8 lines/4 bars House rules.

checking in

Stop rap ya shit is defeated in only the colossus take-ya stage/
Drop ya bits before i make your losses you state-ya age/
Fist's for punchlines,I get ya next of kin like infant mortality/
Bitings for lunchtime convince loss to every shit dick that battles me/
Mic's Inciting Rage,Your lines are good when either bitten or taped/
Like A Title Page,My lines are on top of everything written to date/
All your bars are probally ghost written payed with tangible payments/
Your rap's slammed to the pavement,instead of wasting bars they get family arangements/ http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65152

Okay there you go.

Post links soon.

Chekkin ..

Links -

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65081
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64984

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Explanations ..

Line 1 - Delarge is australian .. Gel-Aussie = jealousy ..
Line 4 - Yep i'll have my verse done in 20 mins
Line 5 - He recently won through disqualification ..
Line 6 - See the skeleton in his sig ..

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Ya like Australian Hair Care Recipes, the way ya filled with Gel-Aussie ( jealousy )
Just let me be, you're dead meat D, consider me to be your worst enemy
Hell you're weak, another wack newbie whos researching all my identities
Keying ? Your mom must've been around because there is no obscenities !!
Really G, just disqualifications will not get you very far in this marathon
Ya step to me, there'll be lots of bones snapping like pissed of skeletons !!
You've had enough .. Sorry D, ya losing, we all know how this bout goes
You're lines are jaw-dropping, cuz its hard to yawn with ya mouth closed !!

pwned.

Uppin ..

I won through DQ?

^ a-clipz .. biter ..

Ok.s'all cool, Nice verse.

^^ same ..

uppn ..

Multies-Delarge
Flow-Con
Punches-Con
Personals-Delarge
Enjoyment-Con
Wordplay-Con

Overall con..

nice battle.. i liked the gel aussie line from cons verse, delarge i think you coulda came harder.. you had some nice lines that if worded better coulda been alot nicer

Yeah 1-0 upin

Flow- D
Creativity- Con
Punches-Con...it was close...but his last line took this
Personals- tied...i wasnt really feelin cons first line
Multis- D
Metas- none
Vocab./W.p.- Con...better vocab
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Vote- Con

jus had the better verse wit harder hittin punches

Punches: Con
Wordplay: Con
Multies: Delarge
Flow: Con
Personals: Con
creativity: Con
Overall: Con

Multies-D
Flow-Con
Punches-Con
Personals-D
Enjoyment-Con
Wordplay-Con

Final: Con

Fave Con lines:
Ya like Australian Hair Care Recipes, the way ya filled with Gel-Aussie ( jealousy )
You're lines are jaw-dropping, cuz its hard to yawn with ya mouth closed !!

Fave Delarge line:
Like A Title Page,My lines are on top of everything written to date/

Good battle guys. Liked it.