View Full Version : JimmyWhite Vs Fixion (0-2 Vet Votes Only)
JimmyWhite 03-26-2006, 05:01 PM ;)
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20 Bars Max.
Voting : No Crew, Hate, Bitch, Dick Riding, Unexplained Votes.
No Pm'ing For Votes...
Only Vet's Can Vote.
Verses Due...You Chose A Good Deadline. Has To Be Monday Or After, I Got Alot Of Shit To Do Today.
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Fixion. 03-26-2006, 05:16 PM 20 bars, are you fuckin rediculous? I dont write a story in a battle..
5-7 bars = 10-14 lines..
And due next Sunday cause I have the TT tourney and the strike
for my schooling is off, and Im back into college..
Fixion. 04-01-2006, 03:32 PM http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=787577#post787577
and voted on the Mix dude vs. Advanced..finished so I moved it..
Cant play with the vets Jimbo
Punches hittin em whole, no guys to hide by..
Cause Fix is known to leave Jimmy with holes, like SUVs in drive bys.
This fight fly by? Never..Ill beat n batter, pummle ya ass
cause J says hes from the street but you havin trouble with Ave
You should quit now fam, Hip Hop gave you somethin, start givin it back
...cause like unprotected sex, its wrong to leave Jimmy in rap
Make you mumble n drool, ya drops made to crumble n bruise
Ya skill as a wager? Guess you really got "Nothin to Lose" (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64848)
Humble this dude..hit em so hard he'll feel it in his kids kin
cuz ur chances of winnin are like breakin it off with Macho Man..slim Jim
I'll post first dunn, writs make em bleed trust .siNs got em..
cause my verse will have you no showin like your whole win column
..daughtered..
Dont get it? Dont vote..
First line though..Jimmy=GMC Jimmy for the retards
JimmyWhite 04-01-2006, 04:02 PM I'll Leave Ya "Blind To The Game", So ‘Fix’ Ya Eyes So Ya Vision Corrected/
Cause Fixion’s Soundclick Gets "Less Views" Than A Helen Keller Perspective!!// {1}
Like ‘Kids With No Arms At Christmas’, You’ll Never “Beat-Me-At-Rap”(Wrap)/
Cause I’ll Have Ya Girl Like “Thug Ventrilliquists”…Never Any “G-Strings-Attached!”// {2}
You’ll Never “Eat Emcees”, No Wonder Why AP Shows You No Love/
Cause Only Time You Get “Good Feed On A Bar” Is ‘Gourmet Pubs!’// {3}
Hall Of Fakes…KO’ing Fixion Is Nearly Subliminally “Robbing-The-Dead”/
You Got Hall Of Fame Drops Only Cause Ya Crew Member Is The Mod Of The Thread// {4} (Ouch ;))
Receiving A “Free Book” Is The Only Time This COCKyBitch Wins-Text!/
And Ya DICK Is The Size Of A “Beetle” When You Involved ‘In-Sex’ (Insects)// {5}
I’ll Kill Ya “Sad Shit” Silently¸So You The “Mourner-Of-Ya-Crap”/
Unspoken?!? You Couldn’t Be A Legend Even If I Put You In The “Corner-Of-A-Map!”// {6}
DAMN...Fix You DEF. Should Have Stepped Up...
I Made Mine Only 6 So Its Even…
Vote Up
JimmyWhite 04-01-2006, 04:16 PM http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64805
Ill Post My Other Links Later 2nite
Clusion 04-01-2006, 04:22 PM *subscribing* will vote later.
Ezekiel 04-01-2006, 07:01 PM Voting Stands At 0-0
Upping For Votes...all Freeposts Have Been Deleted, So No More Of That Shit..pz
JimmyWhite 04-01-2006, 08:18 PM My Other Link :
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64729
Vokals 04-01-2006, 08:23 PM Unspoken?!? You Couldn’t Be A Legend Even If I Put You In The “Corner-Of-A-Map!”// {6}
seen this line almost verbatum on this site and it wasnt used too long ago
and no i am not saying u bit, just not original
JimmyWhite 04-01-2006, 08:25 PM ^Gay.
