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no TIE votes
3 - 0 ko
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ill get my links up in a bit

How many links of mine do you need? (I've only voted on something once here)

u need at least two

My Check-In Links:
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67671&page=5
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=828413&posted=1#post828413

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67696&page=2

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67747

Ha... did it in fifteen minutes...

I envelop in a kiln and bring him to tears in his closure
He can't even develop film...he's got a fear of "exposure"
I'm only pushing the things you "pull," breakin' your pleas
My lines ain't bilingual, but I'm still makin' you see (si`)*
Lines hard to grasp in one, so even butter'll laugh at ya'
I suffer through your drops, ya' flow's like gutters in Africa
All these lone chuckles since ya' can't "get it up" like low buckles
Plus ya' punches hit as hard as teddy bears with no knuckles
I don't usually bully kids, but now I'm fully murkin' sprouts
The bottomline: you're rap tips the scales... just ain't "workin'" out!

* he had some drop where he wrote half of it in Spanish: http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67738.

Waitin' on your drop...

u burn out, as soon as u hit, like the fire u spit
you got no punch, like an armless boxer bitch

all of your mothafuckin rhymes have less play
than a vanilla ice track from back in the day

step to me and ull be like a nigga with no game
because youll get shot down and have no brain (get no brain)

be an rectumless mothafucka and dont drop shit
cuz itll flop quick,like the belly on your pop's bitch (AKA YOUR MOM) LOL






Votes PPL and feedback on how to improve my verses would be appreciated

uppin for votes

Voting categories:
Intro-spitfire
Punches-spitfire
Personals-alex
Metas/Similes-n/a
Multies-spitfire
Wordplay-spitfire
Flow-spitfire
Creativity-spitfire
Humour-spitfire
Vocab-spitfire
Outro-spitfire

Overall-Spitfire



come vote for my battle


http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67781

Uppin For Votes

uppin for votes again

I envelop in a kiln and bring him to tears in his closure
He can't even develop film...he's got a fear of "exposure"

Ok opener. Kinda of played



I'm only pushing the things you "pull," breakin' your pleas
My lines ain't bilingual, but I'm still makin' you see (si`)*

Nice try you coould have palyed the spanish line beeter but it was creative

Lines hard to grasp in one, so even butter'll laugh at ya'
I suffer through your drops, ya' flow's like gutters in Africa

Nice

All these lone chuckles since ya' can't "get it up" like low buckles
Plus ya' punches hit as hard as teddy bears with no knuckles

HAha I like

I don't usually bully kids, but now I'm fully murkin' sprouts
The bottomline: you're rap tips the scales... just ain't "workin'" out!

Weak closer but all in all a decent verse



u burn out, as soon as u hit, like the fire u spit
you got no punch, like an armless boxer bitch

Nice flow nice opener

all of your mothafuckin rhymes have less play
than a vanilla ice track from back in the day

Kinda of played but a decetn shot

step to me and ull be like a nigga with no game
because youll get shot down and have no brain (get no brain)

Wiggity WACK

be an rectumless mothafucka and dont drop shit
cuz itll flop quick,like the belly on your pop's bitch (AKA YOUR MOM) LOL

Nice closer



All in All G had the flow nad the harder punches but Fire was more consistant and wrote a better verse. Also he wrote more so he was albe to hit you with more.

Vote = Spitfire

Wordplay: Spitfire
Punches: Spitfire
Personals: Alex
Flow: Spitfire
Closure: Spitfire(the momma shit is old)

Vote: Spitfire

iight thats 2 - 0 spitfire in the lead

uppin for votes

Oh I Thought I Voted On This... Nvm... Anywayz...

Flow: SF
Punches: SF
Personals: Blahh
Multis: Blahh
Wordplay: SF
Enjoyment: None Really.. SF If Any...
OV/ Spit Fire

you should look up some of his lyrics alex there where no personals he prolly thats prolly sombody elses text battle

probably but theres no proof so u neva know

ok so its 3 - 0

spit fire in lead

It's actually 4-0, count again...

you should look up some of his lyrics alex there where no personals he prolly thats prolly sombody elses text battle

STFU... I wrote this myself and I had no Personals against him since I just joined this site... bitch...

oh my bad spitfire u got 3 votes in a row so u won already
but dam calm the fuck down

iight yall mods can close this

Sorry, but I just get offended when someone accuses me of something like that when I spent my time writing it... it's nothing against you.

Nice battle.

thanks