View Full Version : Maniak VS pac6293


Maniak
03-13-2003, 08:23 PM
RULES:


- 5 Votes wins
- 4 Vote KO
- No crew votes, bullshit
- 5-10 Bars

sTreet kIng
03-13-2003, 08:25 PM
ur battling again already before our shit is over?

Maniak
03-13-2003, 08:27 PM
<--- battle fiend

Maniak
03-13-2003, 08:48 PM
5 bars....

They call you "Pac" Cuz in battles you "Shed-so-many-Tears"-
Your Weak Son, Your already Dead,-Know-Any-Peers?//
Cuz your a hoe "Pac", ever "Wonder why they call-ya-Bitch"-
I'll Maul-your-diss, Read this Thats What stalls-Ya-spit//
I'm here to Fix you Like a mut Slut, Cuz I am your Owner-
Your flow can't Function on It's own, Need a Donor//
Flow or No Show, Optional Cuz Victory is Impossible-
Your spits Are like Lil Flip, The shit is Uncoppable//
Pac 6-2-9-3, I'll Stick-you-Blindly Cuz Your a Baby-
What you Lazy?, Your raps are halfass Like Jay-Z//

Maniak
03-15-2003, 03:40 PM
uppin for Pac's verse

pac6293
03-18-2003, 10:25 PM
i'll trow ur rap away like i was spendin cash.i'll beat ur ass like i fucked ur mom in the ass.// ur flows r weak they can't hold me back. shit it's like i'm on crack but my flows keep comin back.i bet while i'm spittin back at u ur sittin there wit a dumbass stare cuz fuck dis i'm from da hood we don't care i'll bury u 2 and u want even no wat 2 do cuz i represent w.v. and my fuckin city// plus ur gay ass rythmes were shity and u say i'm like jay-z but ur like eminem's daugter haley a lil girl that jus got played and u dont no wat 2 say// plus i always let ladies go 1st i hope ur pussy doent have a naked burst cuz my dick must hurt.//

pac6293
03-18-2003, 10:28 PM
lets see wat yall got 2 say

pac6293
03-19-2003, 11:51 PM
sum 1 fuckin vote

Raven
03-20-2003, 12:55 AM
Maniak

They call you "Pac" Cuz in battles you "Shed-so-many-Tears"-
Your Weak Son, Your already Dead,-Know-Any-Peers?//

Decent, nothin' spectacular. First was more of a punch than the second

Cuz your a hoe "Pac", ever "Wonder why they call-ya-Bitch"-
I'll Maul-your-diss, Read this Thats What stalls-Ya-spit//

Second line was good. But again nothin' spectacular

I'm here to Fix you Like a mut Slut, Cuz I am your Owner-
Your flow can't Function on It's own, Need a Donor//

This was the best punch of the verse.

Flow or No Show, Optional Cuz Victory is Impossible-
Your spits Are like Lil Flip, The shit is Uncoppable//

Again pretty good not great. You're pickin' up on your metaphors and wordplay

Pac 6-2-9-3, I'll Stick-you-Blindly Cuz Your a Baby-
What you Lazy?, Your raps are halfass Like Jay-Z//

You ended on a sour note. The Jay-z line wasn't as effective as you thought.

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Pac6293

i'll trow ur rap away like i was spendin cash.i'll beat ur ass like i fucked ur mom in the ass.//

Started off weakly and it wasn't much of a diss or a punch.

ur flows r weak they can't hold me back. shit it's like i'm on crack but my flows keep comin back.

Good flow but this isn't what battles are, you need punches and so far there aren't any.

plus i always let ladies go 1st i hope ur pussy doent have a naked burst cuz my dick must hurt.//

This was the closest you came to an actualy punch. First your flow was hard to read becuz of it's format. Second there were no punches at all. You only had "fuck you bitch, you sucked i fucked your mom" type of rhyme. In a battle you have to lyrically murder them.

Overall, neither did absolutely great, but I have to go with Maniak since he had more punches than pac6293

Vote=Maniak

Maniak
03-23-2003, 11:10 PM
Uppin... 1-0 Me

ChRoNiCaL
03-23-2003, 11:15 PM
maniak won because pac had no punches, wordplay, or disses... maniak had a couple... i dont feel like disecting
vote: MANIAK