View Full Version : Five Alive vs Aperfectmurder (APM wins by DQ)


Five Alive
03-02-2006, 11:53 PM
yo yo yo lets get this shit started check in son spit whenever no order
unlimited bars
votes 100+ posts and well explained

Jane Doe
03-03-2006, 12:54 AM
Alright.

I dont know how much you plan on posting. I'll probably go 30-40.

Five Alive
03-03-2006, 12:59 AM
ayo here we go
one last time nigga cmon lets roll

yo yo yo
ayo son this the encore gonna rock ya like earthquake//
ima make all these masta emcees no u aint worth shake//
its just a five minute warm up im feelin alive what bout u?//
nah u just nervouse cuz u know ya gonna be murked on ya debut//
i'll shoutlike i was devout to makin ya ma smell like trout//
and beyond any doubt i'll murk ya day in day out//
i'll aggravate ya da way i agitate ya i'll elevate//
u shouldn't show up i'll put u ta sleep like ya hibernate//

yo yo yo k im pumped now
im nice with da mic theres nothin more i like//
than ta paralyze ya left side and leave ya ait//
yo da beef is stewin five alive came to ruin//
u maybe sound but u don't know what the fuck ya doin//
dis is five baby next generation jam master//
im quick wit da keys but ma hands faster//
one last time i make sure u goina see a change//
when im done i make sure yo whole face be rearranged//
u aint a player u an arm chair quarterback//
u ride da beat like side streets on a flat//
don't play dumb we know where ya from//
only time ya see slugs is after da rain come//

yo yo
i want ya'll to feel da realness da truth of my words//
i've been quiet for too long the truth should be heard//
im an untouchable cat whos style is right//
i know i can be mistaken for the silent type//


don't worry niggas iss almost over

my violence bites tight like its vampires teeth//
im hammerin cheep pullin da beef and u put ta sleep//
ma radical brain will run ya terrain come to da game//
iss simple and plain theres no numbin yo pain//
warpin ya frame wit card decks//
i still flex kill specs on fuckin cassette decks//
mic chex collect all live bets//
we'll see how bright the lights get//
ya raps on da mix tapes that'll neva sell//
i'll always beat ya got mo bling and betta gel//


SO DA NEXT TIME I GIVE U THE DEEP SIX//
IT;LL BE ON MUTHAFUCKIN REMIX//

yo yo
peace homies

Jane Doe
03-03-2006, 01:48 AM
I cut about 1/2 my verse off..

with a record like 1-10, you're a laugh..ur not amused?
I guess the real laughing matter is whoever lost to you
trust I'll rock ur spews/my flows rippin' ya man
so I'm not giving up when I'm kicking the can (5 alive can)
ya writtens are bland/someone explain why he'd try to rhyme..
I'm "Perfect Murder" for a reason..fuck leaving Five alive
he's a bitch. he'll cry to guys/then ask for a hug
it's like I'm breaking dishes the way I'm smacking his mug
look I'm not even trying/i bring heat off the top like hot things
ur at the bottom of the barrel...with the other soft drinks
five's played like rocking pink/I come with better quotes
your verse belongs in Comedy Central with the Helen Keller jokes
I'm ill, you should've choked/on you? no one is bettin'
your record reflects your odds of winning..only now it's 1 in 11
who's better? no question/I'm wasting a rhyme..ur a waste of text
you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost
you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost
you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost
you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost
you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost
you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost you lost
.....Sorry....just saving some time...you should've saved your breath



Links: [1] (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=756051&posted=1#post756051) [2] (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=756053#post756053)

Five Alive
03-03-2006, 02:37 AM
nice homie uppin fo votes

TCE_Killa
03-03-2006, 09:23 AM
FiveAlive, links?

Kleeshay
03-03-2006, 10:44 AM
Ite

Personals: Perfect Murda
Metas: Perfect Murda
Flow: FA
Punches: Perfect Murda
Structure: FA
Vocab: FA
Overall: Perfect Murda
Vote: Perfect Murda

Silenzier1
03-03-2006, 06:25 PM
Personals: Perfect Murda
Metas: Perfect Murda
Flow: Five alive...cause Perfect did that you lost shit that was wack you might as well put ya whole verse on there
Punches:Perfect with out a doubt had better punches
Structure: Five Alive structure was way better
Vocab: At the end Five Alive at nice word play but the shit didn't make since so i'll give this to perfect
Personals:Im gonna give to perfect to for this line I'm "Perfect Murder" for a reason..fuck leaving Five alive
he's a bitch. he'll cry to guys/then ask for a hug

Overall: Perfect Murder killed you with less barz
Vote:Perfect Murder

Jane Doe
03-03-2006, 10:54 PM
Thx for the votes.

Five Alive
03-03-2006, 11:22 PM
kleeshays vote don't count he don't have enuff posts

Jane Doe
03-03-2006, 11:34 PM
I didn't notice.

1-0 then.

Silenzier1
03-04-2006, 02:58 PM
Kleeshay is juice..he's banned

Jane Doe
03-04-2006, 11:51 PM
Up...

Ape-X
03-04-2006, 11:57 PM
Personals: Perfect Murda...just....lol what can I say? FA didn't have much in the way of personals.
Metas: Perfect Murda. Same deal as Personals I suppose..
Flow: FA. I thought the "you lost" bit was funny, it didn't flow with the verse (heh no shit).
Punches: Perfect Murda. Yep Yep.
Structure: Both. I couldn't decide, sorry.
Vocab: FA. Though good vocab doesn't automatically merit a good verse.
Overall: Perfect Murda
Vote: Perfect Murda

Nice verses both of you.

Jane Doe
03-06-2006, 01:11 PM
Thx for voting.

2-0

TCE_Killa
03-06-2006, 04:36 PM
FiveAlive you need links.

Post them here :-
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57299

Tomorrow is the deadline for you to post your links otherwise AperfectMurder wins by DQ.