View Full Version : LW- .xcluusive. vs Acid (3-0 KO)


Vokals
12-06-2005, 01:17 AM
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G'luck

Esinem
12-06-2005, 01:20 PM
checkin in..

Acid
12-06-2005, 08:20 PM
In....

Esinem
12-06-2005, 10:53 PM
the only "sick" shit you spit, is that shit from ya clit
what ya talkin bout bitch? ya punches not goin hit

lay off the "acid", quit thinkin ya fuckin spit "venom"
a chick? naw, your a tomboy, dressed in the denim

a stupid useless bitch, go and put ya self to use
suck some more dick, and once again get abused

you most likely got tossed around, no wait a sec-bitch..
yous an ugly ass ho, and your ass is prolli anerexic..

keepin ya mouth open, bitch ya mouth fulla cock..
my rhymes are customized, while yours stay stock..


[ionno why i wrote all that, it was very simple, shitty, and no punches were in there, but whatever, uppin on Acids Verse.. pZ]





Edit: Extra bar taken out.

Esinem
12-06-2005, 10:55 PM
and by the way, if you want the lines to be explained or something, tell me, becuase from what i see [ive looked it over] it seems like the punches and shit are pretty obvious.. so, if you want the explanantions, PM me before you vote and ill tell you the explanations.

So, if you dont get it and you are too lazy to PM me.. dont vote!

Acid
12-08-2005, 02:22 PM
Haha your rhyme was shooked, you can tell your just a pansy ass rook //
Where was the hook? No personals ect.. read back on it, look! //

Your 15, you need a magrophine glass to take a fucking piss //
When you was born... Are you sure your mumma even knew you exist? //

Get the fuck off my pussy cause it's the only one you'll ever see //
One sip on a beer would make you tipsy, I'm the girl that you could never be //

Yes you are a girl, your a fanny ass bitch thinking you own this shit //
Lmao, your a girl because you don't know shit and you ain't never seen your dick //

It's so small the belend can be my clit, or hell even my fucking baby fingernail //
You already know who I am, you think I'm fit, your just ashamed to be a fucking male //

Votes, votes, votes please people;)...

PM me for explanations.





Edit: Extra bar taken out.

BIGBENT73
12-08-2005, 09:34 PM
Punches/personals- Xclusive
Wordplay- Acid
Flow- Xclusive
Creativity- Acid

Vote- Xclusive

Reason: This Was A Pretty Simple Battle Pretty Evenly Matched But I Was Feelin X's Punches/personals More Than Acid's & The Punches Is What Wins Battle. I Think Acid's Punched Couldve Came Off As Nice Or Even Nicer If They Were Maybe Worded Differently.

Good Luck!!!

2Flawless
12-08-2005, 11:11 PM
xcluusive...

punches/personals:2.0/5
wordplay:1.0/5
Flow:3.0/5
Creativity:1.0/5

Total:7.0/20

Acid

punches/personals:1.0/5
wordplay:2.0/5
flow:2.0/5
Creativity:1.0/5

Total:6.0/20


Vote=xcluusive

Esinem
12-08-2005, 11:27 PM
xcluusive...

punches/personals:2.0/5
wordplay:1.0/5
Flow:3.0/5
Creativity:1.0/5

Total:7.0/20

Acid

punches/personals:1.0/5
wordplay:2.0/5
flow:2.0/5
Creativity:1.0/5

Total:6.0/20


Vote=xcluusive

Musta been weak as fuck.. Lol..

2 - 0 in my Favor =D

uppin for votes, and please no freeposting or no 1 line votes..

Kronologik
12-09-2005, 08:34 AM
Punches - xcluusive
Personals - xcluusive
Flow - xcluusive
Creativity - Acid
Wordplay - xcluusive
Multis - Tie
Enjoyment - Tie

Explanation: Both verses were pretty simple, nothing that really stood out as being mad creative or different. Acid had far too many simple disses like 'your mumma', 'your wack', 'your dick' etc. which just didnt cut it. Xcluusive was similar, but edged it in terms of wordplay and personals. The punches weren't really hard hitting or creative, but they were worded better and delivered better than Acid.

Vote = Xcluusive

.Inphinite.
12-09-2005, 10:44 AM
Voting stands at 2-0. Flawless' vote does not count because it is not enough. Some summary comment needs to be made or references to the verse.

Specifically, scorecards without a rationale WILL NOT BE ACCEPTED.

Ezekiel
12-10-2005, 07:49 PM
Punches - xcluusive
Personals - xcluusive
Flow - xcluusive
Creativity - Acid
Wordplay - xcluusive
Multis - Tie
Enjoyment - -

Vote: Xcluusive

Reason: Well...came harder i guess....both need to grasp the idea of punchlines...not enough creativity or hard hitting lines but xcluusive came with at least some decent battle structure...pz