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pz

Hmmmmm
Listened to this 3 times befor responding.

I was on the border line with this track...
I realy could not make up my mind if i liked it or night.


Beat:
nice beat seemed to lack a lil somthing. Mabey a harder piano riff.

Lyrics:
NICE... Felt real real easy to relate with...

Flow:
Thier were places you needed to change a word or 2 it would have flown better. But still most of it was as expected...

Concept:
Nice concept been thier felt that, once again feels real.. Track makes you feel like ya talkin to me.


1-10
7

I think this track needed a more aggressive beat and it would have been alot better of a complete track...

pretty good track overall --- keep at it

thanks Illicyt...and thanks surreal..if you even listened to it.

heh^

liked the verses, very relatable content, flow was good.....i didnt like the hook much, but the rest was tight

thankyou pizzy:)

how many times do i.......*sigh* youll ignore me anyway

Originally posted by Im_Pissed
how many times do i.......*sigh* youll ignore me anyway

^^ lmao...

PZ>

eeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr^^^^^can you not post in my thread unless giving feedback please?...deary me..fucking amatuers.

Originally posted by MCD
eeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr^^^^^can you not post in my thread unless giving feedback please?...deary me..fucking amatuers.

^^ lol... i told you on msn ya fucking arab. Thats it - you're fired. Go on... get out... ;)

PZ>

never talk to your mother that way again timothy!

you would be a good mc if you could rhyme and you didn't have such a fag voice, blazing squad are crazy fresh compared to you. in conculusion you suck big balls.

you are the type of bitch that pisses me off and acts like you know about streets and ghettos but have been brought up in a rich area. if you lived where i do and talked with such a gay voice and said such shit lyrics you would get shitted on BITCH!
YOU DONT KNOW ABOUT MEEEEE!

Yo, I aint gon hate, this is the second track I heard from you, and i was far from impressed..you dont have a good rap voice, your flow, it stumbles tremendously..the hook was not good at all...for a mixtape, u wanna drop your hottest shit, cuz mufuckas is gon be hearin you..and this is wack, your accent has a looooot to do with it...it sounds annoying..my boy Blast Off, he has a thick ass accent too, but u know whats good about him? He can flow his ass off..same with Lootchiano..u cant flow great, its funny, cuz u talked bad about me, but this is not rap, this is not hip hop..this is a mockery of the music i grew up listening to, the music i embrace now...and u are taking it up as a hobby and throwing mud on it...respect this craft, if u are gonna put shit out, make it hot..not mediocre/wack...no hate, its real..one

Originally posted by jewbei
you would be a good mc if you could rhyme and you didn't have such a fag voice, blazing squad are crazy fresh compared to you. in conculusion you suck big balls.

you are the type of bitch that pisses me off and acts like you know about streets and ghettos but have been brought up in a rich area. if you lived where i do and talked with such a gay voice and said such shit lyrics you would get shitted on BITCH!
YOU DONT KNOW ABOUT MEEEEE!

err i havent mentioned the ghetto or the streets once in my shit...so when you've actually listened to it properly, come back and try again..*bleep*

damn kids......

the simple fact that you TRY toy to mc mean that you think you street. hip hop came from the streets, and your just some fag ass bean hed who thought she mc because you heard eminem do it and "hes really cool". quike being so fag and just admit that your shit. FIX UP

MCD if you think you are really good ( which you are not, your shit, and thats just being polite bitch.) send me some of your best lyrics and i will see what i think of them you dick head.
i sent you some of mine.
also i would like to hear some of your audio where you dont use such fucking shit music.
also that song you did about ancient egypt and that was awfull
please tell me if you dont understand some of the words i use because thaey are slang, and you are a posh faggot.
YOU DONT KNOW ABOUT ME BITCH!!!!!!!!
PS if i ever meet you or find out where you live i will kill you mum. ha ha ha...... bitch
also why did you say "BLEEP" give me what you got.

Originally posted by jewbei
MCD if you think you are really good ( which you are not, your shit, and thats just being polite bitch.) send me some of your best lyrics and i will see what i think of them you dick head.
i sent you some of mine.
also i would like to hear some of your audio where you dont use such fucking shit music.
also that song you did about ancient egypt and that was awfull
please tell me if you dont understand some of the words i use because thaey are slang, and you are a posh faggot.
YOU DONT KNOW ABOUT ME BITCH!!!!!!!!
PS if i ever meet you or find out where you live i will kill you mum. ha ha ha...... bitch
also why did you say "BLEEP" give me what you got.


Have you ever seen a better canidate for why 2 down syndrom victoms shouldnt be allowed to reproduce?.....
I havnt

lmfao^^ sonned

Good stuff

But, its needs abetter beat, more agressive like ill-lycit said. The flow does fall off in places, and in places it sounded monotonous, but these were only minor things.

ill~lyric and MCD sound like they are bum chums. You talk out your arse and you think you are so funny but you just come across as a right dickhead. SCREW YOU BITCH
YOU DONT KNOW ABOUT ME BITCH!!!!!!!!!