I Love It When People Say "I Heard It Before" - No Proof. Just Trying To Downplay The Bar.
Thought Of It At Work During Lunch, Wrote It On A Notepad I Had For This Battle
Delarge. 04-02-2006, 03:35 AM Im not gonna vote because I can read that Im not a vet..
Fuckin dillhole
JimmyWhite 04-02-2006, 04:21 AM ^Thanks For The Feed. I Agree 100%...But Its A Vet-Voting Only Battle.
Reps Because He Broke It Down...
Vote Up
Vokals 04-02-2006, 05:19 AM i'll find the bar and edit it in
.Con. 04-02-2006, 11:09 AM Nice battle .. Fixions disappointed me .. really .. should have tried .. props to Jimmy for coming good ..
Fix -
Punches hittin em whole, no guys to hide by..
Cause Fix is known to leave Jimmy with holes, like SUVs in drive bys.
^ Ok concept .. 2
This fight fly by? Never..Ill beat n batter, pummle ya ass
cause J says hes from the street but you havin trouble with Ave
^ Nice .. real nice personal .. 4
You should quit now fam, Hip Hop gave you somethin, start givin it back
...cause like unprotected sex, its wrong to leave Jimmy in rap
^ O..k 2.5
Make you mumble n drool, ya drops made to crumble n bruise
Ya skill as a wager? Guess you really got "Nothin to Lose"
^ Another good personal .. not much of a diss though .. 3
Humble this dude..hit em so hard he'll feel it in his kids kin
cuz ur chances of winnin are like breakin it off with Macho Man..slim Jim
^ Ehh .. 2
I'll post first dunn, writs make em bleed trust .siNs got em..
cause my verse will have you no showin like your whole win column
^ Good ending .. 3
Total - 16.5
Standout from Fix's Verse : Flow ..
Jimmy -
I'll Leave Ya "Blind To The Game", So ‘Fix’ Ya Eyes So Ya Vision Corrected/
Cause Fixion’s Soundclick Gets "Less Views" Than A Helen Keller Perspective!!// {1}
^ Nice starter .. 3
Like ‘Kids With No Arms At Christmas’, You’ll Never “Beat-Me-At-Rap”(Wrap)/
Cause I’ll Have Ya Girl Like “Thug Ventrilliquists”…Never Any “G-Strings-Attached!”// {2}
^ First line .. played as fuck .. second line .. ill .. 4
You’ll Never “Eat Emcees”, No Wonder Why AP Shows You No Love/
Cause Only Time You Get “Good Feed On A Bar” Is ‘Gourmet Pubs!’// {3}
^ Niceness .. 4
Hall Of Fakes…KO’ing Fixion Is Nearly Subliminally “Robbing-The-Dead”/
You Got Hall Of Fame Drops Only Cause Ya Crew Member Is The Mod Of The Thread// {4} (Ouch )
^ Good personal .. Not too good .. 3.5
Receiving A “Free Book” Is The Only Time This COCKyBitch Wins-Text!/
And Ya DICK Is The Size Of A “Beetle” When You Involved ‘In-Sex’ (Insects)// {5}
^ No .. 2
I’ll Kill Ya “Sad Shit” Silently¸So You The “Mourner-Of-Ya-Crap”/
Unspoken?!? You Couldn’t Be A Legend Even If I Put You In The “Corner-Of-A-Map!”// {6}
^ Dope .. 4.5
Total - 21
Standout from Jimmy's Verse : Unspoken?!? You Couldn’t Be A Legend Even If I Put You In The “Corner-Of-A-Map!”
Vote - Jimmy
Clusion 04-02-2006, 11:20 AM i dont think you consider me as a Vet
Fixion. 04-02-2006, 12:49 PM Upping For Vet Votes And People That Can Understand A Bar..
Cons vote definitely doesnt count, you just finished a collab with him, hes been off
of RW for how long and hes never been a vet..
Fuck outta here..
WeeTard 04-02-2006, 12:55 PM hate to do this to the thread, but I cant pm yet...Fixion your battling a biter proof is below
http://www.hip-hop-world.com/showthread.php?p=243043#post243043
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64848
u do the math!
