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syn-drum 03-13-2003, 11:14 PM ight u know the deal 10 lines 10 punches.....
checkidy cheese.......:cool:
~pieces~
Heres punchlines for your punk ass.....dont cry girL.
This nigga SYN-THETIC want beef-thinkin he nice wit the mic-
Headcrack you like 4,5,6-leave you shakin-like you playin wit dice/
put you to shame in this fight-im to blame for your fright-
This kid just like blacklights-he isnt that bright/
make you learn wrong from right-eat you like you was pussy-
told you, you shouldnt push me-leave your brain a bit more mushy/
you the wackest nigga in your crew-but got the biggest mouth-
see nigga your FLOW IS UP AND DOWN-like a water spout/
i know what yall about-provin points you cant make-
you just like hair transplants-think about it.."REAL" fake/
you aint worth your weight in rhymes-i stay wit lines-
this kid is like shootin a clock-just "WASTING TIME"/
Told you before i got more lines-than old women before facelifts-
bitch just face it-your words are like water-very TASTELESS/
I drop more bars than TNT bringin down a fuckin prison-
You "DEF"-er than the #3 on your phone-you just wouldnt listen/
Son you a victim of JIZM-wanna make it a bet?-
you pop shit but wouldnt catch bodies with a firemans net/
Next time you open your mouth-better watch what comes out-
This nigga SYN-DRUM gets NO SHINE-like the sun wasnt out....
Punchlines.....you got em...you aint fuckin wit those....and those arent even my best...
but they was good enough to shut you up...bitch nigga...
syn-drum 03-13-2003, 11:45 PM r u ridicolously stupid.....10 lines dont mean 10 lines times 2 or ten lines plus another ten lines........it mean ten lines man lol but ight..........
are u fuckin stupid?...its nearly immpossible to write a ten line rhyme with just punchlines...the punchlines must follow something that brings you to them...thats 10 bars...whats wrong you cant think that much?....no fuckin excuses, you asked for it....fuckin pussy.....10 fuckin bars, with MORE than 10 punchlines........punk nigga
Fallin Asleep....waitin for this kids post....and he was beggin me like he was ready....idiot.
syn-drum 03-14-2003, 12:02 AM hahaha wow angry boi......ur funny but all of a sudden 10 bars ffrom ten lines k whatever.......
excuses, excuses...why the fuck you say you wanna battle me when you dont?....you fuckin suck, you should shut the fuck up from now on....since you SO NICE you should be able to post 10 bars without any problem....real mcees spit 16 bars like nothing u stupid fuck. YOU WACK AS FUCK....suck a dick...
syn-drum 03-14-2003, 01:04 AM this jizm kids winning streak stays-a-rumor...kus ima get IN ya HEAD like abrain-tumor //
just another lame-newbie...this battles on HIGH ground n u cant ELEVATE-to-it //
jizm??whos-he?? the whole MURDER UNIT is in the kiddie pool n u sayin ur crews-deep //
A proven geek...when ya style like 14 days.....2-week //...catch it
ya birth like a pig leg kus it shoulda been a-boar-shin //
ya limbs get torn-in...kus u dont quit unless its ur asshole kus four-fit //
whatta damn-faggot...only close to my ASS is when he behind me n my pants-saggin //
ur clans-the-wackest...out more HOLES in U than when WOLVERINE has his hands-in-napkins //
No movement u stayin-still...like kids that dont wanna go to school ur just playin-ill //
im sugar coat this like weed laced-wit-pills...Jizm pregnatin Buffalo just to make-some-BILLS //
U cant-rob-me-be-patient...kus ur nowhere near me but we can proly-be-neighbors //
one hit man ima make-it-hurt..U like the TASTE of Victory?? please taste-it-first //
ima dangerous-jerk ur illogical...love the irony kus i got ill-logic-though //
Only wordplay for u is perverted english teachers...but ur still soft-like-dough //
Ima lyrically terrorist...already have the magic lamp kus syn's already Been-Alladin (bin laden)
fuck lebron james syns-a-draft-pick...with girls jizm told to get bent like tins and plastics //
Jizm is never hard like a dead-girls-nipples //
i told em to match my bars..so he grabbed redbirds-n-snickers // redbirds r matches
u aint gangsta commiting the fakest-crimes..cant still explosives kid u aint taken-mines //
im sendin flagrant-vibes...im say hello to THEADORE kus this is a Hey-Ted rhyme // hated
.......right right.........right right........~pieces~....
alot of played lines.......but not bad...your flow sucks tho....."right right"......
oh yeah and keep bitin them CAGE lines....lol..what you thought i wouldnt notice......JIZM=TRUE HIPHOPPER.........."ultraviolence"..."right right"...."kiddies"...all bitten from CAGE....who bit his lines from a movie by stanley kubrik called A CLOCKWORK ORANGE....FUCKIN BITER!!!!LOLOLOL
hey yall we got a biter named SYN-DRUM here!...lol
J.Griff 03-14-2003, 01:49 AM SYN had a couple good jabs in thier hidden somewhere. I couldnt catch the flow and im for sure what ever it was it was switchin. Overall not a BAD drop but deff could have been better.