^^get the fuck out of my thread you flaccid cum goblin before i get you're retarded ass banned.

dirty bitch...

this was pretty good.. unlike most cats online i have a very open mind on rap.. i like mcd style.. i dont care much about his voice.. once the lryics sinks in thats all it matters

flow- was on point.. feel off here an there but still good an
beat- too soft for your tpe of style.. but still the beat was dope had that vibe going that help
lryics- dope man.. very deep an easy to relate too.. i rather be listing to shit that i relate too then listen to sum shit that is all about money.. cars.. bitches..
delivery- was good.. not the best.. sounde a lil monotone at places.. but still was nice for how it went to the beat.. still good..

overall i enjoyed this alot.. 8/10
just a few areas tht were a lil down.. but shiit.. doesnt mean this audio wasnt good.. nice shit mcd

Originally posted by jewbei
ill~lyric and MCD sound like they are bum chums. You talk out your arse and you think you are so funny but you just come across as a right dickhead. SCREW YOU BITCH
YOU DONT KNOW ABOUT ME BITCH!!!!!!!!!


First off yes i am a dickhead and asshole a jackass and what ever you wish to call me.
But once again until you drop an audio you are just another child signing on to your mommy's online account.
Post up an audio or be gone pee on...

lol..thanks for the feed peeps..

Nice, but the beat and your voice(you're of some British background, right?)sorta screwed it up

7/10

the beat is kinda weak and your voice sounds like dr evil kinda...lol

ALL OF YOU ARE GAY

Jewbei needs a support group.....

ILL-LICYT NEEDS A SUPPORT BRA YOU FAT BITCH.

lol...ima be staright up

i relate to many styles of hip hop so i understand...
the beat wasnt aggreessive enough to go with it...
flow was okay could of done better
honest i really dont like your voice but hey its not your fault..your using it good lyrics are tight...i didnt really enjoy it so much but it was good

peace

i thought the drop was aight...

not the best but by far not the worst...

had a decent beat to it... very good lyrics... flowed well.....

FIRSTLY,ILL-LIYCT AND MCD SEEM TO VERY WORRINGLY CLOSE.
......GAYS!!......
AND SECONDLY WHY ARE YOU HATING ON JEWBIE, HE IS ONE OF THE ONLY MEMBERS OF THIS WEBSITE THAT CAN HAVE ANYONE, LYRICALLY AND IN A CUSSING MATCH.
JUST CHECK OUT HIS ILL LYRICS ON ONE HIS PAGES.
JUST GO TO MEMBERS, FIND ON HIS NAME, AND PRESS SEARCH, SO YOU LOOK AT ALL THE THINGS HE HAS POSTED.
THIS MAN IS AS FUNNY AS HELL.
IT WAS A CRIME TO OF GOT HIM BANNED.

shut up you Onimushu reject....your name is scarilly similar to mine..although Oni sounds better than Jewbei...or whatever...go find your dead mother...herb.

WHEN JEWBIE SAID STUFF ABOUT DEAD MOTHERS AND KILLING PEOPLE YOU GOT HIM BANNED.
IT JUST SHOWS THAT YOU ARE A PUSSY AND GOT JEWBIE BANNED BECAUSE YOU CANT ARGUE, YOU ARE A FAGGOT.
"DEAD MOTHER". YOU CHAT SHIT.

Hmm you seem to have some obsession with gays fags and so on... You should go talk to some one about this befor it becomes a real issue for you......

Originally posted by MCD
^^get the fuck out of my thread you flaccid cum goblin before i get you're retarded ass banned.

i think it's funny how you always threaten people by running your cowardly ass to denz to tell him to ban a person just because you don't like them or they're ruining your stupid thread...just stop it already you little queer lad.

Originally posted by jewbei
ILL-LICYT NEEDS A SUPPORT BRA YOU FAT BITCH.

lmao

oh about the track..the beat was pretty cool, lyrics were ok, from what i can understand..but again, your voice is homo.

SUCK YOUR DRY WIT A RIBEENA STRAW YOU STUPID BITCH.
DONT MAKE ME HAVE TO RIP YOU THE FUCK UP EIT MY LYRICS YOU WANKER!!
EAT A DICK!!

uh oh what are you gona do drop a text on me... lol
Kid people have done it befor... but i pay no mind to text...
So you will get no where unless you pick up a mic... Im done with this bickerin bitch.. Son if you want it , pick up a mic and just do it... If not then like i said you aint doin shit just talkin it....

Your voice KILLED the track seriously. I do not like it just because of your voice, it is honestly annoying. Then you sound like a little kid, which you may be. Chorus is not good but lyrics are straight.

Since you are from the UK I will cut you some slack.

7/10 (but thats a UK rapper rating lol)

If you were from the states I would of gave you a 4/10. When your voice gets stronger, you will be better fa sho.

GET THE HELL ON WIT THAT
SAY WHA! WHA! WHA! WHA!