NYCSPITS 04-02-2006, 01:03 PM LMFAO wow...jimmy you're a loser...I always suspected your wack ass bites...
I say we IP ban him
TCE_Killa 04-02-2006, 04:44 PM Oooooooooohhh lmfao @ Jimmy.
I think that deserves an IP ban.... 22 wins of biting, what a bitch.
I'm going to speak to the mods and S-mods about it and see what can be done.
Why was NYC banned?
NYCSPITS 04-02-2006, 05:31 PM I wasn't that's just my title^^
JimmyWhite 04-02-2006, 05:34 PM Lmfao At Bitches Trying To Get At Me...
Check This...
http://www.rapworlds.com/gallery/data/500/untitled6.JPG
^"T-Money" Posted His 3/30
http://www.rapworlds.com/gallery/data/500/untitled12.JPG
^Mine...Posted 3/27
Fuck Off Haters...The Clock Doesnt Lie.
Fixion. 04-02-2006, 05:42 PM True
So anywho..
Uppin for votes
-Saracen- 04-02-2006, 06:41 PM Fix
This fight fly by? Never..Ill beat n batter, pummle ya ass
cause J says hes from the street but you havin trouble with Ave
Make you mumble n drool, ya drops made to crumble n bruise
Ya skill as a wager? Guess you really got "Nothin to Lose"
I'll post first dunn, writs make em bleed trust .siNs got em..
cause my verse will have you no showin like your whole win column
Nice little verse... Nothing really played out or anything.. Just an all-round good solid verse. The quoted lines were nice and creative, pretty hard-hitting, but there were also one or two meh bars which weren't very hard-hittin - kinda fillers.
JW
I'll Leave Ya "Blind To The Game", So ‘Fix’ Ya Eyes So Ya Vision Corrected
Cause Fixion’s Soundclick Gets "Less Views" Than A Helen Keller Perspective!!
Hall Of Fakes…KO’ing Fixion Is Nearly Subliminally “Robbing-The-Dead”
You Got Hall Of Fame Drops Only Cause Ya Crew Member Is The Mod Of The Thread
^ These punches were better than Fix's, but the rest of your verse was played in my opinion and I'd heard them all before in a similar fashion. The wrap/g-string-Ventriliquist/Insects line were all of played concepts IMO.
Overall, in terms of technical aspects such as multis, bother were equal in my opinion. JW's two bars that I quoted were pretty nice but the whole verse was inconsistent with really played bars there as well. Erm... Vote - Fix because he was more consistent.
Fixion. 04-02-2006, 06:48 PM 1-0..Up.
JimmyWhite 04-02-2006, 06:51 PM Nice Nice. 1-0 Upping. Thanks For The Vote.
I Want Some Bar By Bar Breakdown...That'll Show Who Won.
Upping.
JimmyWhite 04-02-2006, 11:02 PM Vote.
.Con. 04-03-2006, 06:11 AM Fix .. i am a vet .. check the vet list .. but doesnt matter to me .. i needed to vote on battles for being able to battle with links ..
no hate . .just get your facts straight ..
JimmyWhite 04-03-2006, 04:04 PM Sarcasn Isnt Even A Vet...Unless I'm Mistaken
Ezekiel
Calamity
Orcusante
Shi~1
J-Dubz/WhiteOwl/Jin O Syde
T-giz
virt
the bhranz
truth
caramella
D-ILLar-1
Dominox5000
Precision
Hazel
X-quiz
Con~vict
Jonny Witherspoon
Xkwisite
tek aka chronical
Malagen
MCD
Karnage
Im_pissed
Multiplexed
Aero
Kronologik
BusterHymen
Funk_M
NFURNO
BKBRAWLA
Ms. Mack
DBO
DigitILL
Fixion
Vokals/ The Professor / Genesis
Killa 4tz aka vision
Hemlok
Murderous~jay
Alexia
Oblivion
Nukleus
YWE
MasterDisaster
Phaze
Kataracks
Adverb
RhYmeZ
Benton Quest
scope
Shadow
Additons:
Otto Maddex
NYC SPITS
Kuvva
Covert
Lee J. (Young $tack$)
Strat
Fixion. 04-03-2006, 04:24 PM Nukleus
is a vet..Nuke = Saracen
..and this is why you are a rookie..