JIZM{lol} flow was onpiont and sayed steady through out the verse mostley average punches but a couple of hard ones. Overall a good drop.
vote JIZM
thanks for the vote good explanation and all but you got less than 30 posts kid.1
EvydencE 03-14-2003, 02:23 AM ahha ... syn beat you...
jizm's punches was weak.. a couple ( bout 2 )were iight .. wordplay was weak ..
syn .. ive seen u come harder .. but nice punches .. wordplay was iight ...
Vote = Syndrum ..
and jizm .. how did syn bite cage ? .. cuz he said "right right " or "kiddies" or "ultraviolence" ?? ...
wat he cany say them words .. iight i said "the" .. now you cant say that ... ahahhaa
and why u always mad?? .. "fuckin pussy " " fuckin 10 bars faggot" "jus shuthe fuck up and drop 10 pussy" .. whats wrong dogg..? .. you need a hugg man ?? ... lmao
relax man .. 1
yo asshole u should listen to directions...you cant vote yall are in the same crew....and yeah ya man is weak if he got to bite niggas....lololol....your squad is dumb gay yo....youll never get props in here....and you wack as fuck...you say i got no wordplay?..punchlines were just OK?...nigga find something else to do cause u dont know shit about hiphop/rap...pussy nigga
i thought it was a dope battle - aint got time to vote- sorry, but i'll drop some analysis later.
J.Griff 03-14-2003, 12:45 PM copy n paste with over 30 post now :rolleyes:
SYN had a couple good jabs in thier hidden somewhere. I couldnt catch the flow and im for sure what ever it was it was switchin. Overall not a BAD drop but deff could have been better.
JIZM{lol} flow was onpiont and sayed steady through out the verse mostley average punches but a couple of hard ones. Overall a good drop.
vote JIZM
goodlookin on the vote ill....1
syn-drum 03-14-2003, 04:51 PM haha yo i am influenced by cage....but alright biter?? its all my rhymes so whatever man......plus i met the dude :)
yo ill-icyt voted twice.....y.....plus i stated it was battle judged on punches so if his flow was nicer than wow.......but ok....
whatever.........its either 1-1 or 0-0.......lets not talk anymore unless its an up or a vote........haha not enough voting here
~pieces~
syn-drum 03-14-2003, 08:25 PM 1-0 my bad,,,,,still fuckin uppin though
J.Griff 03-14-2003, 09:19 PM Originally posted by syn-drum
haha yo i am influenced by cage....but alright biter?? its all my rhymes so whatever man......plus i met the dude :)
yo ill-icyt voted twice.....y.....plus i stated it was battle judged on punches so if his flow was nicer than wow.......but ok....
whatever.........its either 1-1 or 0-0.......lets not talk anymore unless its an up or a vote........haha not enough voting here
~pieces~
I voted twice cause the first didnt count due the fact i didnt have 30 post yet.
And if you read my explanation
{as i always leave good and clear ones} you would see that i DID say his punches were more consistant and had a couple of hard ones. While i found yours to be average and less then.
please return the favor
this nigga think he hot cause he met CAGE...lol...who hasnt?...i know all them niggas....my man louis logic is an underground mcee.....i used to get in cyphers wit mad underground mcees...like a.l. skills, ill bill, necro...u name it........fuckin punk......just cause yur influenced by someone dont make it right for you to bite his lines....lolololol......herB.
YungKSlantz 03-14-2003, 10:04 PM Sin.......... i waz tryin to picture the flow, and it came out choppy, dogg you at it hard, but the emphasis on words and these() wouldnt work cuz you cant stop in the middle of a round to explain what "redbirds" are when you go audio, nice lines though
JIZM...... damn, you is a fuckin evil ass ill and all, you flow rolled off the tounge like butter, on point, you gave it too him, the old womens face lift line was very hurtful
vote goes to....... JIZM
Man, Im sorry for not votin but those verses WERE VERY CLOSE. Ya'll kinda even wit the talent, If ya'll battle again, I think the better talent will show
Lyrical~Prince 03-14-2003, 10:56 PM HUMMMM..... *no commet* i'm crew
Down Syndrome 03-14-2003, 11:05 PM vote=syndrum iller wordplay ad punches
A proven geek...when ya style like 14 days.....2-week //...catch it
straight ill, nice wordplay and punch.
