Call me the battleholic whatever you wanna call it
Your competance so small you need micromachines to haul it
Let me put it like this, Q you cant rhyme for dick
Giving you rap lessons every time my mouse clicks
You coming with no rhythm, yet I know you hate me
Dont fuck with varsity, stay your ass in JV
Your the boy scouts, who still needs a pamper to pee
Maybe the internet or the flamer who blew you
I know your rhymes sucked and now I know YOU do
People ride my wagon like an overpacked Hatian ship
Your pathetic talking like we were in a relationship
So now my hands full and your in distress like a damsel
I would see you on TV, but Freaks & Geeks was canceled
In fact you quoted me a thousand times till this day I make words
Heres a tip, Cut the vocabulary, you aint no CNN reporter
stop rhyming If not Ill break your head like a virgins hymen


tHe FuCkIn TaKeOvEr... has just began.

thats not even that good for a pre write...fuck what am i sayin its pretty sick but i know key stylin and thats not it
any way u gotta read all the rules first homie cuz u did this all wrong
no hatin
just lettin ya know

I'm not dropin into you drop your links

Wordzplay's verse:

Intro:Nice, u set urself up well
Punces:Good, i like the varsity-vj line
Personals:Good, the vj-line cuz he's 16
Similies:Good, had a decent amount of metas/similies i'd say an even amount
Flow:Good, every line was consistent
Outro:Bad, it fell apart at the end, it looked like u were fillin up space.

Overall:Nice post