10-12 lines
3-ko 4-1 tko or first to 5
no feeding/biting.. ect..

Waitin on u to check in.. make sure to post links

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=782099&postcount=19

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=780518&postcount=5

my links.... waitin on you

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=785190&posted=1#post785190

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=785201&posted=1#post785201

Theres tha links lets get droping shit

alright ima grab some lunch and ill hit this up..

aightt man i might be goin inabit so if i aint dropped nuffin tnoite ima drop sum soon as ye safe

quick key

quick to the punch so sick with this stuff i'll have u spit up ya lunch
tryin ta -drag out this L-(loss) like crossdressers hittin the dutch
Give him a touch.. not love taps watch ya punk ass get slugged fast
Cuz i'll spit first n mix wont even come back with come backs*

Holdin a few gats ta clack make sure its OVER FOR YOU
Cuz you not only spit gay bars yo you go to them too
And if your indecisive i'll make sure the decisions EZ
You aint even light weight cuzin heres ya division PEEWEE

Finish it off
Hypnatize you with lyrics most dont spit it as real as i do
Voters treat u like gay pop up ads! browsers just minimize you




*just joined the site.. wont even come back to come back! get it?

been so young havin fun wit tha old plastic gun at pre-skool
see-fool u play wit tha sand in tha pit were three-cool
kids hang playing wit there toy vans n picking-on-you
while im shitting-on-you while u licking the bogie i been Flicking-on-you
not only me but tha whole site pissin-on-you so go back n learn
that u lack yearn to earn tha funny money to burn
so keep wishing go back to dream lake n go fishing for talents
i got so many i cant balance ima capture u like tha Guadalcanal-islands
man im ya master i give yo demands man you suck like your mum
you dont have to clever to know that fact but man tell her to change her act
why the fuck u painting yaself black your raps whack so dam bad u probally wished yo neva fucking rap'd u keep comin back but yo ass gettin slapped
damm soz it took so log i been doing stuff but i had to do this quick coz im out again

ooooowwwwww

aight hit this up with some votes yall...

Vote is for @dvanced he got this battle.shit was pretty weak but i think @dvance took it.

^Unexplained vote, so therefor it doesn't count.

Explain your votes people. Stands at 0-0.

Sorry.

Flow:M
Multis:M
Meta's:@
Enjoyment:@
Wordplay:@

Vote =@

No real favorite lines both of you need to elevate a bit.

adv@nces's shit:
quick to the punch so sick with this stuff i'll have u spit up ya lunch
tryin ta -drag out this L-(loss) like crossdressers hittin the dutch
Not a good opener^

Give him a touch.. not love taps watch ya punk ass get slugged fast
Cuz i'll spit first n mix wont even come back with come backs*
Lol datz funny^

Holdin a few gats ta clack make sure its OVER FOR YOU
Cuz you not only spit gay bars yo you go to them too
Lol also funny^

And if your indecisive i'll make sure the decisions EZ
You aint even light weight cuzin heres ya division PEEWEE
Lmfao nice^

Finish it off
Hypnatize you with lyrics most dont spit it as real as i do
Voters treat u like gay pop up ads! browsers just minimize you
That right der was tight^

MiXmAsTaMiLk (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/member.php?u=23505)'s shit:
been so young havin fun wit tha old plastic gun at pre-skool
see-fool u play wit tha sand in tha pit were three-cool
Uhm k...^

kids hang playing wit there toy vans n picking-on-you
while im shitting-on-you while u licking the bogie i been Flicking-on-you
Wtf?^

not only me but tha whole site pissin-on-you so go back n learn
that u lack yearn to earn tha funny money to burn
Wat?^

so keep wishing go back to dream lake n go fishing for talents
i got so many i cant balance ima capture u like tha Guadalcanal-islands
Sure...^

man im ya master i give yo demands man you suck like your mum
you dont have to clever to know that fact but man tell her to change her act
Gay...^

why the fuck u painting yaself black your raps whack so dam bad u probally wished yo neva fucking rap'd
u keep comin back but yo ass gettin slapped
damm soz it took so log i been doing stuff but i had to do this quick coz im out again
Gay...^

I think itz obvious who won here... Adv@nced gets diz 1...

nice battle .. fairly one-sided though ..

Punches: @
Personals: M
Wordplay: @
Metas: @
Multies: @
Structure: M
Creativity: @
Consistency: @

Vote: Adv@nced

thats a KO thx for the votes fellas good battle!

Flow-Advanced
creativty-advanced
multies-advanced
punches-advanced
personals-none
wordplay-advanced
overall-advanced

On the real..ya'll make this site look like shit..you fuckin suck, naw mean?

Advanced you at least have a chance at having some skill..at the beginnin
of ya verse I actually thought you were doin alright..the crossdresser line was alright at best..but the flow through this was good in a way..wasnt fantastic but yeah..

Mix..you just flat out suck, no punches, no personals..nothing..the verse was bare, I felt like it was you just callin him names..pretty sad display of skill in this bout..

Anyway..overall, Ima give it to Advanced, for at least having some remote punchline..but yall need to elevate..