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Topic:
What If Jesus Really Was The Devil?... that is your topic write it as you will.

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{Behold The Setting And Foundation Of This Story}

Damien is attending church with his grandmother, who is a very religious Christian, in an all African American church. They sit down in their seats, and Damien has a very ignorant look on his face. He has just been released from Winterwood Juvenile Detention Facility two weeks prior to this, and hasen’t said much of anything lately. After all the arguing with his mom, he decided to give into her decision. Her decision was for him to attend church to hopefully get guided on the right track. So there Damien sits, tired, and mad at the world. Suddenly, the pastor takes the stage, and he begins to speak.

Clears throat...

Damien’s heart beating rapidly...

Damien looks up to listen to his elder...

Good morning everyone, we had left on the difference between heaven and hell, and the temptations of the devil, let me pick up where we left off...

Heaven seems mellow, and the angels always flying-in-a-distance...
And the good word is well, but Hade’s is tryin-with-resistance...
People always dying-in-an-instance, I say this is the act-of-a-fool...
So if you make wrong, take a step back, and step back-up-with-two...
Keep track-of-your-cool, cause there’s times in when God-is-foul...
So with two Devil’s in your presence, sinning is your option-now...
Stop-and-frown, you need to get away from the spirit-of-religion...






There may come these times where, you don’t hear-it-as-a-christian...
But in clearing-you-can-listen, Cause even Jesus has to turn-to-hell...
And when he gets hot, believe you me, the flames will burn-him-well...
Learn-then-tell, spread the word, cause even Jesus will sin-to-make-it...
Leave you beatin out, wondering hopeless, and then grinning-naked...
And even in-the-fakeness, Lucifer laughs on and takes the lords-shape,
But your still blinded by what’s ahead, and then you ingnore-fate...
But for lords-sake, even when this happens you must learn-the-tricks...
Cause if Jesus becomes one with the devil, he would burn-for-kicks...
Turn-the-mix, keep the cards in your favor, and head-to-the-light...
Or live that street life, and become a bum,eyein a bed-for-the-night...

Damien is feeling hurt by listening, but he listens on and keeps everything said in his head when he leaves. That night Damien is reading XXL and searching the net for pictures of Jessica Alba. He opens his desk drawer and throws his notebook inside it. He notices his twenty-two in the corner, with the saftey off. He pulls it out and looks at it. He tosses it back into the drawer
thinking nothing of it, and the gun fires as it hits the inside of the drawer. The shot fired pierces Damien’s head. He falls to the ground and begins to fade. His mother startled by the whole thing
runs into his room. His carpet is stained with blood, and Damien is laid out on his carpet with his back against the floor She begins screaming and phones the medics as Damien blacks out.




{Drifting into Dreams Of Heaven And Hell}

Can you see it...?

Do you understand it...?

Damien my son, meet god, and welcome to heaven.

Damien lands in heaven, and an angel named Gabriel is standing there to guide him forward.

Follow me Damien, and you will see the power-of-heaven...
Look toward the black roses, and I see no flowers-to-mention...
A downing-dimension, and now you will find the truth-beyond...
Look to the rotten apples, sitting below the tree the fruits-be-on...
The snakes slither, but these aren’t what you call the garden-type...
Jesus likes goons to fight for their food, chew, scratch, bark-n-bite...
You need the heart-to-fight, because even now god can’t save-ya...
The devil infected Jesus soul, he was then dawned-the-savior...
Spawned-to-hate-ya, he overthrew God and demolished-the-sky...
Clipped the angels wings back, and gave them no options-to-fly...
Those who do-not-give-their-pride, answer to the law-of-Jesus...
Turned heaven to a blood bath, and many victims fall-allegiance...
Still hell crawls-beneath-this, Christ’s real soul-trapt-in-flames...
Now Jesus, got us tearing each other apart with scraped-remains...
Action-reigns, He appointed his minions from the depth-of-hell...
Opposers fought for it, but through the battle Jesus kept-it-well...
Blessed-to-tell, now I know your question is why-are-you-here???
We the resistance of angels, think you can rid skies-of-the-fear...
And help us to minus tears, for through these kingdom-ruins...
There’s still light through the dark, we’re just in need-of-proven...
So now you must choose, will you take on the task-at-hand...
Or will you die in your bedroom tonight, being half-a-man..

{From A Lost Ruffen, To A Follower With A Cause}

Damien thinks about his decision, and decides to help. He travels through the depths of the ruins
of heaven, and searches aimlessly for the gates to hell that Jesus has set up, in order to link the two realms. As he marches on with Gabriel the angel who once sent word to birth Jesus, and is now the main opponent to stop him. The devil has Jesus true soul in the chamber of hell, and will
not release it. So they walk together in search of hell, and Jesus lost soul. Inside heaven, they see scattered rubble of the once beautiful kingdom, and dozens of rats and snakes patrolling the ground. The air smells of smoke and burnt skin. The sky is lit by the flames in the darkened
background, But they still march on.

