View Full Version : (5) ((*Verse*)) vs (12) A.J Hustler


Vokals
05-12-2006, 10:43 PM
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G'luck

*Toby*
05-13-2006, 01:24 AM
check

A.J. Hustler
05-14-2006, 02:49 PM
lol, damn, first battle in so long and i get con, haha, check...and g/l me....lol

A.J. Hustler
05-17-2006, 11:34 PM
Your verses rub off on noone, your shit ain't contagious/
But I'll be top of the list of RW's saints and sages/
Painting pages worth of images showing your plain and lame shit..
Is getting more annoying than taxes they take from wages/
The 'southern storm's' passed, you a 'wind' that drifted in later/
You're less 'original' than my fav. cereal's 'different flavours'/
My rhymes are electrifying like I'm spittin' out tasers/
And you're only winning if voters are giving out favours...

*Toby*
05-18-2006, 01:36 AM
Battlings a "crazy cover up" thats "trouble"_they_say
Gen placed you against the best so he "hustled_ A_J"
Your *Verse* 'lacked' more 'Punches' than a 'Child_With_No_Arms'
The One punch you had 'struck me' just 'Mild_ With_ No_Harm'
Your Audios have 'no Strike', like a 'dojo_without_Karate'
'Conspiracy Theories' near me, so this must be 'no_doubt_Illuminati'
So I guess A.J Must nearly be "Jynxed" like a "unforunate Conspiracy_Witness"
I'm "Advancin", So go back to "find Links", this battle is Strictly_Business

pretty self explanitory punches.

TheKhan G
05-18-2006, 02:55 PM
punches-verse, aj seemed to have none and you seemed concetrated on making it flow and rhyme but there were no real punches to speak of. My fav verse punch was the second line.
personals- again verse.
multis-verse
vote-verse, verse started out well with his first few lines and then kind of fell off and did not have a closer that was good as his opening but, it was enough to win the battle becuase aj never really had a good punch or personal in his.

Flat ¶.
05-18-2006, 11:46 PM
Personal - Verse, "gen placed you against the best so he 'hustled_a_j'" --- Nice Line..
Multies - Verse, AJ Didn't Really Use 'Em.
Flow - Tie, They Both Flowed Well.
Punches - Verse, Each Of His Punches Hit Harder.
WordPlay - Verse, Creative Use...

Vote - Verse, Overall Better Drop.

Best Lines...
Verse - Gen placed you against the best so he "hustled_ A_J"
Your *Verse* 'lacked' more 'Punches' than a 'Child_With_No_Arms'
The One punch you had 'struck me' just 'Mild_ With_ No_Harm'

AJ - Your verses rub off on noone, your shit ain't contagious/
And you're only winning if voters are giving out favours...

*Toby*
05-19-2006, 01:25 AM
thank you both. 2-0