JimmyWhite 04-03-2006, 04:30 PM ^I'm A "Rookie" Cause I Don't Know Who Changes Their Name On The Site?
Pfff...Not Knowing Doesnt Make Someone A Rookie...
Vote Up. 1-1
Fixion. 04-03-2006, 04:35 PM Its 1-0..
You and Con have been on eachothers nuts lately..clearly a dickride vote or the fact that he hasnt judged a veteran punchline in HOW long?..And the fact that hes a proven biter..
Fuck outta here
JimmyWhite 04-03-2006, 04:43 PM <--Not Bitching
So Sure, 1-0...
But Next Votes, I Want Bar By Bar Breakdown. Its Easier To Show Who Won.
D-Illar-1 04-03-2006, 06:57 PM Punches hittin em whole, no guys to hide by..
Cause Fix is known to leave Jimmy with holes, like SUVs in drive bys.
^Pretty Nice
This fight fly by? Never..Ill beat n batter, pummle ya ass
cause J says hes from the street but you havin trouble with Ave
^Ouch...Good personal..
You should quit now fam, Hip Hop gave you somethin, start givin it back
...cause like unprotected sex, its wrong to leave Jimmy in rap
LOL...Good wordplay
Make you mumble n drool, ya drops made to crumble n bruise
Ya skill as a wager? Guess you really got "Nothin to Lose"
Cool...
Humble this dude..hit em so hard he'll feel it in his kids kin
cuz ur chances of winnin are like breakin it off with Macho Man..slim Jim
Pretty good...
I'll post first dunn, writs make em bleed trust .siNs got em..
cause my verse will have you no showin like your whole win column
Nice personal to close it out...
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I'll Leave Ya "Blind To The Game", So ‘Fix’ Ya Eyes So Ya Vision Corrected/
Cause Fixion’s Soundclick Gets "Less Views" Than A Helen Keller Perspective!!// {1}
Nice punchline
Like ‘Kids With No Arms At Christmas’, You’ll Never “Beat-Me-At-Rap”(Wrap)/
Cause I’ll Have Ya Girl Like “Thug Ventrilliquists”…Never Any “G-Strings-Attached!”// {2}
Ehh...Not for text, audio, it's a push, but for text, nah...
You’ll Never “Eat Emcees”, No Wonder Why AP Shows You No Love/
Cause Only Time You Get “Good Feed On A Bar” Is ‘Gourmet Pubs!’// {3}
Decent wordplay
Hall Of Fakes…KO’ing Fixion Is Nearly Subliminally “Robbing-The-Dead”/
You Got Hall Of Fame Drops Only Cause Ya Crew Member Is The Mod Of The Thread// {4} (Ouch )
Very nice personal
Receiving A “Free Book” Is The Only Time This COCKyBitch Wins-Text!/
And Ya DICK Is The Size Of A “Beetle” When You Involved ‘In-Sex’ (Insects)// {5}
Nah, fam, not feeling it...
I’ll Kill Ya “Sad Shit” Silently¸So You The “Mourner-Of-Ya-Crap”/
Unspoken?!? You Couldn’t Be A Legend Even If I Put You In The “Corner-Of-A-Map!”// {6}
I've hear something close to this before...But anyway, it's pretty good
Punches: Fix, by a hair
Personals: Jimmy, by a hair
Wordplay: Fix
Flow: Fix
Originality: Tie
Enjoyment: Tie
VOTE: Fix
JimmyWhite 04-03-2006, 07:00 PM Damn. When I Finished...This Def. Wasnt The Way I Saw This Battle Going.
2-0
YOYO50centy0012 04-03-2006, 08:14 PM Im not gonna vote, im not vet but fixion wth.
I read your battles before and you were so much doper, but nice drop on both sides, no hate fixion you could k'o me, just telling the truth.
Are you just getting back in it ?
Fixion. 04-03-2006, 08:47 PM Im not gonna vote, im not vet but fixion wth.
I read your battles before and you were so much doper, but nice drop on both sides, no hate fixion you could k'o me, just telling the truth.
