5 bars
2 rounds
i know
throw yo shit down

in da

in da house

five alive will take your life// no matter how hard you try or how much strife
im always pimpin you can find me in da red light district or sneaking round five alives crib with da biscuit

dis biscuit aint da type you eat, its the one that will make you move your feet to the wielder's beat
and i want you to dance to pretty ricky cause chicken bitch and i dont show no pitty or you switch ur style an do it diddy,

da harlem shake you still a bitch what kinda difference it make
i be pitching da weight soon ill own an estate, whats left for fate smoking

something thats baked, and yes its baked by me no it aint no pastry
You always on da corner b you my number one fiend

when im blazing that green you chasing C(crack) wid B(brown)
you cant even ride a moped you failed your cbt(cetificate of basic training)

im five alive bitches drink me more than ice tea or nesquick//
i elevate with every battle these skills i possess sick//
hey yo so low u apit and i win quid pro quo//*
its cuz u can't rap u is slower than a mensrual flow//
im da shit im stacked bigger then a double big mac//
no one knows what ur spits about cuz ur shits wack//
five alives smoother than mothafuckin velvet//
gettin every female u know hot in da pelvis//
even when i snort crack and do brown i still think ur fuckin rap sux//
supreme green? no dis fiend took a shit in a bag sold it to ya fo ten bux//
*(noun: something for something; that which a party receives (or is promised) in return for something he does or gives or promises )

hey yo so low u apit and i win quid pro quo//*
apit:spit

ait lets go wit da votes

Both of you need links.

"im da shit im stacked bigger then a double big mac//"Qote

im not concerned with how ur penis is portioned/ dat silly bitch u call mum wish she had an abortion/ theres nothing funny abot ur rhymes except where

you said crack was snorted/ how the fuck you sniff rock/ i think you getting extorted/ you see how im a don, i sold him sugar he brought it

and the faggot done got high/ the brown was also coffeye(coffee)
you gotta gimmie my props i,/ hustled him in every sence

now this cat here is trying to diss back with rhymes like 50 cent
all ya lines are freeking dense,/dat means they dont float home boy they

sinking striaght to the bottom,/ your unknowed to me, the same 50's unknow in da streets of nyc cause da apple is rotton

got my new links

^You're not suppose to put them in your sig!

Do what you did but just post them in the actual thread, so in your other battles you can have newer links.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=62359&page=3

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=62310&page=5

i toke blunts fatter than yo mothafucken neck//
i'm gonna murk u so bad u'll need a disablility check//
u from london dawg? this is your sip of bad tea//
come on to my turf u'll be screamin like a banshee//
ur broken beyond repair, quit tryin to find out what to wear//
im betta than u its all fair, u'll need 17,000 nurses thanks to tony blare//
yo its five alive there ya go u murked//
omg iss five alive feel alive u jusss jerked//
i spit faster dan da speed of light, im a rhymin machine//
u know fives gonna rule da earth i got mo bling den da queen//
peaaaace
vote up bitches

Five Alive post your links.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=61664
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=61910

upping 4 votes

i dont even think i can vote...i cant put such wackness into words.


if anything this is a tie.

there is no punches. no wordplay. no anything.

is there a....lil bitch in our thread?
i think so
u wanna battle than son?

I Agree With Infared...

But Heres The Breakdown Without Bar-Bar Breakdown

Punches : So Low
Personals : Barely Any, But So Low
Enjoyment : So Low
Flow : Five Alive
Overall : So Low

Tips : Both : Elevate.

openerlow
complexity...
Punches : So Low
Personals : Barely Any, But So Low
Enjoyment : ...
Flow : Five Alive
closer flo
Overall : So Low weak ass battle

Tips : Both : Elevate.

Intro- Five
Punches- so_low
Personals- so_low
Metas/Similes- so_low
Multies- Five
Flow- so_low
Creativity- so_low
Outro- so_low

Overall- so_low on this one guys, good battle tho.

Overall: So_Low wins it i believe but good battle

fives flow:
im five alive bitches drink me more than ice tea or nesquick//
i elevate with every battle these skills i possess sick//
wtf .......na man that was stupid

hey yo so low u apit and i win quid pro quo//*
its cuz u can't rap u is slower than a mensrual flow//
u shouldeve edit it and menstral flow's are only a week thatz fast kid..what are you talking about
im da shit im stacked bigger then a double big mac//
no one knows what ur spits about cuz ur shits wack//
cmon kid...ur tripp'n ...im done wit ya flow
so low flow:
im not concerned with how ur penis is portioned/ dat silly bitch u call mum wish she had an abortion/ theres nothing funny abot ur rhymes except where not that dope....

you said crack was snorted/ how the fuck you sniff rock/ i think you getting extorted/ you see how im a don, i sold him sugar he brought it
wack
and the faggot done got high/ the brown was also coffeye(coffee)
you gotta gimmie my props i,/ hustled him in every sence
who cares..battle the kid
now this cat here is trying to diss back with rhymes like 50 cent
all ya lines are freeking dense,/dat means they dont float home boy they
ya structure throws me u should end with a rhyme
sinking striaght to the bottom,/ your unknowed to me, the same 50's unknow in da streets of nyc cause da apple is rotton
stupid

u both sucked but im gonna go with five on this cause the other dudes shit didn't make no since

This battle was like reading my death. It was so fucking whack I now want to kill my self, for taking the time out of my life to read it. Its really hard to break down a battle of this sort.

NO personals NO multies or Methas or Punches, NOthing...

So the only way to vote is to decide wich one of you was less whack,

Less whack=five alive

I think FIVE had that flow you know

he came harder so..

v-FIVE Alive

I give this one to so low, even though, they both weren't great. So's flow was just kinda off a lil bit. 5, ya punch lines are kinda weak man. Step up. No hate, keep working.