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http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67337


http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...t=66477&page=5

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sry man, one of my boys kepts signing up for battles and doesnt know he actually then has to battle. I'll battle you if your still up for it. Just post in here if you still want to.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=826037&posted=1#post826037

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67653

A sorry nigga that I might go easy on as an exception
L aughing at your face as I you realize my deception

E xamples of this come when I don't even pack my Tech N9ne
X press ticket to heaven if I had been juicin' my death sign, Instead today I'd rather just raise myself atop a god shrine

G rimey nigga tryin to front on my ability, Let it be the last time before I show my irrational hostility, and prove to people your uncapable virility

A change now as I I set out to end you
L ike the muthafucker who tried to offend you, it was my mistake to think I could just spend you

E ven tha Pic of Tupac in your profile knows you can't compete, My style and flow is a little offbeat but thats why your my second defeat

X is the second to last letter,and it is an attention getter just like that fact that your a bed wetter

G rand Finale time as I lay down my final bar,I'm like Kareem Abdul Jaabar as I'm a basketball star and just a lowlife internet rapper is all you are.

ok first off bitch ass it aint pac its proof fool
now i know u rockin proof for ppl to think u cool

get serious, your raps is fake and basic
plus ya name is ignorance at its greatest

your rep power shows u aint very well liked
drop the mic,cuz son u blow more than a dyke

and how the fuck u aint gon know a pic of proof
when yo dumb mothafuckin ass is rockin one to

iight votes please ill rep whoever votes whether its fro me or for rebirth

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/member.php?u=18637

I was referring to the pic in your profile not in your avatar. And that is clearly a fuckin pic of Tupac in your Profile.

oooooooooooooooooooh i forgot i had that my bad dog

A sorry nigga that I might go easy on as an exception
L aughing at your face as I you realize my deception
As I you doesnt go together
E xamples of this come when I don't even pack my Tech N9ne
X press ticket to heaven if I had been juicin' my death sign, Instead today I'd rather just raise myself atop a god shrine
didnt go well together
G rimey nigga tryin to front on my ability, Let it be the last time before I show my irrational hostility, and prove to people your uncapable virility
ok
A change now as I I set out to end you
L ike the muthafucker who tried to offend you, it was my mistake to think I could just spend you
just spend you???you would have to explain that to me
E ven tha Pic of Tupac in your profile knows you can't compete, My style and flow is a little offbeat but thats why your my second defeat
dont admit that in a battle
X is the second to last letter,and it is an attention getter just like that fact that your a bed wetter
kinda rhymed
G rand Finale time as I lay down my final bar,I'm like Kareem Abdul Jaabar as I'm a basketball star and just a lowlife internet rapper is all you are.
i dont belive your a basket ball star at all

ok first off bitch ass it aint pac its proof fool
now i know u rockin proof for ppl to think u cool
kinda rhyme wasnt as bad as his opener
get serious, your raps is fake and basic
plus ya name is ignorance at its greatest
not bad
your rep power shows u aint very well liked
drop the mic,cuz son u blow more than a dyke
dykes would be known for being lesbians.....they lick not blow
and how the fuck u aint gon know a pic of proof
when yo dumb mothafuckin ass is rockin one to
good finish



Overall summary need more multiples could use more word play form both
but what getting better....Proof prolly could of done better if he reread though it be4 he sumitted it.....
Alex is showing improvement and didnt slip but a few times

Vote ALEX

p.s. we still need votes Rep will be given for every vote.
kronologic Vs Bishop
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67640
Bishop Vs Alex
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67559
Bishop Vs Fella'
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67653

A sorry nigga that I might go easy on as an exception
L aughing at your face as I you realize my deception
Ok but Weak opner!!

E xamples of this come when I don't even pack my Tech N9ne
X press ticket to heaven if I had been juicin' my death sign, Instead today I'd rather just raise myself atop a god shrine
huh?!! wheres the punches.... nope shitty!!!

G rimey nigga tryin to front on my ability, Let it be the last time before I show my irrational hostility, and prove to people your uncapable virility
multies??!! maybe.. and thats half of bar!! WTF

A change now as I I set out to end you
L ike the muthafucker who tried to offend you, it was my mistake to think I could just spend you
noooooo man... same word rhyme!!!

E ven tha Pic of Tupac in your profile knows you can't compete, My style and flow is a little offbeat but thats why your my second defeat
structure sucked ass ... why do always use half of bar... multies ok!!

