check. house rules, 4-5 bars.

check your droppin first

aight illl spit first i guess...


http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65365&page=2

my rappin tactics are a bit drastic, but it's classic,
fuckin wit me is like fuckin wit out the plastic..the outcome gon be tragic

cuz lets face it, ya bitch looks like God made a mistake on her face and couldn't erase it,
the facts are true, no one really likes you but your sensitive brain just couldn't take it

don't spend more time in this forum, cuz you real life is bein wasted,
your like a rastas ganja weed in a zigzag, bout to get lace in, and let's face it kid, you look like mr.potato head with the wrong parts placed in, now get off his site or the next place i'll find ya is on Without A Trace, kid.


Hol-E Wun, givin my two cents cuz this fagget aint worth anymore.

aight nice drop... checkin in Ima drop ina few

You dont wanna TRY THESE bars that I spit Hol-E-Wun the only one on this site thats CHINESE
With multiple rookie IP'S in a battle your outcome is hospital beds and IV'S
And you dont have a life besides oragami and the forest to CLIMB TREES/
(Hol-E Wun sounds like a chinese name, hes a rookie, and chinese people
usually do odd things like oragami... no disrespect to chinese ppl
Im justin making a point against what he said about me being white)

This cowards challenging me who gave you the GREEN LIGHT its a racial issue cuz I BE WHITE
Well open your eyes maybe it'll be easier to PREWRITE your verse with ease
I crush you with DEEZ STRIKES Like MIKE TYS'S RIGHT Im causing you to take FLIGHT/

I'll smoke you like a cuban in the mouth of SUGE KNIGHT actin like you from the HOOD RIGHT
making pointless assumptions on what I LOOK LIKE I'll have you SHOOK LIKE mobb deep
You couldnt freestyle if you STOOD UP WRITES Im puttin you to sleep like a lulaby GOOD NIGHT/
(stood up writes... ignored writing verses)

uppin for votes

lol by the way...im not chinese..Hol-E_Wun = Holy One

yea i know... its not hard to figure out

lookin for some votes ppl best out of 3 winz

uppin votes ppl..

Punches - Art
Personals - Tie
Multies - none
Meta's - Art
Flow - Tie
Wordplay - Art
Creativity - nothin great buy Art was better
Overall - Art

weak battle; both need to elevate

Vote - ArtificeD

Punches: Art
Personals: Both
Multies: Art
Wordpaly: Weak, but Art
Enjoyment: Neither
Creativity: Neither
Vote: ArtificeD

He just had a better verse. & that's that.

I gotta give it to Hol-E Wun

wack battle .. really .. yall need to elevate ..

Punches: A
Personals: Ehh ..
Wordplay: H
Metas: H
Multies: A
Structure: A
Creativity: A
Consistency: Tie

Vote: ArtificeD

flow:ART
punches:ART
personals:ART
vocab:ART
multis:ART
creativity:ART
enjoyment: ART

Vote: ART... *reps art* for slaughter

HoL_E-W0N << his mother should of swallowed him...(battle holyone?)

I gotta give it to Hol-E Wun

Possibly the most obvious alias vote I've ever seen

I'm gonna leave this open for a bit so people can laugh

punches:A
Flow:A
Wordplay:A
Similies:umm..none
Personals:none
Gayest flow:HOLEWUN
consistency:A

O/V:Artificed..Weak ass battle what so ever

Haha I hate how these fags like elevate come on here, think there sick and bash other mc's ...w/e guy no respect 2 haters.

.......U just suck

Haters???come on here???No i hate when lil ass newbs like u cant respect a Vote Ive been here longer than u....Fuckin Dumbass..When u step to the plate one day maybe u wont be such of a bitch no more..*Fuckin Wack herbs these Days*

no brainer...
flow, rhyme skeem, vocab, structure,personals, creativity, EVERYTHING was dominated by dat nigga ART..
HOL's verse was typical, noninspiteful, wasnt feellin that nigga, but drop more often cuz i see were ur going with that shit...
no hurt feelings
but this one goes to that nigga
ART...
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