Verses Due by Sunday
3-0 is ko or first to five
no feeding/biting ect...

Let the games begin!

sorry mate, i didn't realise you already set it up..

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65139

i'll get another in a minute..

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65243

drop whenever you want..

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=790448&postcount=21

Last link you want me to post up first or what?

yeah post up first so i can see what i'm up against

aight then ill hit this up tomorrow

sry i been busy but here i go..


Throwin blows that'll leave u Stunned in a Daze! Irate-Demon? more like One a them Gays..
So how can you stand up to me WHEN YOU RUNNIN AWAY!
U throw blows but None of them Faze! Im in a battle with a Feather Weight..
Upper cuts will make you Levitate! Commin straight at u while u Hesitate!
May win battles on the net but in Real Life youll always take Second Place!
Im the real deal son u just Emulate.. Dreamin of hits that you'll Never Make!
Zeros how I RATE DEMON.. truthfully ya GOD AWFUL for HEAVENS SAKES!
Watch as ya rep quick to Crumble n Fall More like the type to Mumble and Stall!
So when it come to skill how you gonna step up when you got Nothin at All!
Couldnt stir up a crowd if you started a Mosh Pit! Ya Soft Bitch plus this battle you Lost It..
if voters dont agree im commin to South hampton UK and im taken you Hostage!
Set up a thread hoping cats Show they Love but ya wonder why "Wont they Come?"
Cuz ya written rhymes get less views then ya Homepage Does!

uppin for you to post

i'll post up soon..

you're a bitch its plain and simple, I'll pick and aim at ya temple,
With sticks as plain as pencils to leave you ripped with lead and chalklines stenciled,

I'll hit your brains with missiles, whips, chains and pistols,
To leave you drained with issues full of holes like colds to tissues

I'll bold the issue and leave you crooked like italics,
Behold the visual known as ADv@NcED the anencephalic,
I'll devide him in half like sharing a sandwich,
my caring is savage, i'm carrying the automatics,
I'll divide his means to win like finding the average

My gunplay sons your wordplay,
I ain't got to hustle to work your nerves mane,

only thing advanced bout this dick is his username
battling rookies just for a quick win to claim

My first battle on this site and i'm abusing you
your losing dude, i'm killing you, i'll cut through you and your crew
leave my mark of victory stuck permanent like a new tattoo
only battles i seen u win so far have all been rookies or by DQ

Just be like basketballs in churches and Roll in ya pew and murk you on a Sunday,
No icy patch to know this fag has been gay,
his shit is played like he flowing in constant replay,
I breath hate, your wack shit is ripped off and returned to you like non-addressed postage with rebates

aight man good battle! uppin for some votes...

This battle was real close... To me it came down to punches and structure... the flow and personals were even in my opinion....

My Vote-Irate

His structure was good... and his last line took it

"his shit is played like he flowing in constant replay,
I breath hate, your wack shit is ripped off and returned to you like non-addressed postage with rebates"

what more can I say that shit was fire

^^ if you want your vote to count plz explain it more than this... prove who won with a breakdown of lines/bars and categories... and plz explain to me how his last line took it when this line was in his verse "ill devide him in half like sharing a sandwich" lol plz make sense when u vote

thanks for the vote mate, but as ADv@NcEd said, try explain it better

Flow- tied...both were ok
Creativity- ID
Punches-Advance
Personals-ID
Multis-none
Metas- ID
Vocab/W.p- Advance
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Vote= ID

i jus thought he had to more consistent verse...it was close but i thought ID took it

thanks for the vote, 1-0 uppin..

Flow- tied...both were ok
Creativity- ID
Punches-Advance
Personals-ID
Multis-none
Metas- ID
Vocab/W.p- Advance
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Vote= ID

i jus thought he had to more consistent verse...it was close but i thought ID took it

no multies? wat battle were u reading??

vote vote vote vote vote... plz !! :)

hahahah there were PLENTY of multis but oh well just a herb with no idea of what a 'multi' is... anyway to break it down..

Flow: advanced
Multis: advanced
Vocab:ID
Punches: ID
Personals: ID
Metas: advanced

close dudes... uhh ill give it too ID cause his punches were better and punches win battles..

Complexity-none
Creativity-ID
Metas-ID
Punches-ID....weak
Personals-didnt notice any
Multis-weak
Wordplay-ID

vote--ID.....less filler lines

Adv. I didnt really c 1 punch from u it was all filler work on that....

Both yous gotta work on ur creativity n complexity it will help alot...

thanks for the votes 3-0