...MEANWHILE...

Damien had been rushed to the hospital on an emergency, and is now sitting in a coma. His mom is holding his hand while he’s laid on the all white stretcher, and she can feel the heat coming from Damien as she holds his hand. She then kisses Damien’s lips and says “I Love You Son” as she prays to Jesus for her sons awakening from his coma.

To Be Continued...

dunno why the dialouge came out like that... but it's w/e

In the beginning was the word and the word was God......

Dear Followers:

“In Jesus name” you praise in vain...
Don’t you find it funny Im only mentioned in pain
You cry, ask God to fill you with the blood of the lamb
Read books written by man, and your feeble minds still don’t understand
Born the son of Mary, came from a woman’s womb
and Im Gods son right? Thats what you was taught to assume
My father is Joseph you fucks cant be that retarded
Turned on my followers, when John was imprisoned to Galilee I departed
I fed your ancestors broke bread, made them drink of my blood
Just as I feed you now, infect you with habits, lead you to lives of drugs
Turned water to wine, are you blind to see what I started
First you asked for fish now money and tricks regardless I brought it
Check Matthew 17:17 I clearly stated how long shall I suffer you?
19:14 told the children to suffer too and you still keep faith with no clue
At birth I whispered a secret to every one of you, feel the indent over your lip
Thats where I place my finger and told you to shhh’ of course you’d forget
And whats sick is your all are children of incest recall - one Adam one Eve
God fucked up and his only way out was to come pleading to me
Indeed the bible stated one day I’ll return so here I am in terms of blatant
Ha the son of God’ now you know who to thank
Love, Satan



sorry Im not in to stretching out the vs. with explinations and dialogs

~Love

true... nice shit

On Topic: tie
Depth: white
Imagery: white
Originality: tie
Flow:white (wizza was off and on, white's consistent)
Multis:white
Enjoyment: white
Vocab: white

Overall: white

ya, it just didn't seem like wizza put much effort into it....only used about half the lines available, you shaulda used the lines and made a storyline n shit, i just couldn't feel it....white's was really good tho, kept me interested throughout the whole thing, maybe a lil too much dialogue going on, but still, the verse was nice....

vote - white

On Topic: Tie - yall both did the topic
Depth: Tie - considering what yall dropped, i thought yall both were descriptive; yall just did it differently
Imagery: Whiteowl - He just created a scene for the story while snowizza couldn't cuz her's really didn't need a scene
Originality: Whiteowl - His was just more original to me
Flow: Whiteowl - Snowizza had some stretched lines to me but Whitowl didn't from my point of view
Multis: Whiteowl - his were more consistent pretty much throughout the verse
Enjoyment: Tie - I liked Whiteowl's story and I liked the content of Snowizza's verse
Vocab: Tie - yall know what it is

Overall: Whiteowl - I had to go with Whiteowl cuz his told a better story. He was more original and had more multies too. Snowizza's verse was kinda funny specially after I checked those references from my new bible which i got for free today (yah!). she made it seem like jesus really could be the devil. whiteowl just came too hard with his verse though.

On Topic: Tie - Can't fault either, vague topic imo
Depth: White - He took this with slightly better wording, better vocabulary, and superior imagery...although he sometimes got a few syllables off beat...
Imagery: Whiteowl - Snowizza was kind of bland in this department...
Originality: Whiteowl - Great twist, wizza's was alot more expected...ending was sick on whiteowl's...nasty twist lol
Flow: Whiteowl - He had more consistent bars, wizza's structure threw it off
Multis: Whiteowl - Lots of multis in his shit, wizza didn't really have any lmao
Enjoyment: White - Alot more creativity to the verse, and the multies didn't taje away from it either...
Vocab: White - Almost a tie here, but white got it with a few more complex words and better wording in his rhyme scheme

Vote - whiteowl

Rationale = Whiteowl's verse overpowered wizzas with better content and flow...I could tell this really wasn't even close to wizza's best, kind of dissapointing to read it oh well

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On Topic: tie, a topic so broad is VERY HARD to go off on
Depth: Tie both were solid with wizza dropping the bible verses in it
Imagery: Whiteowl
Originality: tie
Flow: Whiteowl - Snowizza the lines had different lengths
Multis: Whiteowl - consistant
Enjoyment: Tie - both had different things i liked
Vocab: White

overall- White

good looks on the voting...

Good battle wizza

On Topic: Tie
Depth: Dubz
Imagery: Dubz
Originality: Tie
Flow: Dubz, Wizza's flow fell off near the end
Multis: Dubz
Enjoyment: Dubz, Enjoyed the story more
Vocab: Dubz

Vote: Whiteowl

Reason: Just felt White's story/approach...had better lyricism ect...was dissapointed with wizza's...seemed really half assed imo...ne who...1 sided in my eyes

overall- White
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