Rules:
6-8 lines
3-0, 4-1, first to 5 wins
No d/r, hate, unexplained votes
200+ posts to vote / some experience in battles

Deadline = couple hours

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67223
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67214

checkin in' and G'luck



http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67429&page=3
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67332

Yo, So is that One Dude Krono-Logik-Fool//
But he should Come To and see he's Un-Logik-ul//
Just by his name duke you can tell this kats not Orange-A-Nul//(original)
But like a Junkie, My Syringe-BE-Full of Shit that'll make him Cringe-and-Pull//
Untill his Veins-Be-Full And hes left en-Cape-Able//
Dis Dukes a Fool-ta-Burned in hell, where the Truth-be-Learned//
Its Like Jail to whom concerns now let the Page-be Turned//
And let the Pagans burn inturn with Bishop LuceIfHer untill the truth be heard

Are you good or evil? Can't tell, so just leave us to guess
That this bishop 'ain't straight', like those pieces in chess
Disobeyed the God, and got banished to the depths of hell
So hopefully you'll find enough time.. to learn how to spell (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showpost.php?p=824205&postcount=31)
Light candles, wallow n shit, I'll draw plans to ploy ya soul
Coz we all know 'Lu is useless', like usin broken toilet bowls :(

:( .. i thought this guy was good ..

Vote - Kron .. all categories ..

^^ for Votes

Psssh I spit like 6 multis in a row at the end bunk that

^.. ya see ..problem is .. you really did'nt diss kron .. i mean .. nice multies i appreciate that .. and good flow .. but no punches ..

bishop got multies and flow but kron beat u in evry other cat....

aiight Its hard to diss people I never battled be4
and I had to go first so I had nothing to work with
w/e I respect everybodys opinion

Yeah nice try but kron took this one.

Catsweep kronologik.

I really wish people would break down there votes instead of the Ole
"you lose"

^.. yeah .. it hurts .. but this was easy you know .. you lacked a basic element ..

what was that not being a mod?

no..bein able to rap..faggit!!!!

I'll do a break down of your verse if it'll help you in future battles:

Yo, So is that One Dude Krono-Logik-Fool//
But he should Come To and see he's Un-Logik-ul//

^ Krono and Logik aren't seperate words. "Kronologik fool" doesn't match up syllabically and doesn't rhyme with unlogikal

Just by his name duke you can tell this kats not Orange-A-Nul//(original)
But like a Junkie, My Syringe-BE-Full of Shit that'll make him Cringe-and-Pull//

^ Orange-a-nul? I get the original side of it, but the actual term orange a nul does not make sense. The 2nd line isn't a diss directed towards me, it's just talking about yourself, which is irrelevant in a 1 on 1 battle. Multis were good

Untill his Veins-Be-Full And hes left en-Cape-Able//
Dis Dukes a Fool-ta-Burned in hell, where the Truth-be-Learned//

^ en-cape-able = incapable. You don't have to seperate singular words just to show that they match up with the corresponding words in the next line. 2nd line was too general, could have been used against anyone and wasn't really hard hitting

Its Like Jail to whom concerns now let the Page-be Turned//
And let the Pagans burn inturn with Bishop LuceIfHer untill the truth be heard

^ This also didn't diss me. You need to focus more on dissing your opponent, rather than talking about how you will do such and such against me. Avoid using similar line enders to previous lines, such as "truth be heard" and "truth be learned". Focus on making your multis match up as well