8-10 lines
first to 3 votes wins 2-0 is knockout
house rules on the rest






dropping links after you check in and drop links

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67411
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...3894post813894 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=813894#post813894post813894)
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...282#post824282 (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=824282#post824282)

Yeah lets do this

http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67332
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67337
drop by two hours from now that cool with you????if so checkin in

Im droppin' first right

I will if you want me to

Yeah strike first I gotta go out for a lil bit ill put up my verse fast though after u drop

This is a experiment Im not sure how its gonna fly but im rapping with 2 differnt personalitys I hope it turns out good....FYI BOLD is me Italic is (some guy)


*They Be Like* ~ Don't you son Kidz?, and not just some Kidz?, even tha dumb Kidz?,well what about that ONE KID Evilliouion (http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67546) ~*Yah I Done Did*
~Dont you think its crazy once agian you postin first?~
~Arent you afraid hes gonna take your work and use your words to revert?~
*Man I Aint afraid to post first on none of theze JerKs*
*They minds Iz Too MinI Like girl's Dresses and Skirts*
~So you got a Punch-Line, In-Mind, to give this bitch here some Hurt'N?~
*Naww I just Bust Ryhmes in Kind so niggaz vote'N can hurt'em*


/edit forgot to throw in some ~~ and ** where it was needed

FYI Evilliouion is a guy I knocked out for my first win.....
good battle...I think he may of bite alot of shit though im not sure but if he did'nt hes a damn good battler

shit homes just got back home writing it quickly now will drop ASAP

{intro} Eggs yolks in your eyes make your dead folks say goodbye
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~Dog ya text's-lame, plus my lyrics will wreck frames
~Only Bishop kids feel be at the Church of Saint James'


~Word string king, in full swing, bring heathens to eden with vocabularyz savoyz
~Know your the constabularyz boyz using zees to a untolerable degree


~Stop twichen' and listen, two personalities be NOVEL but I kick shit that make niggas GROVEL
~Eight to ten lines and you dropped seven so I'll drop eleven kinds of text based defecation


~Bogged down in convention got you perplexed, but im not one dimension
~Your just honorable mention dont get vexed witness my ascension


~Foreseen your fall, your flow makes me yawn, gimmicks can't match my verbal brawn
~Queen Mimick STALLED, SPRAWLED... King to C4... Bishop can see no more... now just my pawn


Please vote and stuff people its my one of my first rhymes and my first battle attempt ever so constructive critism would be okay.. good battle homie


Obviously the last line is a chess reference KING to C4 is a move in chess and C4 is an explosive, figured ppl would get that but you never know. And of course bishop= chess piece... Zee reference is just a reference to all the zs in his rhyme like "kidz"... the church thing is obviously a nod to bishops molesting kids in Churchs like the Priest scandal a few years back.. intro was just included to make that line bout the 11 lines make sense, it isnt apart of my battle just thrown in there.. stupid rhyme lol just thought of it.


Thanks

EDIT: trying to fix font size

Ahh I just realized I posted 3 links i had cut and posted for the DROPS section my real Links are HERE!

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67559
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67653

c'mon bishop, two personalities? u didnt even diss illmatic that would prolly be tight for the written rhymes section but not in a battle, im just sayin my opinion ok so my vote goes to illmatic620

Ight cool 1-0

A bunch of typos messed up my flow at some points but its all good last line was once again a chess motif
Queen-->King--->Bishop--->Pawn (...s are pauses, its suppose to be flowed staccato last line)

Blah...Weak Ass Battle....

Bishop:

Firstly, Fuck The 2 Personalitys...No Hate But That Shit Sucks...No Punches, No Personals...Really No Multis..Ive Seen Shit Better...At Least You Had Some Flow...

Illmatic:

Some Punchs N Personals..But, WTF? Some Things Didnt Even Rhyme..Comon Dude..I Know Its Ya First Time But At Least Rhyme (No Hate)..It Had Alright Flow But Some Of It Was Stretched.

OV/ Illmatic

Yeah im improvin :P wasn't my strongest shit should've spent more time on it i was busy last night though
2~0

LOL I never seen this guy rap and then agian I have no clue about any thing about this guy what was I supposed to do you guys are haters to the 1st degree but ok you know what kanye says hater niggaz marry hata bitches and have hata kids..........

Never Seen Me Rap? Here.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67024

Im No Hater. I Can Text.

illmatic obviously
you got some personals
that's bout it
illmatic!

Alright thanks sweet 3~0 my shit wasnt great but glad it was good enough, thanx lets close this shit

im not talking about u logical im talking about illmatic.......wtf am I supposed to punch on if he is new to the site?
So I droped some dope rhymes and this cat studied my shit for 4 hours then dropped and you voted for him and some of his shit didnt even rhyme............he might of won but come on duke has to drop first and knows nothing about the guy hes battleing but drops some flowin ass shit instead and illmatic comes from behind able to feed and really cant do anything with it.......I would of thrown in some krazy shit but he kept it basic and didnt even rhyme half the time AND STILL WON WTF

no mather how long the guy has been on the site, ur freakin battling
give it ur best!
pretty dumb to have this loss on ur record isn't it?
nobody will hold back on dissin u...

first off I give a fuck about my record
and second I did give it my best........
okay lets break it down....1 my shit was nice 2.his shit was full of comebacks that where simple in nature(AKA not relative at all to anything I said)
3rd this nigga took 4 hours to write after me and still didnt rhyme ........

Personals-Bishop(kinda wack...all he talked about was goin first)
Multies-Bishop(both werent that good...but bishops were decent)
Creativity-Bishop(Da 2 Different Personalitys)
Wordplay-None
Flow-Bishop(His Lines Were Shorter)
Punches-None that I Liked
Overall-Bishop

That nigga knocked me out but thanks for actually breaking it down to all CAts like its supposed to be done Logikal +rep'D

This battle is over, the thread is over.. I didnt take 4 hours to battle I rhymed my shit in like 10-15 I wasnt home when you dropped man

2ndly I touched on your name, your 2 personality bullshit, use of the word
"kidz" with the "z" constantly and the simplicity of your lyrics.
How is that not relative to what you said

"*Man I Aint afraid to post first on none of theze JerKs*
*They minds Iz Too MinI Like girl's Dresses and Skirts*

Was I suppose to rap about about skirts and how nice you are? I didnt have to drop the illest shit ever cause I realized you had no punches all I had to do was drop some basic stuff and it worked 3-0 good battle homie

Duke im not saying you have no talent you did a good job.........
and for another thing I didnts say Kidz and that was the only word that rhymed it was the word before kidz so it was 2 words in a row that fit.........................Kinda like Jew'ves HA song know what Im saying..................no hate you did a good job not dissing you.............We can do a round 2 if you want where you spit first and we will see what happens