it flowed all together nicely

Nice battle tho

Kronologik
12-02-2005, 08:38 AM
BIGBENT - Few of your bars had really weak punches, if any. A lot of filler being drafted in just to make the multis come across right. The tag~at~night line was the highlight of the verse, did your research on flawless and thought up a nice personal punch to use. Structure could be worked on to help the flow of the verse. The finishing punch was also strong, and had nice relevant multis there to put the diss across. Overall a decent verse, with high points and low points.

2Flawless - 1st bar was mad creative with the bent/lost shape and fishing references. 2nd bar was ok, but a bit disappointing after the 1st. Multis were a bit meh, didnt really flow well enough for me. The 'neva crossed greats' line could have been more effective with a reference to his past opponents and their skill level. Closing bar was again nothing special, a personal would have ended it better. Seemed a bit rushed.

Overall:

Multis - BIGBENT
Punches - 2Flawless
Creativity - BIGBENT
Flow/Structure - 2Flawless
Sims/Metas - BIGBENT
Personals - Tie
Wordplay - Tie

Overall Vote = BIGBENT73

.Inphinite.
12-02-2005, 11:33 AM
Yea... Kron summed it all up really. Bent, your verse was okay in general. You had some filler bars in there that maybe weakened it on the whole, but you had some good multies and some decent punches/personals that got your verse through. Your flow is off coz your lines are too long, shorten em up and cut some of the irrelevant ish out. Decent verse overall...

Flawless, again, you didn't come hard in the battle. You had a decent and creative first line then your verse went down hill from there... You're lacking a bit of creativity and originality which is hurting your verse. Your multies were a bit basic.. few syllables... so try and get more syllables in there. Erm... Your bars arent long so I think you can possibly afford to make them longer instead of having that lil second line, which also seems to disrupt the flow a bit because they werent part of a rhyme scheme or anything.

Overall - vote goes to Big Bent



Im closing the battle, but be sure to vote on battles, please.

Vokals
12-02-2005, 01:02 PM
Do Not Move This, it helps me with setting up matches and plugging in records!!!