Are you just getting back in it ?
LoL..dude, I normally dont text battle..this is my first time in a year
and a half..I do audio now.
JimmyWhite 04-03-2006, 10:39 PM ^Enough Of The Freeposting
Vote Up
Clusion 04-04-2006, 07:33 AM think Jimmys getting owned.
JimmyWhite 04-04-2006, 02:50 PM How Am I Getting Owned? Its 2-0 And So Far Both Voters Have Said "Its A Close Battle"
Owned Would Be A Landslide.
O Well, I Thought I Won This, But I Guess He Edged This One Out.
Upping For Another Vote.
YOYO50centy0012 04-04-2006, 04:11 PM You fuck up, Go kill your self Blaaze.
REad the fucking title
VET VOTES ONLY!
I'll be nice in voting on this...
Fixion:
Punches hittin em whole, no guys to hide by..
Cause Fix is known to leave Jimmy with holes, like SUVs in drive bys.
^basic but decent..
This fight fly by? Never..Ill beat n batter, pummle ya ass
cause J says hes from the street but you havin trouble with Ave
^ personal.. other than that it's okay
You should quit now fam, Hip Hop gave you somethin, start givin it back
...cause like unprotected sex, its wrong to leave Jimmy in rap
^ lol........ No
Make you mumble n drool, ya drops made to crumble n bruise
Ya skill as a wager? Guess you really got "Nothin to Lose"
^ smh @ setup lol... 2nd line concept's been used
Humble this dude..hit em so hard he'll feel it in his kids kin
cuz ur chances of winnin are like breakin it off with Macho Man..slim Jim
^ ahaha.. I liked this.. Unexpected
I'll post first dunn, writs make em bleed trust .siNs got em..
cause my verse will have you no showin like your whole win column
^ nahhh
Jimmy
I'll Leave Ya "Blind To The Game", So ‘Fix’ Ya Eyes So Ya Vision Corrected/
Cause Fixion’s Soundclick Gets "Less Views" Than A Helen Keller Perspective!!// {1}
^ liked that you made a connection between lines.. punch was bland
Like ‘Kids With No Arms At Christmas’, You’ll Never “Beat-Me-At-Rap”(Wrap)/
Cause I’ll Have Ya Girl Like “Thug Ventrilliquists”…Never Any “G-Strings-Attached!”// {2}
^ 1st line unnecessary.. 2nd.... Nahhhhh
You’ll Never “Eat Emcees”, No Wonder Why AP Shows You No Love/
Cause Only Time You Get “Good Feed On A Bar” Is ‘Gourmet Pubs!’// {3}
^ decent... & yes AP shows him no love... :(
Hall Of Fakes…KO’ing Fixion Is Nearly Subliminally “Robbing-The-Dead”/
You Got Hall Of Fame Drops Only Cause Ya Crew Member Is The Mod Of The Thread// {4} (Ouch )
^ personal.. & lol @ punch (note: when doing direct punches make sure there is a beginning multi in 1st line to impact punch.. i.e- I've got him upset KO’ing Fixion Is Subliminally “Robbing-The-Dead”
You Got Hall Of Fame Drops Only Cause Ya Crew Member Is The Mod Of The Thread!!)
Receiving A “Free Book” Is The Only Time This COCKyBitch Wins-Text!/
And Ya DICK Is The Size Of A “Beetle” When You Involved ‘In-Sex’ (Insects)// {5}
^ lol you get a point for trying but nooooooooo!
I’ll Kill Ya “Sad Shit” Silently¸So You The “Mourner-Of-Ya-Crap”/
Unspoken?!? You Couldn’t Be A Legend Even If I Put You In The “Corner-Of-A-Map!”// {6}
^ 1st line unnecessary.. 2nd line is okay
Overall: Fixion had a straight to the point delivery.. Punches were better.. Jimmy attempted more creativity but a lot of the creativity was not good.. I think Fixion got this..
JimmyWhite 04-04-2006, 04:28 PM Too Bad Blaaze Aint Considered A Vet.
Dope Feed Tho, Someone Not Brainwashed With RW Poltics Finally Voted
Lol Jp.
3-0 Nice Battle.
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