X is the second to last letter,and it is an attention getter just like that fact that your a bed wetter
nooo WTF were u thinkin man??!!

G rand Finale time as I lay down my final bar,I'm like Kareem Abdul Jaabar as I'm a basketball star and just a lowlife internet rapper is all you are.
ok elementary rhyme... weak punch!!!


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ok first off bitch ass it aint pac its proof fool
now i know u rockin proof for ppl to think u cool
LMMFAO at 1st line =)) made me laugh... other than that the bar is weak!!!

get serious, your raps is fake and basic
plus ya name is ignorance at its greatest
naaaah

your rep power shows u aint very well liked
drop the mic,cuz son u blow more than a dyke
weak punch!!!

and how the fuck u aint gon know a pic of proof
when yo dumb mothafuckin ass is rockin one to
weak punch... structure sucked!!!

Damn!!! what a weak battle??!! Both need to work harder on punches and structure.... Proof's Rebirth had sum multies but they were forced weak...
I'll call it a tie!!

Man what do you mean when you say I only use half a bar? I just want to know why I fucked up?

Gotta give it to Alex G.. weak battle, weak punches.. Proofs had better multis but I didnt like

E ven tha Pic of Tupac in your profile knows you can't compete, My style and flow is a little offbeat but thats why your my second defeat

X is the second to last letter,and it is an attention getter just like that fact that your a bed wetter

Those just handed it to Alex G

alex g clearly
liked that one
was better then the one in ur other battle
alex g!

Man what do you mean when you say I only use half a bar? I just want to know why I fucked up?
means break your lines in a better way so people can enjoy reading your verse... you didnt fuck up... I called a TIE!!!
~1

vote alexg cuz he had better punches and vocab.........

punches-alex
multies-niether
wordplay-alex
flow-both
personals-alex
enjoyment-both

overall alexg

iight cool thanks unstop and the other ill rep ya just for voting on the battle

votes please

what u think of callin it a tie?
i'm still up 4 alex g as i said b4

this one was close, flow coulda been used better and the vocab wasn't quite there...

multis- ribirth
vocab- rebirth
metaphors- ribirth
personals- Alex
punches- ribirth
flow-Alex
opener- Alex
closer- ribirth

vote/ proof ribirth, just a lil better vocab and multis, some metaphors to

no hate, just honesty

Creativity: Rebirth
Multies: Rebirth
Personals: Rebirth (spelling name through out entire verse was nice)
Punches: Rebirth
Structure: Rebirth
Enjoyment: Rebirth
Overall: Rebirth

Vote: Rebirth
Reason: no hate Alex but i honestly think he won in all catz. this is not me saying you suck and he is sooo much better, this is me saying try harder, take more time, and study your opponent more.
Rebirth came hard fam....and thats why i voted for him.
Stay up to both

iight its 4 - 2 now uppin for votes

multis- rebirth
vocab- rebirth
metaphors- ribirth
personals- alex
punches-rebirth
flow-alex
structure-alex

vote-proof's rebirth. i honestly wasnt impressed here. rebirth you had some wierd ass punches, but it was enough to bring you through. the structure made it an eyesore, ruining your flow. however, alex, although more personal, was as basic and simple as it gets, im sorry to say. in each category rebirth won, he just seemed to top you with more effort (but a lot of it came off reeaaally forced). and wheres the multies?! anyway, keep tryin guys.

4 - 3 uppin

multis- rebirth
vocab- rebirth
metaphors- ribirth
personals- alex
punches-rebirth
flow-alex
structure-alex

vote-proof's rebirth. i honestly wasnt impressed here. rebirth you had some wierd ass punches, but it was enough to bring you through. the structure made it an eyesore, ruining your flow. however, alex, although more personal, was as basic and simple as it gets, im sorry to say. in each category rebirth won, he just seemed to top you with more effort (but a lot of it came off reeaaally forced). and wheres the multies?! anyway, keep tryin guys.

~Co-Sign~

This Dude Said It Perfectly. I Defo Agree. Not A Good Battle. V/ Proofs Rebirth.

4 - 4 tie uppin

multis- rebirth
vocab- rebirth
metaphors- ribirth
personals- alex
punches-alex
flow-alex
structure-alex

overall=alex mainly because he has better punches to me and proofs punches and flow was good but alex was better