What the....you like his dick or somethin?? "Syn-drum" to "Down Syndrome" Or is just a coincidence??
Oh and you gotta explain ya vote betta than that
he cant vote anyway, he aint got more than 30 posts.
oh word?? I didn't even know that was a rule. This board needa have a "RULES" thread postin that you need 30 posts or more
nah you can make your own rules in battle...1
syn-drum 03-15-2003, 01:35 PM "this nigga think he hot cause he met CAGE...lol...who hasnt?...i know all them niggas....my man louis logic is an underground mcee.....i used to get in cyphers wit mad underground mcees...like a.l. skills, ill bill, necro...u name it........fuckin punk......just cause yur influenced by someone dont make it right for you to bite his lines....lolololol......herB" posted by jizm
haha now man......i never said i was hot kus i liked cage...n cool for u u met cage too but since his my most selected emcee of course i was glad to meet em.......nii never bit a rhyme so i aint a biter lol.......
ive met necro n ill bill also...aswell as dj eclipse.....LOL......n bein suspect kus a dude votes for me an has kinda the same name.......cmon man haha
2-1 for jizm........kus that one dude had less that thirt posts than came back n voted when he had more........like tis dude can do the same......
~pieces~
u mean 2-0 JIZM.....cause the niggas who voted for u dont qualify under the rules...stupid...1 more and you toast.
sTreet kIng 03-15-2003, 05:43 PM JIZM
you aint worth your weight in rhymes-i stay wit lines-
this kid is like shootin a clock-just "WASTING TIME"/
^^Good word play
I drop more bars than TNT bringin down a fuckin prison-
You "DEF"-er than the #3 on your phone-you just wouldnt listen/
^^One of the battles tightest points
Next time you open your mouth-better watch what comes out-
This nigga SYN-DRUM gets NO SHINE-like the sun wasnt out....
^^Ok finish
Good wordplay but some punches were weak. Overall... not the best ive seen from him, but still good.
Syn-Drum
jizm??whos-he?? the whole MURDER UNIT is in the kiddie pool n u sayin ur crews-deep //
A proven geek...when ya style like 14 days.....2-week //...catch it
^^Hot
Jizm is never hard like a dead-girls-nipples //
i told em to match my bars..so he grabbed redbirds-n-snickers // redbirds r matches
^^Tight wordplay
No movement u stayin-still...like kids that dont wanna go to school ur just playin-ill //
im sugar coat this like weed laced-wit-pills...Jizm pregnatin Buffalo just to make-some-BILLS //
^^Funny shit
Definitely came strong wit tha punches, but flow could have been better. Wordplay was ok.
VOTE: Syn-Drum
sTreet kIng 03-15-2003, 05:44 PM there i gave a fuckin analisys...
hahahha...^ he cant be serious..
see i was just gon let your stupid vote ride and not say anything....but see i know u dont like me cause id eat you..so u voted for SYN-THETIC...because a couple of his punches being hot aint fuckin wit my punches,wordplay AND flow....because i notice you said he was a bit weak in those 2 areas....so its a DR vote but ill let it ride.....
sTreet kIng 03-15-2003, 05:49 PM wut tha hell u got beef wit me or sumthin..
fuck everytime i talk u gotta start bitchin
first off...nah i aint got "BEEF" wit you....im too old to be beatin the hell out of youngins...second nah....i ust know from our first "problem" that u still hatin...but its all good...im lettin your vote count so u can feel important...3rd and last, nigga change your name you aint no street king...youd get your shit twisted where im at poppin that bullshit...other than that, i got no problem wit you....dont even speak to me....1
sTreet kIng 03-15-2003, 05:55 PM shit i aint hatin on u... but u just get butt hurt whenever i post. shit where u from? nobody wants to hear that bull shit fuckin internet gangsta. dont even bother replying cuz u know im tellin tha truth...
i reside in the southside of queens my nigga....but you can holla at me when i hustle on 196th and marion in the bronx.......but other than that...i aint got shit to say to u....1 yourself.
I think the rhymes are both as good as each other- can't be bothered to give reasons why. It's good to see someone who can actually give it to JIZM like the way he gives it out.
Archaic 03-15-2003, 08:29 PM -----------------------------------^^-----------------------------------dead
yo divine, why do u bother posting if your gonna post that?
Archaic 03-15-2003, 10:12 PM Headcrack you like 4,5,6-leave you shakin-like you playin wit dice/
put you to shame in this fight-im to blame for your fright-
This kid just like blacklights-he isnt that bright/
make you learn wrong from right-eat you like you was pussy-
see nigga your FLOW IS UP AND DOWN-like a water sprout /
this kid is like shootin a clock-just "WASTING TIME"/
Told you before i got more lines-than old women before facelifts-
I drop more bars than TNT bringin down a fuckin prison-
you pop shit but wouldnt catch bodies with a firemans net/
This nigga SYN-DRUM gets NO SHINE-like the sun wasnt out
these were the only puches that counted but they were enough...the other kid is prolly the best of the crew i've seen so far...nice kid but your punches weren't that hard...
