View Full Version : LW- BigBent73 vs Frosty (3-0)


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12-06-2005, 01:16 AM
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Frosty
12-06-2005, 03:57 AM
Hey Bent it's time to hand you down your muthafuckin sentence
cause i lost my last fuckin match now you face the consiqences:(

So knuck if you buck and i'll do yo ass like spongebob
swiss cheese ya ass cause you tried to act like crime mob

My flows got you sick sorta like a cancer patient
and the way things are looking i don't think you're gonna make it:sick:

You think you"re hard so now you're tryin to push me
But now you're bout to get fucked like a loose hoes pussy

So since you think you hot one thing before you write
it's hard for you to be that when frosty's AS COLD AS ICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Explanations:

*In court you recieve a sentence
*Spongebob is full of holes like he has been shot up!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Crime mob had a song called "knuck if you buck".
*Some cancer patience are terminally ill and they will not make it.
*I am as cold as ice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
;)

BIGBENT73
12-06-2005, 10:24 AM
Check!!!
Ill Drop Tonight Or Tomorrow Frosty Since U Did Already

BIGBENT73
12-06-2005, 11:38 AM
Think you gonna beat Bent n ~Be Sick i Doubt Son~/
Cause yall can see Frosty even can ~Predict his own Outcome~//

http://photos1.blogger.com/img/187/4983/320/Dead%20Snowman.jpg

You cant deal wit ma ~Flow Fam~ hammer cocked n ready to ~Go Blam~/
Fa real how u expect win any battle when u named after a ~Snowman~//

Lyrical punches leaves him ~Blue in the Face~ Rapworlds!! he not ~True to this Place~/
He in a crew called Bullshit Terrorists? Fuck that ya whole ~Crew is jus Gays~//

No way youll leave me ~Flustered n Shook G~ ya a virgin to battlin so im ~Bustin his Nookie~/
How u expect to beat a Vet in the Game jus look at ya name, he even knows that he's ~Justa Rookie~//

Look at ya rhymes!! HaHa, ya really ~Dissin Yaself~ Frosty only known when ~Christmas is Felt~/
Bent comin at you wit the Heat!! i dont know if Frosty is meltin or is he ~Pissin Himself~//

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explanations:
bullshit terrists= crew ran by sohomo(bar 3)
nookie = pussy(bar 4)

BIGBENT73
12-07-2005, 09:22 AM
uppin for votes!!!!!

TwiZted StyleZ
12-07-2005, 01:42 PM
Hey Bent it's time to hand you down your muthafuckin sentence
cause i lost my last fuckin match now you face the consiqences
^^^No weak
So knuck if you buck and i'll do yo ass like spongebob
swiss cheese ya ass cause you tried to act like crime mob
^^^No this was a wack punch
My flows got you sick sorta like a cancer patient
and the way things are looking i don't think you're gonna make it
^^^ight
You think you"re hard so now you're tryin to push me
But now you're bout to get fucked like a loose hoes pussy
^^^Played
So since you think you hot one thing before you write
it's hard for you to be that when frosty's AS COLD AS ICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^^^no weak closer

Think you gonna beat Bent n ~Be Sick i Doubt Son~/
Cause yall can see Frosty even can ~Predict his own Outcome~//
^^^ight opener....but those ~// lines are fuckin gay stopp that
You cant deal wit ma ~Flow Fam~ hammer cocked n ready to ~Go Blam~/
Fa real how u expect win any battle when u named after a ~Snowman~//
^^^Good punch wit the multis
Lyrical punches leaves him ~Blue in the Face~ Rapworlds!! he not ~True to this Place~/
He in a crew called Bullshit Terrorists? Fuck that ya whole ~Crew is jus Gays~//
^^^STreetched but ight punch.....
No way youll leave me ~Flustered n Shook G~ ya a virgin to battlin so im ~Bustin his Nookie~/
How u expect to beat a Vet in the Game jus look at ya name, he even knows that he's ~Justa Rookie~//
^^^Good personal
Look at ya rhymes!! HaHa, ya really ~Dissin Yaself~ Frosty only known when ~Christmas is Felt~/
Bent comin at you wit the Heat!! i dont know if Frosty is meltin or is he ~Pissin Himself~//
^^^Nice closer....

V/big bent.....but ima have to say some thing's frosty u need to up ur vocab an punchs an personals ur shit was played....big bent u had an ight verse but ur structure is gay.....~~//those shit dont mean shhit for real so dont do them an stop stretchin ur lines......get to the point shorter but ur multis are alright.....V/bigbent73

Acid
12-08-2005, 02:46 PM
Frosty:
Hey Bent it's time to hand you down your muthafuckin sentence
cause i lost my last fuckin match now you face the consiqences
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This was wack, don't ever put your own self down in a rhyme.. You said you lost your last match, shouldn't have said it. Didnt like this bar

So knuck if you buck and i'll do yo ass like spongebob
swiss cheese ya ass cause you tried to act like crime mob
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Again, pretty wack.. No personals, no punches and no multies, and you gotta direct it at him. In my eyes that was way off.

My flows got you sick sorta like a cancer patient
and the way things are looking i don't think you're gonna make it
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Better but still not great

You think you"re hard so now you're tryin to push me
But now you're bout to get fucked like a loose hoes pussy
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Yeah this was pretty good. I liked that, nice punch, quite funny
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So since you think you hot one thing before you write
it's hard for you to be that when frosty's AS COLD AS ICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was ok, better than most of your other bars in this verse
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What I say for you is, work on your structure a little bit more and try add nice multies and punches in there. Keep it up though.

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BigBent73:
Think you gonna beat Bent n ~Be Sick i Doubt Son~/
Cause yall can see Frosty even can ~Predict his own Outcome~//
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Really nice use of wordplay and a decent punch

You cant deal wit ma ~Flow Fam~ hammer cocked n ready to ~Go Blam~/
Fa real how u expect win any battle when u named after a ~Snowman~//
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Hahaha again I liked... Nice punch and personal

Lyrical punches leaves him ~Blue in the Face~ Rapworlds!! he not ~True to this Place~/
He in a crew called Bullshit Terrorists? Fuck that ya whole ~Crew is jus Gays~//
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It was quite good, nice multies

No way youll leave me ~Flustered n Shook G~ ya a virgin to battlin so im ~Bustin his Nookie~/
How u expect to beat a Vet in the Game jus look at ya name, he even knows that he's ~Justa Rookie~//
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Good shit

Look at ya rhymes!! HaHa, ya really ~Dissin Yaself~ Frosty only known when ~Christmas is Felt~/
Bent comin at you wit the Heat!! i dont know if Frosty is meltin or is he ~Pissin Himself~//
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Nice closer, decent
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You have a decent style... You outshined Frosty in my opinion.

Vote=BigBent

.Inphinite.
12-08-2005, 02:52 PM
Frosty - Basic verse... nothing very creative or hard hitting... and some good stuff could have been come up with his name because it's not the best in the world. LoL. Anyway, nothing too technical with your verse, no multies or rhyme scheme.

Bent - Decent verse... You seem to have the basics sorted, you just need to elevate now. eg: add more multies to ya verse... something like an inner rhyme scheme. You've got decent ideas for punches, but I think they'd be a lil better if you sorted ya syntax and line structure out..


Overall - clear winner - Big Bent