wassup

i got sum new tracks up
www.soundclick.com/lilsmith

check em out
tell me wat u think
dnt tell me how much i suck
tell me how i can improve

enjoy

LS

if i give u a fiver will u fuck off?

Wtf!

y ya say dat man
gimme sum constuctive critisism
nt jus tellin me 2 fuk off

LS

lol id listen but ma sounds fucked up on ma pc so i just assumed it was wack but im sure somone else show wot its really like

Yeh, he's wack

Not bad for a 16 year old, listened to "Remember" and started listening to "You about to get your ass kicked" but turned it off cos of the yank accent.

Remember had a good point to it, good to see you're off the American accent bullshit now. There wasn't much in the way of creative lyricism and the flow and multis weren't breakin any boundaries but it was pretty tight for some "set the record straight" type shit. Delivery wasn't bad but it don't seem like you've got it nailed 100% yet. Time's on your side though keep practicin and improvin.

Drop stuff like this in the audio section next time though, feed other peoples tracks and you'll get better constructive feedback on your own

all the uk ppl sound exactly the same..ya aint that bad man.. biggas just gayer then local rainbows...your not bad at all really