View Full Version : Da GrimReaper[-vs-]Genetic


Da GrimReaper
05-16-2006, 12:36 PM
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I'm here ...

… Doubt he’ll even show up and spit… If we lucky, like the Avy he might show Half-of-His-Face …
… And watch me ‘Get Rid of the G’.. While I’m ‘Mad He Crossed The Line’, He’s a ‘Dis-Race’(DisGrace) …
… Reply and u’ll Stutter & Lose, puttin ya lines in ‘Wrong Positions’ like Butter On Shoes …
… Cus ya words aren’t in formation (information)… like Cluttered Old News …
… Like building sites I’m getting ya ‘Dome’-Messed, Then I’ll turn u into a skeleton cus u haven’t been ‘Boned’-Yet …
… This shit’s a walk in a park, No-Sweats… Cus ya verses are less personal than Phone-Sex …

Uppin for ya verse ... Got til' the end of tha day ...

LoL ... No Show man ...

Genetic
05-18-2006, 06:32 AM
I Had An Exam Yesterday I'll Do My Verse Now...

Genetic
05-18-2006, 06:55 AM
Ok I Tried To Fix Up My Structure Bit In This Battle

Explanations:
- His Sig Says "Life Or Death" as a caption
-Wanted Me To Join His Crew F.A.M.E

Life Or Death? How Bout Fuck All Moronic Emcees, I Mean,..Your RHYMES-SUCK!
Hoping 4 A No-Show But I’m Here- So Like "Clocks Hanging On Walls" bitch your TIMES UP..!!
So Listen, I'm Quick Wit Sick Lines, U-GET-THROWN-UP-AND-STRUNG-OUT-FAST,
And Like A Tramp At The White House....DONE-UP-FUCKED-OUTCLASSED..!!
YOUR-DIRTY-PAST.....WONT-HIDE-YOUR-ASS......Coz I’m Hot Ur Jus SURPASSED,
Coz Ur Rhymes In Need Viagra - They “Limp” - YOU-ALWAYS-COME-UP-LAST..!!

Da GrimReaper
05-18-2006, 09:15 AM
Votes ...

Gawds Gift
05-18-2006, 03:15 PM
punches-tie
personals-grim
multies-gen
mettas-grim
humor-gen
structure-gen
vocab-gen
overall-gen

this was a real close battle and in the end gen had a stronger overall verse

Da GrimReaper
05-18-2006, 04:11 PM
Thanx for votin... 0-1

Da GrimReaper
05-18-2006, 07:31 PM
votes ...

Nauseam
05-18-2006, 07:37 PM
Breaking this down the right way

… Doubt he’ll even show up and spit… If we lucky, like the Avy he might show Half-of-His-Face …
… And watch me ‘Get Rid of the G’.. While I’m ‘Mad He Crossed The Line’, He’s a ‘Dis-Race’(DisGrace) …
1/5 Stretched
… Reply and u’ll Stutter & Lose, puttin ya lines in ‘Wrong Positions’ like Butter On Shoes …
… Cus ya words aren’t in formation (information)… like Cluttered Old News …
2/5 ok mutliples
… Like building sites I’m getting ya ‘Dome’-Messed, Then I’ll turn u into a skeleton cus u haven’t been ‘Boned’-Yet …
… This shit’s a walk in a park, No-Sweats… Cus ya verses are less personal than Phone-Sex …
3/5 good verse

I seen you do alot better 6/15

Nauseam
05-18-2006, 07:42 PM
Life Or Death? How Bout Fuck All Moronic Emcees, I Mean,..Your RHYMES-SUCK!
Hoping 4 A No-Show But I’m Here- So Like "Clocks Hanging On Walls" bitch your TIMES UP..!!
played line and no multiple 2/5 not 1/5 b/c of the personal
So Listen, I'm Quick Wit Sick Lines, U-GET-THROWN-UP-AND-STRUNG-OUT-FAST,
And Like A Tramp At The White House....DONE-UP-FUCKED-OUTCLASSED..!!
YOUR-DIRTY-PAST.....WONT-HIDE-YOUR-ASS......Coz I’m Hot Ur Jus SURPASSED, 2/5 verybasic yah it was a multi but nothing really to it
Coz Ur Rhymes In Need Viagra - They “Limp” - YOU-ALWAYS-COME-UP-LAST..!! 1/5 played line.....man Viagra verses is old school man


You should of said somthing about monica in the president line to make it more effectife......everything was kinda stretched and nothing grabed my eye it was more of the same old same old

5/15

Nauseam
05-18-2006, 07:46 PM
THIS BATTLE WAS NOTHING SPECIAL IM DISSAPOINTED IN BOTH OF YOU
GRIMREAPER BARLEY WON
YOU BOTH ONLY HAD 1 PERSONAL WITH THIS FEW OF LINES THIS BATTLE SHOULD OF BEEN ALL PERSONALS.

IF YOU ARE GONNA DO PUNCHES AT LEAST MAKE THEM FUNNY OR RELEVENT OR UP TO DATE..........NO HATE JUST TELLING IT HOW IT IS. IM NOT THAT GREAT MYSELF SO YOU CAN COME INTO MY BATTLES AND GIVE ME THE SAME CRIT. THAT WILL BE FINE WITH ME AS LONG AS YOU VOTE THE BATTLE HONESTLY

ArtificeD
05-18-2006, 07:58 PM
Yea it was alright...I've seen better from Grim Reaper Genetic came with straight punches and flow...personals were weak the rest was a tie...multies were weak as well but my vote goes to Genetic...Grim could have and should have came harder...no disrespect....dont sleep on these guys Grim...no homo

Vote-Genetic

Nauseam
05-18-2006, 08:04 PM
^^ you could of at least voted correctly ^^

My vote was 3 posts long....

Genetic
05-19-2006, 07:39 AM
2-1 Uppin

Vulger
05-19-2006, 07:54 AM
punches-gen
multies-tie
flow-tie
personals-nause
vocab-gen
humer-tie
consistent-gen
overall-gen

gen one this battle mostly cuz of vocab and good punches
nause came nice had a good verse didnt really lack nothin but still gen was slighty better

IllAssasin
05-19-2006, 02:47 PM
punches-grim
personals-grim
multies-grim
mettas-Gen
humor-gen
structure-grim
vocab-grim
overall-grim

yall came nice but in tha end its grim...

Gen nice work on the structure but ya need more work...
ya rhyme skeems have good intent but ya got to string em tagetha better..

fire verses all around good job