House Rules,

Links with Drops,
3-0, K.O
First to 5.


We'll call Wednesday Midnight GMT the deadline.

ok im on it.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64157

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64612

E'hem

Who the fuck r u supposed to be?
i look in tha mirror every mornin to see a real emcee,
and yet u wanna battle me? dawg imma g,
i put holes in the space were ur face was supposed to be,
see, he's about to get me pissed,
the only way he'd spit hot shit, is if i came on his lips,
kid, i can turn ur brain to jello,
leave u on the floor shakin more times than a tickle me elmo,
i'll eat u like corn on tha cob, dawg i jack n rob,
got dudes that will fill u with more holes than spongebob,
u cant beat me pound for pound,
i might as well make u my sig, cuz ur ass is a clown!

Joksters line's 'll never make Sensai (sense hey) likea Paraplegic, Black Belt.
I mean that world'll have to turn immense-gay, Before this Kids Tracks-Felt
I'm be real, This cats like Pinochio - He lies!, He Nose I'm Better!
I leave this cat daze and clueless, Like takin' the question mark outta the Ridler!


Had to drop a spit,busy doing a formal report. Apologise for the lack of bars.

I'ma drop links real soon.

Multies- Null
Punches- Null
Wordplay- null
Flow- jokester
Creativity- null
Personals- jokester(even tho he was talkin about himself)
Overall- Null

weak ass battle .. null , ive seen you come better ..

Punches: N
Personals: J
Wordplay: N
Metas: J
Multies: N
Structure: J
Creativity: N
Consistency: N
Humour: N

Vote: Null

joker just rapped about how great he is .. smh ..

Punches: Null
Personals: Joke
Wordplay: Null
Metas: Null
Multies: Null
Structure: Null
Creativity: Null

Vote: Null
Jokester just needs to elevate a bit.

maybe ya right, thanks for posting

Jokester

Who the fuck r u supposed to be?
i look in tha mirror every mornin to see a real emcee,
^^bleh
and yet u wanna battle me? dawg imma g,
i put holes in the space were ur face was supposed to be,
eh.. not feelin that much
see, he's about to get me pissed,
the only way he'd spit hot shit, is if i came on his lips,
^so....if you nutted on his lips it would become shit therefore you sayin "hot shit"?...sorry to be getting technical :/
kid, i can turn ur brain to jello,
leave u on the floor shakin more times than a tickle me elmo,
^lolol. wow. that's wow.
i'll eat u like corn on tha cob, dawg i jack n rob,
got dudes that will fill u with more holes than spongebob,
^^1st line was ass second was okay
u cant beat me pound for pound,
i might as well make u my sig, cuz ur ass is a clown!
^^weak


Overall your verse was real weak. You need to elevate. Only thing you had going for you really was your flow.. which was kind of on point. But keep trying..you'll get where you wana be.


Null


Joksters line's 'll never make Sensai (sense hey) likea Paraplegic, Black Belt.
I mean that world'll have to turn immense-gay, Before this Kids Tracks-Felt
^^nto really feelin this but its alright
I'm be real, This cats like Pinochio - He lies!, He Nose I'm Better!
I leave this cat daze and clueless, Like takin' the question mark outta the Ridler!
^^^well those lines didn't rhyme to me much but whatever. Kinda like the nose line... 2nd line was eh


Overall your shitted on jokester...I really dont have to explain that... he had wordplay and similies even though it was basic....but it was coo.



Vote ~ Null

Jokester's shit:
Who the fuck r u supposed to be?
i look in tha mirror every mornin to see a real emcee,
and yet u wanna battle me? dawg imma g,
i put holes in the space were ur face was supposed to be,
Stop Talking about your self...

see, he's about to get me pissed,
the only way he'd spit hot shit, is if i came on his lips,
Lol

kid, i can turn ur brain to jello,
leave u on the floor shakin more times than a tickle me elmo,
Wat?

i'll eat u like corn on tha cob, dawg i jack n rob,
got dudes that will fill u with more holes than spongebob,
Uhm...Ok...

u cant beat me pound for pound,
i might as well make u my sig, cuz ur ass is a clown!
Lol...

Null's Shit:
Joksters line's 'll never make Sensai (sense hey) likea Paraplegic, Black Belt.
I mean that world'll have to turn immense-gay, Before this Kids Tracks-Felt
K...

I'm be real, This cats like Pinochio - He lies!, He Nose I'm Better!
I leave this cat daze and clueless, Like takin' the question mark outta the Ridler
Lol...

Null got this... Jokester, you seriously gotz'ta stop talking about ya self and focus on the punches...which is wat Null did...even tho he aint type much...

I kno dat Null already won cuz its like 4-0 but i wanted 2 make it 5...lol