JIZM=1
goodlookin out divine......up 3-1
syn-drum 03-15-2003, 10:45 PM werd finally some resolve haha.......u know the score vote peoples......dizamn.......
~pieces~
I'm sure my vote won't count since I'm crew and kids think they get prizes if they win but....
JIZM- Mad nice! I liked your punches, and flow, and multi's. I really can't find anything wrong with this verse. One of your better verses..
Syn- You asin't wack at all, but you have almost no flow in some of your lines, and I feel thats your biggest weakness.. You know what I'm talking about, lines are waaaaay too long in places. And a few of your punches were senseless.. The 1days tw0 weak line was hot though, props to ya, but JIZM got you pretty good in this one. NO BEEF!!! And Jizz, don't sweat these kids and their bullshit votes ie;evi-dense. You know and anyone with skills knows. Let em flap till they get cottonmouth.
word, goodlookin out tyke...i hit u wit a PM...1
Legacy 03-17-2003, 09:45 PM jizm if u so fuckin hard in tha street's why u on the computer so much...talkin about internet gangster's us tha fuckin internet thug go hit tha streets.. real gangsters like u shouldnt b on the computer
shut up bitch...the reason i got a computer is cause i made myself enough money to get it and run it.....the fuck you talkin about?...you mean to tell me that a nigga wholl pop one in your cap cant have a computer?...stupid fuck...i must be on oyur mind alot cause i havent said anything to you in days and you come out your face like this and out of nowhere...eat a dick ya lil bitch made nigga....
Legacy 03-17-2003, 10:09 PM dont gimme ur fuckin sob story cuz i dont fuckin care..u aint never shot no 1 an never will...if u a real gangster then be out on tha fuckin streets...fuckin fake thug
well you obviously dont know me or what the fuck i did....and if u dont wanna hear it, then why you come out of nowhere poppin shit? i must be on your mind...fuckin pussy....come see me in NY if u dont think ill pop your cap....bitch nigga.
matter of fact, where in NY u at kid?..lets get it on.....no excuses, u a tough kid...wit a big mouth, now back your mouth up...bitch nigga
Legacy 03-17-2003, 10:48 PM u a real gangsta then find my resume u dont need no 1 to tell u
lol you shook..now shut up...if u was tough you would have no problem tellin me where u at...cause you wouldnt be worried right?...fuckin bitch....shut up
Legacy 03-17-2003, 10:51 PM when u show up at my doorstep then u a gangsta.. till then holla at my dick
why you keep tellin niggas to holla at your dick?...you gay?....dont say anyhing else to me, your shook..all you are is mouth...faggot nigga....1 yourseLf.
Legacy 03-17-2003, 10:54 PM come 2 troy an holla at me
LOLOLOL!!! nigga said TROY NY!....nigga, shut your bitch ass up...what kinda problems u face up there? a bear broke into your refridgerator?...lol a deer in your yard eatin up the greens?...ROTFL!.....:rolleyes:
Legacy 03-17-2003, 11:03 PM aight dont come cuz u fake
Legacy 03-17-2003, 11:04 PM u want me then get ya bitch ass up here
oh ill be makin my way up to rochester soon...so believe me when i do, ill make sure to meet you someplace, bring your ENTIRE crew too....ill prolly be with 1 other person....
Legacy 03-17-2003, 11:08 PM lol aight if u want it like that
yes i do....bring em ALL....now stop suckin my dick...i got no more to say.....1
Legacy 03-17-2003, 11:12 PM lol aight
Originally posted by JIZM
LOLOLOL!!! nigga said TROY NY!....nigga, shut your bitch ass up...what kinda problems u face up there? a bear broke into your refridgerator?...lol a deer in your yard eatin up the greens?...ROTFL!.....:rolleyes:
JESUS CHRIST!!!!! JIZM almost made me shit myself!! That was the funniest shit I've ever read here! Shut up legacy, he's making you look like a faggot with his dick tucked.
Legacy 03-17-2003, 11:30 PM obviously if u dumb fucks new shit about anything ud kno there aint no fuckin bears in troy i didnt say i lived in the fuckin mountains troy is next ta fuckin albany ya stupid fuck tyke suck a dick other then jizm's
lol@this thread - you got bears? shit.........
Lyrical~Prince 03-22-2003, 01:42 PM ROTFLMMFAO HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAA ^^^ Funniest kid on the site... lmfao
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