View Full Version : Unstoppable v.s. youngjay (3-1)


Unstoppable
04-23-2006, 11:48 PM
chea

10 lines
3 votes win
drop verse like today if u can
all house rules apply

Y0UNGJAY
04-24-2006, 12:13 AM
Hey this man he call him unstoppable with a record of zero to zero // gettin 1 - 0 i know he aint capable // well at least against me // cuz im the next lyric king // and im`a always bring the pain // is Jay and im the next Asian Fanatic // i only spit original rhymes no one even thought of it // when im done is KO with a 1 2 hit // You got avatar that has a picture of a mic // but i bet you dont even know how too spit on one right // im lyricly able too turn you dust // im`a smoke you up // like i do with my cali kush // Your too easy // i bet you can give the keyboard too my sister and let her type some rhymes // she`ll put you on blast you never wanna come back too this site // Im telling you boy //im not your average rookie // i study my rhymes like im a nerd bookie // this is why when im spittin // im gettin off on you like somethin vicious // i can taste the victory dam it taste delicious // Boy this rhymes a rap // coming with a victory // i hope you dont come back

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 12:18 AM
ok i guess u can call that 10 lines

Y0UNGJAY
04-24-2006, 12:20 AM
You want me too add too it ??

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 12:37 AM
ran your mouth untill i spit 10 and all the sudden ur cryin bout word-play.....
it prolly would of helped if ya flow wasnt utterly obsurd and gay.............
how can i get slept on..when your verse knocks readers into anther slumber.
i dear u to start fresh 0-0..cuz ill leave ur record lookin like a one-eight-hundred-number.......1-800 loses
i strick quick like lightin with a desert eagle that sounds like thunder....
honestly ur flows are more of track then waldo when he starts to wounder.....wheres waldo
this battle is what ur gonna gimmie right.......
oh n the gurls aint cumin cuz like another dude on this site ur jimmys white......rap world lover jimmy white sorry lil dick

edit exlpian.....

Y0UNGJAY
04-24-2006, 01:40 AM
HEY LETS GET iT UPPiN && GET S0ME V0TES WH0 W0N ??

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 12:07 PM
uppin
0-0

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 01:10 PM
links
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...d=1#post806847
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...d=1#post806829

sCilenCe
04-24-2006, 01:49 PM
OMG....you both suck..

i couldnt even finish reading either of yours they were so garbage....

vote: tie (both wack-nes-monsterz)

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 02:09 PM
well well well man i really thank you for your vote lotta hates for the so clled newbie here...........still 0-0.....uppin

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and i seen some of your verse's no need to talk..if u want to find out if i really suck then anytime son anytime.....im rushing these battles to get some wins on my back on this site......but if u want to battle ill perfectly take my time on writing a verse for you.....huh u accept ok ill set the battle up.....

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 05:34 PM
uppppppin last time

ArtificeD
04-24-2006, 05:47 PM
Vote-Unstoppable

Reason-His bars actually rhymed

Rapper 3000
04-24-2006, 05:50 PM
vote - Unstoppable.......his actually ryhmed and made sence

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 05:53 PM
thanks great moving along here.....

2-0 unstop

Grady
04-24-2006, 06:05 PM
Flow: J
Punches:U
Personals: ...
Multis: ...
Wordplay: ...
Enjoyment: J

OV: Young Jay... his verse was terrbile..but unstobbales was wayyy worse...

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 06:12 PM
lol you are never voting on my battles again but i will vote on yours truly even tho u try to piss me off cuz i dont hate .......knowing how much u like Unstop.....but i wont cry ill count it

2-1 me....wierd u enjoy flow over punches...thats crazy

Grady
04-24-2006, 06:28 PM
flow n enjoyment...yours was even worse than his

Odysius
04-24-2006, 06:29 PM
Hey this man he call him unstoppable with a record of zero to zero // gettin 1 - 0 i know he aint capable // well at least against me // cuz im the next lyric king // and im`a always bring the pain // is Jay and im the next Asian Fanatic // i only spit original rhymes no one even thought of it // when im done is KO with a 1 2 hit // You got avatar that has a picture of a mic // but i bet you dont even know how too spit on one right // im lyricly able too turn you dust // im`a smoke you up // like i do with my cali kush // Your too easy // i bet you can give the keyboard too my sister and let her type some rhymes // she`ll put you on blast you never wanna come back too this site // Im telling you boy //im not your average rookie // i study my rhymes like im a nerd bookie // this is why when im spittin // im gettin off on you like somethin vicious // i can taste the victory dam it taste delicious // Boy this rhymes a rap // coming with a victory // i hope you dont come back

yu didnt rhyme well at all justy kepp battling nd u'll elevate ok...dont be discouraged
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ran your mouth untill i spit 10 and all the sudden ur cryin bout word-play.....
it prolly would of helped if ya flow wasnt utterly obsurd and gay.............
not bad

how can i get slept on..when your verse knocks readers into anther slumber.
i dear u to start fresh 0-0..cuz ill leave ur record lookin like a one-eight-hundred-number.......1-800 loses
ehh...weak

i strick quick like lightin with a desert eagle that sounds like thunder....
honestly ur flows are more of track then waldo when he starts to wounder.....wheres waldo
ehh

this battle is what ur gonna gimmie right.......
oh n the gurls aint cumin cuz like another dude on this site ur jimmys white......rap world lover jimmy white sorry lil dick
lol ... i dunno i liked this line

my vote is unstoppable he made me laugh nd he's been battling his verse is more elevated than yung jay good battle both

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 06:30 PM
great thanks for explaining....

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 06:32 PM
thats it .......3-1.....

and my verse wasent the greatest but didnt feel needed to throw down something great...........

Grady
04-24-2006, 06:34 PM
Its not that it was bad...It was shit.

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 06:38 PM
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lollllllllllllll somebody please help stalking is beeing seen
ur acting 14 even tho ur age is a lie and ur battle record you suck

Grady
04-24-2006, 06:42 PM
yeahhh...at least i dont battle all newbs?

Grady
04-24-2006, 06:43 PM
You Dont Deserve A Responce... Sorry For The freepostin Mods...Talk it Up all You Want Unstoppable... with your record of 206-5

Unstoppable
04-24-2006, 06:46 PM
i have to battle newbs cuz like you u make excuses...but ill fuckin battle you but u want except cuz u dont want to end up losin......and then feel like shit for thinkin i sucked